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More chapters!!!!!

"I have read 7 chapters of this in another app but here only one chapter now get me all the chapters not only ONE"

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I was a bitch

"It was great now show more chapters"

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haven't read but sounds good

"so i haven't read this book but it sounds good and what the rest of the reviews say i think this book is going to be awesome."

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what happens next?!

"OMG this is such a good story. I want to know what happens next! Does she actually wake up and go home? do we get to meet Derek? Please continue this story!!!"

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Sensational Story

"*ALERT FOR POSSIBLE SPOILERS* Where to start? I don't know how to sum up this review, this story was absolutely sensational. Brilliant. Flawless. I loved every single bit of this story, it is truly amazing. I read this story in fifteen hours, it is magnificent. I loved everything about it, the plot, the characters, the way it was structured also the view it was told from made it remarkable, like you were actually listening to a life story, as if you were right next to Lacey or you were her. It felt so real. I was engrossed the whole way through. I would love it if this became a book. The plot was remarkable, a person in a coma coming out and realizing they remember nothing from a certain period of time and a special someone helps them get it back. I loved the twists you created throughout the whole story. The characters: I loved how you introduced every single one and how every single one had a relationship with the protagonist in some way after the incident. I loved how you portrayed Lacey. How she was before, but then everything for two years-poof-just gone in an instant. Finn, the first time he entered the story, to the last line of the story, he only cared for Lacey, he is the sweetest person ever. They truly are the cutest couple, even though they are not real, I still love the couple. Zoey, as soon as you brought her into the story I loved her, she is so cute, a seven year old bubbly, ecstatic, cute, lovable, highly energetic girl. Her relationship with Lacey and her brother made her the cutest little girl ever. Lacey's friends, how they expected her to be at the start and how she tried to fit in her previous role as she was before was great. James, giving Lacey an older brother was brilliant, it really made the story perfect, he was the caring one just like Finn, so he had someone to relate to even though they didn't meet till a few chapters into the story, well after Lacey got back home. Derek, once she remembered all the events I immediately despised him. He really did get what he deserved from Finn. I have a strong dislike for Derek, but I guess everyone would after reading this story. I loved every chapter. I thought about the ninth chapter when will she get out? And then around the fifteenth, when will she walk? I'm glad all my questions were answered. I loved how two chapters where dedicated to her and Finn in the past, it really made the both of them special and how they should be in a story this brilliant. I loved the way you put two parts of this story in Finns POV, it was great to see his side of things and what his actions and feelings were like in those periods of time. The things in the past Lacey remembered the things that were perfect to both her and Finn were magical and I loved both the Romance and Mystery in this story, again absolutely flawless. To finish this review off: I think people should read this because I couldn't stop once I started, it really drags you in and puts you in the passenger/drivers seat of this story. I related to some of the characters in ways I didn't think I could. This story is so inspirational, in my mind, so many things that inspired me. Being inspired was definitely the best surprise. Also this story always keeps you second guessing, thinking you know something then saying "No wait, this is right", but it surprises you when you find out. All in all, This is by far the best story I have read, hands down, there is no doubt I will read it again, countless times. I really hope this turns into a book and gets published. Absolutely sensational, there are literally no words to sum it up. Any word that means great, or best/better would be an understatement to how good this story really is."

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My Review Of I Was A Bitch

"Kudos go to emiisotherside, author of I Was A Bitch, a thoroughly enjoyable read as much as any other one I have encountered before, with particular attention to her conception of a plot so rich in love, (memory) loss, teen angst and discovering your true self after having endured so much at the cruel hands of fate. Further kudos are given her writing style as well as her technical writing skills, though her use of grammar could use a little work, but other than that not much else is needed. A truly enjoyable tale to be sure."

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Lovable

"I fell in love with the book as soon as I started. The characters are relatable and the storyline is great. I personally think this book has a lot of potential and the author did a commendable Job, you need to read it to understand what I'm saying. Kudos, expecting more from you."

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I LOVE IT!!

"This story is so nice and you will fall in love with it, it gives hope and it has a really sweet sense so I do really recommend it (:"

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lali

"i love this story once you start reading you cant stop, must read i tottaly suggest the people out there to read this book , wish you all luck emily"

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I Was A

"Needs some tweaking. There is a slight issue with the timeline in the first chapter posted."

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Great Read - Cute Story

"I really did like this story. Lacey Amanda Jones is very well written. It's a story about a girl who didn't like who she was but wasn't really sure how to change that and still get what she wants. Then there's Finn. What or who is he? Her gay BFF, some stalker guy who takes pictures of her or the love of her life? I really enjoyed this book . It is definitely one everyone should read. The only problems I had were the grammatical and word errors. There are parts of the book that don't seem to have been proofread. They weren't so bad I that it ever stopped me from reading."

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Awesome book!!

"After reading the first 7 pages, i am already in love! This sounds like a great book and I really like the concept of it and it sounds interesting how she can't remember 2 years of her life before the accident!"

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Fine

"Plot is quite fine, but the manuscipt needs more work. Too few characters in the starting chapter, but that is also fine, but you should develop more, like you did for Derek with a clue. The title is enchanting for some, but could drift some readers away."

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Started off really well

"At first I was reading this and I thought “WHAT A GREAT STORY” this was gonna be . I loved how it started off. Lacey was in a coma for 2 months woke up with a 2 year memory loss. I felt like this was going to be great, trying to figure out all the secrets from her friends, family and boyfriend. I myself had monkey’s jumping up and down when her “friend” Finn was around. As her memory was giving her hints to the life she had before the accident I was on the edge of my seat. 60% of the book was read and that’s when I realized the secrets weren’t as great as I hoped it would be. Surprise!!!!!!!! It was basic High School Drama.. Derek (her actual boyfriend) was a big self absorbed football jerk, her best friend Melissa was sleeping with the big jerk behind her back. And Lacey and her friends were the biggest Queen Bitches at school. (not really the greatest secrets). Lacey ended up staying with Derek for a scholarship to NYU. Really?! That was a bitch move???…I am still questioning it. FINN actually was the one Lacey was in love with. Ummm Duh!!!! He was perfect. I think the concept of the book has potential, but the secrets weren’t as good as I would of hoped. Maybe if Melissa ended up pregnant or Derek did something alittle more horrible then drinking and drugging her. Not say drugging Lacey wasn’t bad enough but her almost being pregnant and him worrying about football wasn’t a great secret. Maybe her finding him doing something as awfully incriminating like walking in on a rape or something REALLY horrible. The writing was really good a few spelling corrections but otherwise, I like the writing. I just didn’t really like the last 25% of the book. Definitely not the ending I was hoping for. I will have to try to find another one of Ms Rubens other stories. Maybe something with a better ending"

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Jordan Young

"Someday soon I will publish a book just to get Jordan Young to write a review for me. When that day comes I insist he uses: https://www.thesaurus.com/ You´re welcome! Read a real book, dumb fuck! P.S.:Who is the bitch now?"

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