What is your opinion?
Choosing Fate
"Good place to stop the blip, wonder what twist of fate is next."
Gripping page-turner
"I have followed this novel for long now. I know that it's an uphill task sometimes, but hang in there, @SmileySmith ! I am sure that I am not alone when I say your novel so far is promising enough for your readers to wait for you, the plot is original enough for it to gain traction with a fresh audience once the updates are regular and/or the novel is complete, and most importantly, your writing is proficient enough for you to unreservedly continue the Sisyphean endeavour that writing inherently is... Looking forward to the rest of this gripping tale!"
Choosing feet
"Loving this book so far! Couldn't stop reading it! So anxious to find out what's going to happen next! Willow needs to make a choice and fast! And the right one! "
Love it
"Landon should have opened up when he had the chance and reese is the one when it's your mate you're destinys are so interwoven that you breath the others wants in life cause they are your own. Love this book it so amazing! "
Can't put it down
"I am loving this story line!"
Amazing
"Honestly I'm hooked up to the story! Can't wait to read the next update! "
Thrilling!
"Never a dull moment and each chapter's ending is a cliff hanger. It's suspenseful and full of emotion. It will take discipline to put this book down and always gives reason to come back for more."
Well written & entertaining
"So far this story is very well written, with few prose issues or mistakes, likable characters, a fast pace and an engaging plot. Typically when it comes to love triangles, the old/existing boyfriend is too lame to really be torn between him and the new guy, but not so here. Landon is great and his and Willow's relationship is convincing and strong. I love the feel of the world so far. My only issue at this point is that one aspect of the setting--the time period--is really unclear to me. There's reference of water from wells and use of arrows, but also some more modern sounding speech mixed in with some more old fashioned stylings. I actually like the sense of dreamlike anachronism a lot of werewolf webnovels have...but since this novel is edging more towards the professional side of things, it might suit it a little better to be more clear in that regard."
Awesome!
"As someone who is a sucker for werewolf books and has read a lot of them, I can honestly say this is a very original plot! That's no easy feat, so I commend you for that! I think your first chapter is especially strong as a means of pulling readers in, so great job on making a good hook! I do think some of the chapters are really short and that might be an indication that you could add more. I'm not sure what that would look like, or maybe just combining two chapters into one, but I felt like everything moved really quick cause I'd be done reading a chapter in just a couple of minutes. I think some of the later chapters fall off in quality (which I totally get because when I start a story I usually don't finish it by the time I start posting it here and so the pressure to finish rushes me and I end up putting out lower quality writing than I would have liked) so I think maybe going back and adding more to those later chapters. Maybe another conflict? Some more dialogue? Inner narration? Overall though, really awesome story! I can't remember which of my books you added for the review swap, but since you clearly know the werewolf genre well please read "The Shadow Rogue" b/c I"d love to see what you think! I can't remember if that's the one you were going to review anyways, if that's the case then just ignore me haha Great job and keep up the good work!"
Choosing Fate
"So much tension and mystery! I’m very much into this story. Wonderful descriptions and great characters. Can’t wait to see it all the way to the end! The writer has an amazing writing style, the characters are well thought-out and the pacing is perfect. Bravo! Superb job so far!"
Great writing style!
"I love the way the author sets down the werewolf world.. With quick pace and with enough detail. You feel the love between the mean characters. When the story is finished, it should be considered for Galatea! I have faith in @SmileySmith to mainntain the quality."
Refreshing story
"I love reading werewolves stories and so far, I'm enchanted. Characters are good and do not look like most of the usual werewolves we can read about. I can't wait to have more of that story to see where it goes. Really nice job."
Do continue!
"Is it engaging? Will I follow this story? Yes and yes! More please :) "
Choosing Fate
"To say there is only 10 chapters available at the minute, the book gets you hooked from the very first chapter! I have never been so torn between a chosen mate and a fated mate before, but this author has done it! Your writing style and descriptive writing is incredible! I can't wait to read more and watch the story unfold."
Binged it because I couldnt put down!
"This book will have you sitting on the edge of your seat with anticipation! It is well written and keeps you hooked from the first chapter! I love the details and descriptions that the author uses to grasp at your attention and the character building is phenomenal so far! If you are looking for something that will keep your attention this is worthy of a good read! I absolutely cannot wait for the updates...you have me hooked, writer! Great job!"
Too good!
"Love this book. I love how the author ends a chapter on an intense cliffhanger than you'll just have to keep flipping the page. It is a true page turner. I love the writing style and everything is just perfect for me. Love the chemistry between the leads and no kidding, I would definitely recommend reading this book. "
Gripping
"This is a really interesting and gripping story. The writing style is excellent and really pulls you in. There is so much tension you can't help but read chapter after chapter, all in one sitting. I personally don't think the swearing is necessary, and cutting back on it would open the story up to a wider age-range of readers without compromising the integrity of the story. All in all - I can't wait for more! Good job."
MORE!!!
"OOOH, I love it so far!!! The tension and suspense is high from the start, and the action is well done and described so it immerses you fully into the scene and transports you onto the page. I can't wait to see how things unfold from here on out!!! How will they deal with the devastation of their pack and how will she deal with everything that will hapen in the next pack! GOOD JOB AUTHOR! Keep those chapters coming 😁🧡"
Choosing Fate
"I have to compliment how much of an interesting start to an incredible story with the potential to attract a large audience this was!! I found myself easily invested in this book, eager to know what happens next. The writing style is heavy on suspense and emotional connection, beautifully portrayed scenes as well. Each character has a unique voice and the romance is wonderfully written. It was very easy to sink into each character’s POV and fall in love with them and the shifters surrounding. I’m interested in seeing what this story will progresses into. A well written, imaginative book with strong characters. I especially loved the vivid descriptions found in this book. I’m also excited to reach that part in the story where the tropes start settling in! The description hooked me in with the whole “she doesn’t believe in soulmates but comes face to face with destiny/fate” so freaking good!!"
So far so good
"So far this has been a good story. It was a bit slow-ish in the beginning but not overly so. Everything flows well and keeps you reading to see what’s next. "
