What is your opinion?
Neema the Light
"This is a fantastic start, and well begun is half done. I love how Victor is a half-vampire. so he's got all the immortal stuff and flight powers of a vampire, without actually being evil. Neema is great too, I can't wait to see which monsters she has to face, and I love your concept. Keep up the great start, Sofia"
Amazing
"Pulled you straight in. The only thing to watch is to show not tell and then your paragraphs would be a bit shorter. Other wise great job and look forward to reading the rest."
Amazing!
"I like the way you describe her fight with the ' BEAST'. The book only has one chapter so i cannot comment on the plot but only by the first chapter i can tell that the book is amazing!"
Neema the light
"This isn't my usual genre but I was intrigued by the characters, especially Neema. Definitely wanted to know where the story is going."
Neema the light
"I really love this book, the action, suspence and foundation Of the book is very compelling, it is very rare to see a Nigerian female as the main role in a novel especially in such platforms. Overall the book is very entertaining and just makes u want to read more. Please keep up the great work."
Neema
"There are a lot of grammar and punctuation mistakes throughout the chapters so far, that took me out of the story. May I suggest using a free online editor to take care of the majority of those? Other than that, It is a good attempt at world-building, with half-human half-vampire creatures that to me were new. However, the writing felt stilted in many places, especially the sex scene. I love that your MC is a person of colour, which you don't see often, and that she's powerful herself. The plot with her ex is also intriguing, but overall, the writing needs work. Keep up the hard work!"
