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Her Life

"Tender story and very mad and at times horrid and bad and whoo we do not know when the ordeal of childhood would end. What has happened the story is good a living proof we do have stories that end nicely not without something called rolling of the drums."

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Her Life

"This story was perfectly written and very deep 🦋❤️ Well, done 🤗💞✨ -Kookie 🍪💕"

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Her Life...

"Okay so this was really amazing. I really liked the writing style, it was unique and creative. The struggle of the family was described very vividly. Overall it was excellent and worth reading..."

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Real Hardships

"Hard to rate a piece like this, it's more of a message, and a tale of hope through despair at the same time. I am at a loss for words myself. This piece makes my mind think a bit, and be thankful for my own upbringing."

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Her life

"The way it's written is very different and very deep. It more dense than a usual story. Great work!! "

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Extreme Vulnerability

"If you are in the mood for a deep, personal look into a person's life, this is the story for you. The format was a tough sell... all the ellipses... got under my skin a bit... but the voice was unique and compelling for all that. Please keep writing!"

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