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The Grand Designer

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Summary

A film script imagining a new theory on the creation of the universe.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1

“The Grand Designer”

By

Nick Clark

©Copyright 2021 Nick Clark

CUE MUSIC: ‘Bodyrock’ by Moby.


Titles animation of religious iconography and images, cave paintings, a Mobius strip in cool special effects, a close up pan of the painting ‘Madonna and Saint Giovannino’ and finally the words in a posh new Bible ‘The Revelation of St. John’.

Fade to caption:

“In 2019, scientists demonstrated sending a quantum particle briefly back in time.”

Dissolve to caption #2:

“By 2077, the method was hugely advanced, leading to the world’s first time travel experiments”.

Dissolve to caption#3:

“Great strides in nanotechnology and molecular 3D laser printing have also by then allowed for ‘matter extrapolators’.”

CUT TO: CU of the face of a young MOBIUS being punched and bloodied by his assailant D.B. who smacks him in the face repeatedly. The music ends abruptly with the foley of being thumped.

WATERMARK CAPTION: ‘Present day’.

D.B.

You stupid fuck. You like

niggers do you?

You pussy ass mother fucking loser…

MOBIUS is dazed and confused. Whips out a penknife, and slashes a scar across D.B’s right eye. The bully gets up in pain.

D.B.

Arggh! You fuck!

D.B. smashes his face again.

MOBIUS

Get off me you scummer!

D.B.

Little fucking dick… I’ll do

your mum after this.

NICHOLAS

You ain’t got the beef, then

don’t mess with the chief, punk.

FRANK

Little homo wants his mummy…

D.B.

What’s he working on like a good little

boy? Oh look, schematics of shit no one

understands! Wow!

D.B. gets up, kicks him hard, and walks away with his laughing mates NICHOLAS and FRANK. MOBIUS picks up his school work, including looking for a moment at a design he’s working on on paper. CHRIS TINGLE, his friend, a black lad, arrives.

CHRIS

D.B. and the pricks again?

MOBIUS

Scum of the highest order mate.

CHRIS

Still entering that competition?

MOBIUS

You bet… I think they’ll love my idea.

CHRIS

Tempus fugit…

MOBIUS

Quite, which would indicate time is

aerodynamic.

MOBIUS is scratching a heavy edged ‘right angle’ into the design of his work as he sits there reeling from the beating.

CHRIS

Still trying to perfect right angles?

MOBIUS

They don’t exist in nature. Nature is a cellular

based water utilising system of intelligent light

dependent nodes of ‘something’ which generates

want for survival. Right angles are too abrupt,

and not the work of God… No tree, no plant, no flower,

no rock, deals, really, in precise right angles.

To consider right angles the essence of construction,

therefore, is to dismiss the amazing methods of

the creator.


CHRIS

Okay Mobius, whatever… Let’s get ready

for the party. I implemented the idea

for your microchip enhancement in a story.

It’s cool. It could work.

CHRIS smiles lovingly.

They laugh together. FADE OUT.

CUT TO: CLASS ROOM – AFTERNOON

MOBIUS is at his desk looking lethargic but in deep thought, doodling in the foreground an image of a human body with channels, veins and arteries all coloured differently.

TEACHER

Amino acids are organic compounds

that contain amino (–NH2) and

carboxyl (–COOH) functional

groups, along with a side chain

(R group) specific to each amino

acid. The key elements of an amino acid are carbon (C), hydrogen (H),

oxygen (O), and nitrogen (N), although

other elements are found in the

side chains of certain amino acids.

About 500 naturally occurring

amino acids are known as of 1983

(though only 20 appear in the genetic

code) and can be classified in

many ways…

JOHNNY, a friend of MOBIUS, is sitting next to him. JOHNNY strokes his knee. MOBIUS’s knee shoots up with surprise and hits the table. JOHNNY giggles.

TEACHER

Is something amusing gentlemen?

JOHNNY remains quiet and coy and pretends to knuckle down to serious work.

MOBIUS

I find it amazing human consciousness

has adapted to evolution so successfully,

given we are allegedly chemical compounds

born of the primordial soup, when all other

lifeforms remain clearly less intelligent.

JOHNNY

What about dolphins?

MOBIUS

What about dolphins? Ever seen one change

a plug?

TEACHER

Whilst it is true the theory of evolution

has many unexplained gaps in the logic, I

think you’ll find in the modern world, saying

‘God made us’ won’t wash with post 20th

century intellectualism.

MOBIUS

But how can we be so certain there’s not

a creator when everything is – on the whole -

so perfectly designed? A mouse is a mouse.

A lion is a lion. A dog is a dog. There

are very few mutations, and millions of

alike clones of each basic species.

TEACHER

Our job as teachers is NOT to be omniscient,

but to teach YOU what we DO know, HOPING

that one day, you may be able to think

successfully and productively for yourselves,

and perhaps even go on to discover MORE

about life.

