What is your opinion?
I really enjoyed this.
"I hope you update more chapters because I'm loving this book!"
Just amazing.
"I don't really read books as I never have time with writing myself and looking after my three kids. However, I started reading this a couple of days ago and fell in love. You really are a fantastic writer, and I can't wait to read more. Well done đđŸxxx"
Intriguing and satisfying
"Wow, this is really good. I love the different point of views, showing me into each character's heads and reminding me that there's more than one side to a story. Although there are a few mistakes, I can understand it well and there isn't too much need to fix those grammar/spelling mistakes. I can't wait for the next part!"
In the dark
"Very enjoyable, although the gramma could use some work I found this book very good. I really like the authors writing style, they have a very good way with words and know exactly how to use them."
In the dark
"I found this story very good , I really enjoyed reading . I found that although there grammar where a few grammar mistakes here and there , the plot and the authors writing style were very good . This a very good book and I would recommend it to people who like this sort of book . Overall a very good read ! ."
Unique with freshness
"The story is not your average one. The set up, the struggle to fit in is real. The author is very talented. Her poems are also out of the world. Only few words read this soon as possible."
In The Dark
"I really like where this is going... So far, it's amazing and has a lot of potential. I think the only that needs work is the grammar, punctuation because it makes it hard to read. But author, you got this!!"
In The Dark
"Punctuation is misused, but nothing too major. I love how the beginning on the book unravels! So mellow! The drama is what caught my eye as well. Emthe end of every chapter had my fingers ready to flip to the next page. Great job! I would recommend this book to anyone who likes reading different genres. "
In the dark
"Tour book is amazing your writing style is too I highly recommend this book to the others to read they will enjoy it as I did there are some few punctuation mistakes but np ."
Very interesting
"First of all, congrats- I really enjoyed the 7 chapters you have published so far! I rarely get surprized when I read something, I usually anticipate what is going to happen, but there were several occasions where your story made my eyebrows raise, so very good. I did very much enjoyed the plot and I am looking forward to seeing what will happen next in the story. Just a few minor notes: 1. This is more of a personal preference, but I feel like the story could benefit from a past tense story telling (maybe it's just me). 2. Look out for spelling, a few occasions where names and sentences weren't capitalized. 3. On some of the chapters is doesn't say at the start from whose perspective it is and it is a bit confusing for the first 1-2 lines. Overall, enjoyed it very much, keep doing what you are doing."
In The Dark
"From the first few chapters, up until chapter 7, have been amazing! Your writing style, chapter length and the point of views are exceptional. The only issue is that there is a few errors with punctuation. There are missing contractions and capitalization of letters and etc. Other than that, I highly recommend reading this book! :)"
In the Dark
"I was drawn into this plot. I am really curious to find out what happens next. A bit of a slow start but I love the build up. I think the female and male lead have a connection she just doesnt know it . They seem to share a similar home life as well. I can already tell that them coming together is not going to be so simple.Hope to read more soon. "
Awesome
"I have read chapter one and so far so good I enjoyed it but, try to make it more understandable to the readers, it's kinda clamped up. The story is awesome and I will continue reading. Good luck lovelyđ"
Good (Chapter 1)
"It got to the point but it wasnât engaging there was a lot of I. I would say, to start right in the moment. For example, like a car crash - the first person is very hard but I would say to try and avoid to use I in everything. I could see a lot of Iâs. Also the text was too clumped up. Itâs not helpful for the reader. Itâs a good start but it needs work. Well done đthere was no grammar mistakes. "
In The Dark
"I like the chemistry between Ben and Eve. I also like how the author spaces the sentences so that the paragraphs don't look so crowded, and is easier to read. I enjoy how instead of saying stuff, the author describes it. Even though there's a few grammar mistakes, the story is still enjoyable and readable."
In the dark
"I enjoyed reading the first few chapters and looking forward to read more. Now, that is only my opinion but I found it a bit strange, bordering to creepy the way Ben acted. I mean he only met her a few hours ago and he gets into her car? The drama is good and the plot seems interesting. Grammar and punctuation needs some work though. Overall, it is a good read."
Pretty good
"Hello, Needs a little work on grammar, and is a bit confusing on chapter 8. However this is very good and a fantastic read. I would recommend to just about anyone."
In the dark
"The story is good. I got hooked up in the first chapter. The way you described Eve and Ben's first meeting, I thought Eve already knew Ben since he came back again and all. I felt like the story was rushed, maybe it would be nice if you slow down a bit. But that was completely my opinion if you thought of writing that way then it's fine. Overall it's a good story and I wish you all the best for your future writing, looking forward to the next chapter. Enjoy writing.đ"
That escalated quickly!
"In an awesome way. I honestly tough I wasn't going to like it because the first part is so gray. You start with a character and a situation that don't stand out in any way so I doubted you for the first chapter dear author. I was so wrong! You bring out so much drama and possibility so fast its like a whiplash after the first chapter. You work is obviously focused on your characters personalities and you are doing a great job at revealing them piece by piece. I found the male lead fascinatingly ugly. I hope that was what you were going for, it reminds me of realism books. The first person POV works great for this. I saw some comments on the show not tell and asking for more descriptions but if you are going for a character study I don't think is really necessary and sometimes people forgets that first person POV is unreliable, what your character is telling also shows his personality. Like how he tells that he feels guilty but his previous stream of tough is a justification of his actions. The gap between those makes him look a bit creepy and immature. I think is awesome and can't wait to see how his little obsession develops. Things you can improve is a lot of typos in your work and a few wrong choices in words. Editing it a bit more can fix that easily. Great work!"
4/5
"This is a good story and the plot is great (even though I don't know the full plotline yet,). This story captures the reader and makes them fall in love with the book. Yet I cannot ignore some minor grammatical errors, you forget to capitalise the name ben at times, and punctuation is sometimes misplaced. Also, instead of telling the reader some things like 'he is thinking of her', let them realise it by your descriptive writing. (which you expressed greatly at other times.)"
