What is your opinion?
Shifter
"Really enjoyed hope there's more"
Change
"Enjoyed this story. I am interested in reading the next three. You mentioned there are 4 completed novels. What are the names of the novels and are they available in Ink?"
Great, unique, story
"The story is definitely interesting, as well as unique. The terms are different than most shifter stories, which takes a little getting used to. The main editing problem is in just about every chapter there's a few sentences that either have dropped a word, or that have an extra word. "
Good story though seems unfinished; needs a bit of work.
"I have to admit the plot seems good, but the story seems unfinished and a lot left out. It doesn't seem that the author's first language is English, but well done. Some connecting words left out and sentences that seems like they were copy and pasted over with duplicate words not edited out. At the end of chapter 28 there is a huge blurb about the author being a "New York Times Best Selling Author" then states she was "part of" a story that was #13 on the "New Your Times Best Selling Author List." If I were to post that about myself I'd make very sure that there were no typos, no confusion in sentence structure, correct usage of tenses and delete the repetition before posting. Suggestion to the author...get help in editing your posts on Inkitt or anywhere else. I'm sure as a "best selling" author that you already have someone to do this for you, but a second and third set of eyes go a long way to posting a perfect story that is readable and doesn't confuse the readers trying to make sense of some of the sentences. Good luck in future!"
Excellent read
"This story was beautifully written. I personally enjoyed it tremendously. I also think that the ending was very quick and unfulfilling. I wanted, needed and expected more. I think a better description of the characters would help the story. I am terrible with remembering names. What was his punishment for her long term friend hitting her? Did the other friends leg heal after he turned? So many unanswered questions. I hope these are addressed at some point in time. This story has a lot of potential but comes short in the development of the story."
