What is your opinion?
Delightful Beef Witch You
"What a wonderful story! I really enjoyed the characters as you introduced them. Especially Officer Derek... he sounds yummy! Savvy is a sassy, feisty witch that can handle her own. I wouldn't want to be on her bad side. Loved the outcome. Wish there was more. Well done! I definitely will share this book. Looking forward to reading more from this author. "
Beef witch you
"One of your greatest books you have written. You took us on an incredible Journey with Savannah. We finally learned she was a a mixture of things and not just human. Happy she ended up with Dereck and love her elements of fire and power. Being a princess looks great on her and she is smart intelligent and you wrote her character exquisitely! So happy that I follow you and I couldn’t have read a better book by a phenomenal author. ❤️🙌🤗"
Amazing!!! ^_^
"I have to say, this story is seriously amazing. I love fantasy already but this really reminded me of Once Upon A Time or Grimms' Fairytales somehow. Absolutely loved it, well-written and relatable characters made me want to keep reading! LOVED IT"
A Light-Hearted Delight
"Most notable so far is the compelling character interactions! I'm especially curious about the disagreement between Beatriz the protagonist. Speaking of, I very much appreciated the characterization of the protagonist, and found her to be delightfully sassy and energetic. My only critique is to continue to improve upon the technical elements of this story, as I detected a few grammar errors throughout the text. Overall, an enticing read rich with fantastical three wish spells and other folkloric, light-hearted delights!"
Fun, light read
"I really enjoyed this story! I thought the main character was sassy, fun and full of spunk. I'm curious to see what happens between her and Beatriz. Does their little squabble escalate? Does Beatriz try and steal something else from Savanah or try to replicate the three wish spell? I'm so excited to read more of the story and find out what happens. :) One suggestion I have is to work on showing, not telling. I think this can sometimes be hard and can take a lot of work (I struggle with this sometimes too). I would look at each section and try writing the scene as if it's happening right now using as much detail as possible. Also read lots and lots of books in the genre you want to write. This really was a wonderful story! Can't wait to read more of your work. :)"
Review swap
"First, I just want to say that even though the cover of the book is quite simple, I really like it. I also just love the title, it's clever and funny and just really fits the story so well. I loved the voice of the main character and I enjoyed the style of the writing overall, though there were some weaker moments, like when Savvy was telling herself to chill around Officer Stone in her head. Something about it just felt kinda forced to me because she did it so often. There were also some punctuation problems, and the biggest one that I remember was when there was kind of a monologue from Officer Stone and the quotations should have been used like this: "najfhkafhfihijaiosj. fjksdfihuihwe. "sfnknsdlkfnl. sdufkwfnwekjnwe!" But instead were used like this: "fdsnlfoewihroenewlknir" sdlkfnweljrewilgn,wefnewi" I hope the difference is clear. I enjoyed the story, it really was very unique, and I wish you the best of luck and look forward to hearing from you on one of my stories!"
REVIEW
"I have never read something like that. It was new for me but I liked it. It is well written. Good Work! "
Beef Witch You
"I loved it. I've never read anything like this before. I'm rather inclined to werewolf books but I really enjoyed this."
