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Burnard's Story

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Summary

Impossible and Possible. Words that are opposites. Unless the impossible happens every day of your life. I'm Burnard. My life began with the impossible. Now, it's taken a turn for the worst.

Genre
Mystery,Scifi
Author
Phil
Status
5yrs ago
Chapters
3
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

Okay, hi. This is my first story on Inkitt. I am a complete nervous wreck. Though, I think I will use this platform more for practicing my writing skills and getting constructive criticism. So I will post the actual first chapter next.

Just a warning; this story will not be a clear or thought-out storyline. I'm still figuring out the plot and characters. This is just a start to my writing on this site.

Let Phil know what you thought about this chapter!
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Suspenseful

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Emotional

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Heartwarming

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Heartwarming

Shocking

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Shocking

Good Writing

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Good Writing

Compelling Plot

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Compelling Plot

Great Character

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Great Character

Strong Dialog

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Strong Dialog

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