JOHNNY

Reality is something I

don’t fully appreciate, as a soldier, Sir.


TEACHER

Well, good luck in finding an alternative.

Until then, we’re stuck with this 3-D

universe in the 4th dimension of time with

everyone wondering what the 5th dimension is.

MOBIUS

If reality is perception, and observation

generates reality, in accordance with

quantum theory, then surely, I am the

creator of existence?

TEACHER

Nice try Mobius, but it’s a little more

polarised in truth, and whilst we have

made great inroads in the last few hundred

years technologically, some may argue there

is still a long way to go.

JOHNNY

<whispering to MOBIUS>

When you’re rich for being a genius,

promise you’ll give me some important

role as a warrior… You know my brain

isn’t up to this chemistry shit.

MOBIUS

Will do Johnny. Count on me.

CUT TO:

Letter saying ‘WINNER’ being delivered and carried through the school on a tracking shot. It gets delivered to MOBIUS’s room. He opens it excitedly. The letter says:

‘Congratulations on your entry for the Genesis Corp new ideas competition. The judges felt your molecular generation code was revolutionary, and we would like to invite you to visit us to discuss further work.’

MOBIUS punches the air with happiness and lets out a ‘woo!’.

CUT TO:


House party – EXT. – JOHNNY’s land rover ‘Apache Rose’.


CUE BACKGROUND MUSIC.


Later that week, attending a school party. MOBIUS is with his girlfriend HANNAH and his mates CHRIS, JOHNNY, D and J-P.

HANNAH

I’m so proud of you.

You’ve worked so hard.

You deserve everything.

MOBIUS

Thanks babe.

D

Let’s get drunk like it was 1999.

JOHNNY

In some states of mind, it’s always 1999.

J-P

I’m going for a smoke. Who’s joining me?

CHRIS

Yes mate. We can use my pipe.

J-P

Yahoo! Let’s go.

CHRIS

Good word, I’ll write it on my pipe.

CHRIS reveals his homemade wooden pipe, with graffiti all over it. He adds the words ‘Yahoo – J-P’ in red pen.

MOBIUS

Boring spelling of Yahoo…

CHRIS

How would you suggest?

MOBIUS

We’re posh… ‘Yah! Who!’

CHRIS

Weirdo!

JOHNNY (to J-P)

Oi, mate… give us a cig.

J-P

Here you go…


JOHNNY

WE ARE THE WARRIORS!!!!

CHRIS writes ‘Yah who – Mobius’ underneath it nonetheless.

CUT TO D.B. doing lines of cocaine on a table with his evil friends NICHOLAS and FRANK. D.B. is wearing a fancy dress Viking hat with horns. He looks up after inhaling and sees HANNAH. He winks at her, and she smiles coyly.

D.B.

Who’s that babe?

FRANK

Hannah, girlfriend of that

faggot in the year beneath us, Mobius.

You know, the nerd you like to

brutalise for thinking he’s smart.

D.B.

Oh yeah, the computer dweeb. What a

pointless cunt.

CUT TO: Later in party. The lads are all laughing and pissed up and toking. MOBIUS is telling the story of his project to a small gathering, when a mysterious hand drops a pill in the glass he’s drinking from out of sight.

MOBIUS

So basically, my concept for a software program

was to look into the likelihood of terraforming

planets in a real world simulated environment.

The quantum matter extrapolator idea

was my prize moment, when

I really studied 3-D printers and imagined how

we might generate matter at the atomic level,

using such technology at the macro level,

within a fixed field subset of defined properties,

within a defined void.

LISTENER

Awesome man. You might become rich!

MOBIUS

Well, we’ll see… Now, where’s my Hannah?

MOBIUS goes in search of HANNAH.

CUT TO: HOUSE PARTY – EXT. – NIGHT.

He goes outside to see D.B. having his way with HANNAH from behind in the carpark. He is mortified. He watches for a while, and then D.B. has finished rutting her, he pushes her in a bush, as they laugh together.

D.B.

You lucky girl…

HANNAH

Yes, I am a lucky girl…

MOBIUS feels sick, and goes to vomit in the bushes.

He is disorientated and staggers away from them. He feels awful. He falls down on his hands and knees, wretching again in horror.

POV – We see trippy visuals of two light beings made of blue light and humanoid in shape approach him and a dazzling display of lights.

The audio track is hundreds of voices polluting his consciousness, the sounds of the party warping in and out with eerie effects. Loads of malevolent voices polluting his senses.

He rolls over and passes out, a humiliated and broken man.

CUT TO:

Close up of MOBIUS in bed in a mental home. He comes to, and looks up. A NURSE is in the room overseeing him. She is doodling a picture of a broken heart in the foreground.

MOBIUS

Wh… Where am I?!

NURSE

Ahh… Good morning. You’ve been

through quite an experience!

MOBIUS

What happened? How did I get here?

