Create New List
Share with your friends
Customize readability

Top Revenge

All Rights Reserved ©

Summary

The most important part of a man's life is his FAMILY. Once their lives are threatened, the hell knows no fury. It will endlessly rain destruction, blood will spill and secrets will be divulged once a man set out to avenge his family. His world! Brad Kings, a secret agent lost everything in a whim. His wife and daughter blown up right before his eyes. But he couldn't save them nor could he recall the gory event of 6th of March. Neither is he aware of the perpetrator/s. Life became void but he knew in his heart that he is alive for a reason. Even if that's the only thing he could be able to achieve before the creator comes calling. He must avenge his Alicia and Eva!!

Status
4yrs ago
Chapters
12
Rating
3.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

CHAPTER 1

It was a frenzy morning, exactly 6am in the morning. Brad, a tall and dark young man in his mid thirties with those abs you only see in the magazine and those hazel deep eyes, hated rainy days especially whenever it started out with those nightmares about his wife, Alicia and daughter, Eva.


Despite the cold morning, he woke up panting vigorously and sweating profusely. It’s always same pattern of the nightmare or maybe he should call it, a flashback only that this always happen in some nights and mornings just like this one.


It all started 2years and six months ago on his daughter’s birthday. On that unfaithful 6th of March, its Eva’s 3rd birthday and Alicia promised to let her to pick her own cake while he arranged for the food and drinks for just Eva’s friends, his colleagues at work and few of Alicia’s friends with neighbours too. Eva insisted that they wear matching outfit from a night before; started out with those ugly pinkie pyjamas. He couldn’t have imagined himself putting on a pink let alone as a night wears but Eva can be a handful. On that morning, Alicia handed him a white Tee and blue jeans with these beautiful smiles that radiates in her eyes every morning. She had those beautiful smiles when she planted a quick kiss on his face and few butterfly kisses all over his body.


This morning kissing ritual as he calls them is one major habit he loved about her and I miss them so much that my heart hurts so deeply.


Alicia was to drive Eva to the cake shop downtown; their favourite spot for sweet tooth. While he was to go pick up the decorator and the food they already ordered the day before. He hugged them and watched as they entered the white sport car he got Alicia last year.


Alicia is buckling their daughter’s seatbelt when his phone rang; a call from an unknown caller. In his line of work as a secret agent, such discreet call can only mean one thing, a disaster!


He picked up only to hear from the other end, “POHH’ and the call dropped.


The next thing he remembered was waking up in a hospital bed with all those depressing tubes and machines beeping.


His beautiful wife and daughter blown up right before his eyes and he couldn’t save them; neither knew who the caller was.


His life ended that day he woke up in that hospital bed.


He wished he had died.


Now he have to live with the guilt and pains of not been able to save his family for the rest of his remaining miserable life.













Let Okoli Blessing know what you thought about this chapter!
Love this

0

Love this

Funny

0

Funny

Spicy

0

Spicy

Suspenseful

0

Suspenseful

Emotional

0

Emotional

Profound

0

Profound

Heartwarming

0

Heartwarming

Shocking

0

Shocking

Good Writing

0

Good Writing

Compelling Plot

0

Compelling Plot

Great Character

0

Great Character

Strong Dialog

0

Strong Dialog

author

Nice piece, I'm waiting for the continuation of the story sha. Good work.

5 years
1

Further Recommendations

Reaper's Rose

Quenda: Overall a good story. Looks like it is in need of a good proof reader as it contradicts itself at times...but overall a good story.

Read Now
Bloodlines

karenfancp: I have noticed a few typos, the story line is good. I can’t put this down.

Read Now
Silver's Second Chance

Maggie Varnum: Like that it was fast paced and suspenseful...loved the romance up ended a little to fast ...would have been better if there was a Luna ceremony chapter and a birth of son with name chapter with Cole as a dramatic dad in the delivery scene .... Overall I enjoyed it very much!

Read Now
Bear Shifter Secrets

Felicia: This is the 2nd book im reading of this writer. And I enjoyed it just as much as the first, Marked while we slept. Worth the read. Very good writer

Read Now
Hit and Run

BlueMountain: I just absolutely love this story! The characters are great and the plot amazing, but what I fell for the most is the writing style. It's fantastic! I just love the easy-going roll of words and actions. And Yoda... His constant presence in this story is surprisingly perfect, and funny. The image of ...

Read Now
The Neighbor's Son

Lyn: Age gap with a twist...younger man this time! I love all the relationships in this story, especially the three ladies.They have my sense of humor. Good to know that I am not the only one.

Read Now
Off limits to fate, My Alpha, my sin

Sayurifighter: Easy read. Ended well with no loose ends.

Read Now
My Blacksmith Savior

Matilde: I am really liking the book so far, well written and very wholesome

Read Now