What is your opinion?
laughed my ass off
"So I liked the story. I think because it's a humor and a romance it compliments one another when those awkward moments happened. I was told to be quiet from how much I was just rolling on the floor gaining a six-pack. Lol."
Interesting. Still reading 👍
"I love the fact that even if the main character felt all alone on the insides, she still took a step of courage, doing her thing here and there, that justs makes life beautiful "
Soo damn relatable
"Ohh goddd....I finished it within 24 hours i want moreee of this.......how will story to.......will there be more chapters to it....I'll look forward to it if there are i wanna read more now ......female lead's personality was just like me shy but very sociable when around right person. Being 18 yr old myself and looking forward to my college days I hope I find great friends like she got and enjoy my college life with them"
Best story ever
"I like when u brought her Sebastian together again"
Excellent
"The story is great. I didn't like the blurb or the prologue but I enjoyed the story. I was surprised when I liked it because I thought it would be another boring cliche. But there was just something uniquely interesting about this story. It had a juvenile vibe (in a good way) and there were at least three mistakes in each chapter (grammar-wise) nothing that a minor SPaG edit can't fix. All in all a great story. Loved it!"
Loved it!
"It is hard for me to find mistakes. A few grammatical mistakes are fine. You can edit them later. I don't know what else to say. I am having mixed feelings. Keep writing!!!!"
Destiny
"Nice novel I would probably like part 2"
Great light-hearted book
"Can't wait to read the rest (fingers crossed)"
Uni: A high or a low?
"Lol! Never could I relate more with it! I'm off for college in a couple of months and hope to God this is something that I get to experience! I loved how the author portrayed the insecurities and the beliefs instilled in you from childhood. The story is vibrating with energy and anticipation which is really what a good book is based on. Can't wait to read more of this!"
Destined to meet
"I like the story. It was nothing unique but it was a good read. Your writing style is great. I didn't find any grammatical errors. Great work!"
Destined to Meet
"Hello! I hope you will take all my feedback with a grain of salt, and only make the changes that you feel comfortable making! Firstly, the reason why I gave the plot 3 stars is because I think the plot of the story is not the most unique. This story feels a little cliched and stereotypical, which is in itself not too bad, but the execution of these familiar tropes lacks nuance and style. Bringing in some special twists and turns could make your story stand out, and make your plot a lot more interesting. Secondly, I think your writing style is pretty solid. It's easy to read and understand, and provides details of your story with good clarity. One thing that you could stand to work on is dialogue, as your character's dialogues and interactions can feel quite stilted and awkward at times. Working on making them more natural could add more fluency to the general progression of your story. Another thing to consider would be your paragraphs. While I do understand that you have paragraphs, it would be good to leave a line in between each paragraph to make your story simpler to read. There are a few spelling errors here and there, but those can be easily remedied. I noticed that the main character's name has changed from Amaryllis Whiper to Amaryllis Shaw somewhere in the novel. I'm not sure if it was intentional, but I'm pointing it out in case it is a mistake! All in all, your story has good potential! I hope you continue to work on it, and always try to improve your writing. Best of luck! Ps, your book cover is super cute. Love!"
