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Accidental Passion

"It is a great subject and explained in a natural form. A little struggle but I hope for a happy ending "

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Becoming Mrs montegory

"The heroine is still nervous and we know very little about the hero especially his character . Excellent story so far."

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Review

"This book deserves five stars in every category! I love all of the intricate details and the way that I can really imagine all of the characters. Also I love how there was an introduction to all of the characters as it helped make it easy to keep up with who was who.. The writer is clearly very talented. I am obsessed with the characters, I especially like Jack. You should definitely read this book, you will not regret it, it is amazing!"

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ACCIDENTAL PASSION

"Cant enough of this story!!!! So keep on updating "

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Awesome story

"Great job i can't wait for your next update."

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What starts in Vegas. . .

"Tags: WIP, Review Swap, Read to Chapter 5 (That's all at the review) ^^Pros^^ I enjoyed the story so far, classic friends heading to Vegas to have a good time. Dragging the responsible one back to blow off some stress and get out of the winter wonderland they were living all in. Characters are well written, and the setting is sound enough to follow where the author leads. Once I got started, I found I wanted to keep turning the pages. ^^Cons^^ At this point is that there are only 5 chapters. This will change as the author adds more to work. ^^Best Line^^ "Oh, Beckett, what did you do last night. . . " - Beckett. ^^Overall^^ A good piece of work. I hope the author keeps working on this piece."

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Accidental Passion

"Usually, I don’t read these types of books because their plots were always the same. However, you have added your special touch to your book, and I am absolute hooked on the book. The buildup of the events, the character developments and your description and writing style were just phenomenal which made me continue reading and not leave it! I loved your work and can’t wait to read more of your work! Keep up the amazing job. "

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😍characters and their traits

"I just started reading this novel but, am already overwhelmed at its goodness. Everything in it just gives me a great imagination. Am in love with the characters, I feel that they match the story - love Becklet more😘. And I love their character traits too and how they were described. "

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Good punctuation? I think I'm in love

"The past few books I have read on this app have been pretty decent. They were good enough, but this author sure knows what she's doing. The first paragraph had me swooning! I'm a sucker for descriptions and this book delivered in only four chapters! I've been around the block a few times, I'll admit, but when I read the description I was a little worried. I have read so many just okay famous guy x not-famous girl fics that I was having flashbacks to seeing emojis and blocky paragraphs. This book restored my faith in these types of books. I cannot wait to read some more!"

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A girl's weekend flipped upside down!

"Personally, I'm not a huge fan of romantic stories but this one has gotten me by the scruff. The world building done by Ultimate created a world that was able to support a imaginative and fun cast of characters. The situation Becks finds herself in made me take pause because I felt her embarrassment in my core. So far, this has been an enjoyable experience and I cannot wait to read more. If you're looking for a fun adventure in world that just comes to life through words, then I highly recommend " Accidental Passion"."

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👏 👏 👏 well done!

"This is soo good. Loved it can’t wait for more from u. U r doing a great job 👍 "

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Accidental Passion

"Still early in the book but it has me intrigued. Characters are well developed and the story is really starting to advance. Looking forward to where the writer takes us with this one."

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YASSSS QUEEN

"I really love this book. The details the author uses to describe everything are amazing, it feels like I was pulled into the scene. Though the details were not to overpowering as well, they did not stray to far from the plot which is awesome. You really balanced it out perfectly. The story keeps us entertained as well as giving us some excitement. I really enjoyed Becks and Jacks dynamic, it is always fun to see flirtation in the air. To sum it all up author really awesome job on it as well as good punctuation and grammar!😇😁 "

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Accidental Passion

"Oooh I'm in love with Jack and Beckket. Enjoyed this story so far. Will be waiting for the update."

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Accidental Passion

"Absolutely awesome. Great start that promises an awesome story. Very well written and the characters build up is just perfect and not rushed. Love how the flow of the book draws you in. I can see the author doing amazing stuff in this story. Give it a read and I'm sure you'll agree."

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Accidental Passion

"I like the way you introduced the characters, I do however suggest that you include their physical appearance i.e. hair and eye colour etc. so as to give the imagination a little something to work with. I love the plot and look forward to reading more "

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