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Its amazing, I love the style and the cuts the author gives to the plot this is an supercalifragilisticexphious novel

"Its a amazing thriller. I am in love with this precious piece of writing. It truly leaves me spell bound."

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Good read

"Hi much enjoyed the story. A few grammar issues but easily solved."

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Very good spy novel!

"I thoroughly enjoyed this book! The plot started a little slow, and the pace wasn't as quick in the beginning, but once things get going, it's hard to put this down. There's action, mystery, humor, and the characters are fleshed out well. This could use some work with spelling and grammar. Having a beta reader or a proofreader go over this would improve it greatly, and the book will be that much better. I will watch for updates from this author and recommend this to anyone who wants a good read. "

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The S girl

"I really don' t know what to say.. I am speechless and yet want to write everything.. I think I have never read a story/book that turned my feelings upside down."

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Superb!!!

"Awesome book. Cool characters and a great story. Love it!!!"

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Cool

"What a cool story! LOVE IT!!"

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Great Story

"One of the greatest story so far. Love the characters, the plot. The storytelling. There were hiccups in grammar though but I loved it so far. Keep writing!"

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Awesome Read!!

"Truly thrilling and amazing!! From character building to the plot everything is well thought out and mesmerizing. Saravi is a true eye catcher and quite different from other female spy stories. Glad to see a spy character who doesn't seduce her way out to do the job even though we see her using the method in the beginning chapter. She's a strong and independent woman who takes no compromise for her job. Her parents are cool in their own ways, especially, her dad. However, updates are slow but they worth the wait. Can't wait for more! Keep writing!!!"

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🔥🔥🔥

"Loveee it💖💖"

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Awesome

"This is a great novel. So full of suspense and action. I loved Saravi and the rest of the characters. This is such a rich and well developed story. Can't wait for more updates."

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Spectacular!

"Despite numerous grammatical errors, which can be easily remedied, I have to say that I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I like the author's writing style and the plot was very well paced, constantly intriguing the reader, and making them want more. The character development was also very well done, especially Sara's character, who I liked the most of all the characters. Great story! Please keep writing x"

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Incomplete Story

"I loved the whole novel but the ending seems to be incomplete I don't know whether the novel has a second part..The whole plot of the story was marvelously penned down loved it,but the ending seemed a bit off it was incomplete as there are still so many mysteries which were yet to be uncovered.Please let me know if there's a second part of this novel I googled it but couldn't find."

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IMPRESSIVE !!

"Impressive writing,awesome plotting, good usage of styles though there are some grammatical errors, The characters are well brought out, Saravin being the main one. Saravin is my favorite, and the dad Hussein. The character and personality is brought out quite well, I love the fact that she's fearless, tough, intelligent, beautiful,determined, has quite an attitude, she is the type that goes for what she wants.,gets hurt but will never lower her guard!!! I cant wait to read the remaining part of the book. plus the title of the books already arouses the curiosity in the reader.. As a reader am impressed , The book is awesome!! "

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****Stunning****

"This is a greatly written thriller story that captures a reader right from the beginning. Among characters, I love Sara most. She's strong, witty and capable of showing emotions sometimes. A perfect protagonist for the story. Next, I love Arup. A lovely dear friend always ready to help and protect Sara. Other characters are well developed as well. The plot is amazing. Though it's currently work in progress I can't wait to see how it turns out. The way story switches scenes feels like a movie. All in all, I love it. It's simply a stunning piece of work. Keep up the good job!!!!"

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This gave me the giggles!

"I love the humor! I would only suggest bookmarking www.online-spellcheck.com. It has helped me. Otherwise, everything is fine, :)"

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Amazing idea

"I loved how this story worked out and everything flowed, especially with the twists and turns that have happened in here. I loved this idea and the story's background went together with all of these characters. I would definitely read this one!"

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The S Girl

"I can't say that I've ever read a spy story, it's not a genre that ever peeked my interest, but this book did! The pace is good from the start and keeps moving at a speed that makes you want to continue, There are a few grammatical errors, though they don't take away from the immersion. Well done!"

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Incredible!!!

"It's an incredibly dynamic and good paced story. I loved Sara and her sarcastic attitude. Very intriguing plot with twists and turns. Characters are well designed with better interactions. The story has great potential, and I am quite sure it will achieve success to satisfy the readers.with a better story."

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The S Girl

"Enjoyed reading this spy thriller with it's strong character (Saravi) who stole the limelight from the start. I liked the way she handled the whole story with it's plot. It was a thoroughly enjoyable book. Despite some grammatical errors which could be easily corrected, I am sure readers will enjoy reading the book. Keep up the good work."

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Looks Promising!

"Excellent story with humor, action, mystery and crime. This plot has got some potential classic spy vibe. Ms. Hussain is my favorite character here. I find her more attractive because of her sense of humor and seriousness. Author's writing style is also pretty good with a few grammatical mistakes in there, but they were not enough to keep me away read this awesome novel. However, polishing makes things even better. I'm looking forward to reading more from you."

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