What is your opinion?
The life of a teenage vampire
"Very good so far, consider a greater word count but over all a good read. "
Good story!
"This story definitely had more texture to it, a very nicely structured plot, and some intriguing characters. I found myself enjoying the read as the authors detailed descriptions allowed me to sink into it. I liked the way the vampires were introduced here, although it left me with some questions and the occasional eyebrow raise. Overall, I enjoyed it! Only thing that did bother me a bit were the misspellings scattered here and there, and some grammatical errors. But, it was easy to overlook as the plot was good! "
AMAZING!!!!
"Very interesting plot, I do wish the chapters were longer but it’s ok. Every chapter brings me wanting more and more. It’s just so exciting and I want to find out what’s gonna happen. You delved right into the plot which I like, details are very important and grammar is pretty well in here. Good book author!"
The life of a teenage vampire
"The first chapter was definitely intense 😳😳😳 I DID NOT SEE THAT COMING ❣️ I felt that guy was being too generous tho 😂😂😂 However, if I was in her situation, I would've probably pray to live as well 🤣🤣 Anyway, I can see that your story is about to take on an epic journey 🦋💕 So, I've only read two chapters so far 📚💞 Tho, the writing style isn't something that I usually prefer, but this story just automatically changed my mindset 🤯🤯 So, good job 👍❤️👍 Hope to see you writing more stories like this one 🤗💞✨ -Kookie 🍪💕"
The Life of a Teenage Vampire
"The book started off really well with great descriptions and pulled me in, but then the book started to feel really rushed and the ending left me feeling disappointed. I feel that the story could have gone on for longer with more explanation of Rick and why he did what he did etc. It could have been a better story if it had been fleshed out a bit more. It had a great start tho 😊"
Good job
"The author has a way with words. You can see it early on. The first chapter is a great hook, albeit very short. Still the author creates a solid tone for the beginning of the book with solid word choice. It could be upped a little bit by making the chapters and the detail longer, maybe diving into the feeling and emotion of the characters a bit more. If the author used the same detail to describe the setting and emotions of the characters as they did in describing the physical appearance and action in chapter one, we would have a fantastic book. Still this is a good read. A couple clean ups on the grammar/punctuation and you are doing an excellent job. Keep it up."
Good
"The plot you chose is good. But first of all, you might wanna write more to a chapter. Your chapters are too small. At least try to write 1500 words for each chapter. You are good with the words and delivery. Just try to extend it a bit more and let the readers feel what you feel. And then there are spelling mistakes and punctuations misplaced but you can correct them when you proofread but try to upload an edited chapter which makes it better for the reader. Overall nice story, keep up the good work and enjoy writing 😊"
