What is your opinion?
Glass Corridors
"Quite the short story. Well written."
Glass Corridors
"Short. Dark. Whoa! I just read it twice to understand it. Suspense.......amazing👌❤️"
Nice, dark and twisted!
"This short story is fantastically creepy and pulled me in the moment I soaked up the first words! The haunting atmosphere is perfectly described and I love the way the author drops hints about the past, the parents and the protagonists possible infatuation with her dashing brother. Love it! And I would love to read more!!!"
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"Beautifully creepy!"
Yes!
"I know I probably sound demented, but I genuinely smiled at the end of this. Throughout the story my mind was racing as clues presented themselves and I tried to figure out what exactly was going on. Gorgeous description and immersion. I'm very excited to read more of your work!"
Perfectly Creepy!
"Glass Corridors is a story that takes complete control. It sends your heart racing with the beautifully suspenseful descriptions, and stops it dead with each twist of the plot. Through the use of second person, careful pacing, and a chilling end, this is a little horror story is as entertaining as it is chilling!"
Hell yeah!
"I did not see that coming! I sat there staring at my screen for a good minute taking it in, I love it! The plot and the characters are written beautifully. It was a smooth, easy, poetic read. My only criticism (if I'm being picky) is that descriptions like 'diseased looking' aren't as poetic as everything else. Honestly, a wicked read. Thank you!"
Glass corridors - Review
"Loved this little story although I must say the Glass Corridor analogy escaped me and the ending sort of begged the question of who was going to miss the girls and who would come looking. But, I am willing to suspend my disbelief for a creepy little story told with utter conviction."
Glass corridors
"Death is a very sad and chilling fact. I would like to read more. The story has true feelings. good work for you."
Glass Corridors
"This short story drew me deeper and deeper into it. I wanted to learn more, the more I read. It was a cliffhanger all of the way with a thousand questions left unanswered, as there should be. I liked the overall writing style, and the way the author used english. It was a very nice little read, and the ending, of course, was entirely unexpected--just as it should be."
A nice, tight, creepy little gem
"I wasn't quite sure what I was getting into with this one and, like many of the best dark stories, it chooses to not answer all the questions it sets up. I am normally not a fan of second-person narrative either, but for whatever reason, it clicked with this story, and with me. Overall, just a cool little story to chill you if you're feeling a little overly-complacent with your station in life. You never know who's going to be watching you from behind a glass wall."
