What is your opinion?
Beautiful n flowy story
"You just keep on reading n reading. Enjoyed it. Keep it up. Wish you luck. "
The Boy With A Black Hoodie
"This definitely has a good start to it. I love the plot so far, it has a nice flow to it and the transitions are really good. It's just some spacing and grammar for technical skills but overall, it is a good story so far. Great job!"
A Lot Can Happen
"Two chapters of the story that I have read made me want to read it some more. Author has been successful to keep the reader intrigued. I am pleased to recommend this book to YA readers. There were a few technical issues like punctuation, for instance. If you could look over through it, that'd be great. Well done!"
Good start
"This is a good start. I like the idea you have for this story. It's hard to give a good review off one chapter. Thus could be good, you just need to clean up your punctuation and Grammer a bit. This is good. Keep writing!"
The boy with the black hoodie.
"It's really much to early to leave a review for this tale, as there is only one chapter. However, we very much like the plotline, as it leaves room for all sorts of interesting things to happen. We also enjoyed the way the main character was written. We'd like to encourage this writer to continue, as they have talent, which is evident in the internal thoughts of the character that are full of confidence, and very amusing. Some punctuation and grammatical errors which could be easily fixed with a package like Grammarly."
The Boy with the Black Hoodie
"Firstly, your grammar needs work, there are missing commas, periods, spaces, and uncapitalized names. The plot is hard to judge since it's only one chapter so far, your descriptions are good and paint a solid picture of the characters but your environment could use more description. Keep up the good writing."
Very conversational
"I really love your writing style I mean I've read novels in autobiography style but yours was very conversational... It spoke to me! Drop it on my wall wen you add more"
More
"The plot is good, just like the flow of it. I'm in love with the characters and can't wait for an update. I hope you finish it because this is a diamond in the making. The only downside of the book is the grammar and punctuation. There's a lot of mistakes that take the focus out of the story. For example, the "I" you write as "i". The book needs a review focused on grammar and punctuation."
