What is your opinion?
The wrong train
"This book definitely kept me hooked! I loved the writing style throughout the book! Great job!! :)"
Promising
"This writer has a unique way of writing. It's like building a puzzle. It may seem like you're struggling to put the pieces together, but then you see the picture and you smile. The storyline is not clichéd, that I can mark out. "
I Loved It
"She is so lucky to have her loved ones with her in the end. I loved the whole story. Those who needs a romantic, lovely, comforting piece of art to go through, I strongly recommend this to them. 💖💖"
Excellent.
"Literally like- the best story i’ve ever read till date. -The writing style was excellent, the words used were magnificent, hence making it easy to understand and read. Hopefully ill continue reading your stories. It was an excellent story, Thanks. "
OMG
"The plot is all so good.. But you have some grammatical errors here and there.. but it's ok.. And I loved Sophi's Sis' character. A girl in a boy look.. sounds incredible.... And If this Daniel is gonna come up with anymore nasty business I'll make sure that his nose bleeds. Soph is a good character, and Lucas is so loving, caring, understanding guy.. I LOVE THE STORY SO MUCH"
Love this book
"I really love the start and the scenario that is formed from the beginning itself. This book contains a hard life of a girl who tries to make it better. I simply love this book. The lesson I got from this book is 'Never give up in life and always speak from the heart' Overall ; Love the book -Sanu-"
A Train for Lost Souls
"The Wrong Train is a quintessential contemporary story of a young girl who's seeking what it means to be yourself. You have an interesting set of characters especially Lucas. Stories like these can easily grab a reader's attention, that's why your story's idea is highly commendable for the YA genre. I do agree with some reviewers here who said that there's something with the style it was written. I didn't mind those though because I usually look into the heart of stories and yours is about finding one's identity and purpose. I won't delve more on the technicalities, surely more people has already seen this and you should be proud of your work. Keep writing author! I can't wait to read more stories from you. :)"
Nice concept
"The story keeps you guessing what's going to happen next, it's about a young girl who can't be herself because of the people around her. I'll definitely recommend this story for young adults who are also struggling with character and identity. Although there are some light errors in the writing that I believe can be fixed by editing."
The Wrong Train
"I just started reading this and I have to say it has an amazing plot that just keeps me reading and wanting more. I love the dynamics of the situation the main character finds herself in. And even though I've only been able to get through the first few chapters. I positively love this piece and will be reading more."
Why do you make it so good. 😊
"I love it I think it’s amazing 🤩 "
Capture by the prologue
"Like the heading says, totally love the idea of train metaphor, read a few chapter and can't wait to continue. Sophia's character is mysterious, can't wait for her to shine past her family problems. I see two trains Noah and Lucas, anticipating anticipating see which is the right train. You have a great work here, keep it up. 😉"
Intriguing plot
"A very cool and intriguing plot. Loved it, keep on going can't wait to finish reading the whole book!"
Can’t wait for more!
"I think it’s a great way to start a story! I find the analogies/metaphors of the train station deep. The character was immediately relatable, what with the constant reminder of needing to hide her true self and behave in class, pay attention, do-this-do-that! I can’t wait to read more, the writing style is great, the plot is intriguing, and just lovely all around!"
Another great story!
"I think the concept of this story is an interesting one. Life is sort of like a train ride. I love the intensity of the plot as well and how mysterious and solemn it is. This is one of those stories that you'd want to read on a glum, rainy day by the window and with a hot beverage by your side - and I mean it in a good way! The only issues I found throughout the chapters were (as others have pointed out) the grammatical errors and etc. A few minor tweaks and you'd have the perfect story! It's not the end of the world if a story has grammatical errors (I'm not perfect myself) but it is always good to get public opinions to improve our future works."
Review of The Wrong Train Prologue and Chapter 1
"I was immediately hooked into the story due to the author's use of prose within the prologue which makes the reader sympathize with the protagonist. It helped me to better understand the character's mannerisms in chapter 1 and root for her. Sophie just wants to stay out of trouble and not be mischievous. However, it seems to be attracted to her just as much as she is attracted to it. The author's use of the word "behave" (a constant reminder that the character tells herself), really hammers the tone of the story home. I hope things look up for Sophie as I further progress within the story."
The Wrong Train
"I love the way you explore the emotions of the characters. The plot of the story is also excellent. Can't wait for your next stories :)"
Wow!
"The book is undeniably a great read and I can very well see reasons for the appreciation it deserves! The MC is wonderful and relatable, something that I find quite tough to pull off, so great job at that author! The pace of the story is notably outstanding and I loved how the author has kept her chapters short and concise, without missing out anything seemingly significant!"
Mysterious!!
"Thank you for reviewing my book... I read your book the wrong train and I like how you started. The characters are nicely depicted and their is a mystery which makes it even better. There are minor errors with conjunctions and punctuations which can be easily corrected. Would like to see how the story goes ahead. Great work!!"
Excited!
"I really loved it so far. I am really excited to read more, see where the author takes it to. The suspense in it about the things really make me curious to know more about them soon. Waiting for the next chapter!😊😍"
Review
"First of all it's a story that's starting so though it barely has chapters, still will point out some things so you can improve. Then first of all, this is a highschool story, the girl is quite shy and she is lovely. Well I found her lovely and cute in her own way. The writer took its time and dedication on every little detail which I like. Stories with details are the best. The flow and structure are nicely done. Small minor mistakes that can be edited once you finish the story. So there's no issue their. The story development will progress nicey, so I reccomedn to make it a long nice story so every reader can get a feeling of what they will experience and how they will grow. Kudos to the author and well done!"