NURSE

The pill you took knocked

you into another dimension.

You were found trying to

hang yourself from a tree

at a party.

MOBIUS

Pill? I didn’t take a pill.

NURSE

Well, we found traces of

strong MDMA in you, so

if you didn’t take it,

I can only imagine you

were spiked. You’ve been off

grid for about sixteen hours.

Ranting and raving about

your girlfriend and someone

else called ‘D.B’?

MOBIUS

Ohhh… Yes… I feel sick.

The most evil bastard

I’ve ever met.

NURSE

Well, I’m sure karma will

catch up with him one

day if he’s not careful.

MOBIUS

He masturbates over images of Hitler.

NURSE

As I say petal, karma will get him.

I’m a firm believe in good triumphing

over evil.

MOBIUS

Karma is purely wishful thinking

in the face of overwhelming negatives.

NURSE

Well then wish harder…

MOBIUS

That’s called ‘praying’, isn’t it?

The NURSE smiles with care and warmth and leaves the room. MOBIUS looks at a crucifix on the wall.


SLOW CAMERA ZOOM IN TO CRUCIFIX TO CLOSE UP OF CHRIST’S FACE.


DISSOLVE TO:


CU of JESUS’s face doodle, in a conference room at ‘GENESIS CORP’. MOBIUS is well lit in the interview chair, but the two interviewers aren’t easy to see in the shadows. MOBIUS is doodling a design in the foreground of a character who looks like Jesus, with the words ‘HATE EVIL’ scrawled beside it in dark, emphatic letters.

INTERVIEWER

So Mr. Mobius, given your

EXCELLENT programming ideas

in this revolutionary new

realm of industry, we felt

that it’s only suitable to

grant you a trainee placement

here at Genesis Corp in order

to employ your fertile,

teeming mind towards some of

the most exciting innovations

of the 21st century.

MOBIUS

Thank you, it is an honour.

INTERVIEWER

Congratulations on your

success. We look forward

to a bright future working

together.

MOBIUS

Excellent.

INTERVIEWER #2

Out of interest, what do

you do for pleasure

In your spare time?


MOBIUS

Work is my pleasure, Sir.

INTERVIEWER

Good… Good… Just the right

sort of attitude for a company

like ours.

FADE OUT as the camera drop pans to MOBIUS’s doodle of Jesus. He spins a halo over the head as a last part of the doodle.

CUT TO CAPTION: “Over two decades years later”.

FADE IN:

CU of JOSHUA’s face smiling.


The television is on reporting climate crisis. We see rioters and mass hysteria over ecological issues.

NARRATOR

“With conflict ever an increasing fear,

it is the findings of the UN that

given the declared ecological emergency,

huge new investment must be granted

towards companies seeking to avert the

crisis, or that work on large scale

humanitarian solutions…”

MOBIUS is a middle-aged man. He looks across at his wife ZOE and their son JOSHUA.

He smiles as he works on another design on paper, of fish and birds in a complex grid surrounded by stars with algebraic notes.

ZOE

Darling, MICHAEL just phoned.

T-Minus one day until

we launch. Are you excited?

MOBIUS

Couldn’t have done

it without you babe.

The time force gradient

neutralising destabiliser

was a work of art…

ZOE

Well, I didn’t marry

the world’s leading

time travel and terraforming

specialist because

he was an idiot. I’ll make

Joshua’s supper and

then we can go to the launch.

MOBIUS

I can’t wait… A lifetime’s

work, all for this one

day in history.

ZOE

I’ll be right with you.

We’ll take the Mercedes.

CUT TO: EXT: GENESIS CORP – EVENING.

CUT TO EXT, the launch pad.

MICHAEL is speaking to a crowd of twenty four VIP’s who have assembled for the launch. D.B. is hidden among the crowd, looking suspicious, dressed as security, with a scar on his right eye. The vessel itself is a large contraption with wheels within wheels with cameras adorned along the wheels, and four metallic faces of a human face, a lion, an ox, and an eagle as part of the design.

MICHAEL

It is with more delight

than is feasibly

common, ladies and gentlemen,

that today we reveal to you

the fruit of our twenty

year long epic innovation.

The ‘reality time drive’ which

houses the quantum matter extrapolators.

Ladies and Gentlemen, when we launch

this ship, we will be heading back

in time… Heading back to the

dawn of time… Where we will

be triggering the quantum

matter extrapolator… My

name is MICHAEL, and I will

be piloting the craft, with

my crew, ADAM, ZOE and the

genius who devised it in

huge part, MOBIUS.

The crowd cheer as MOBIUS reveals himself flying one of the ship jet packs. He lands near the crowd.

D.B. sneaks away from the crowd. He is listening to a hidden voice receiver. It is a woman’s voice.

VOICE

You know what to do. Get inside that thing,

and find a way to destroy their mission.

D.B.

Okay… I’m on it.

D.B. approaches the large space craft and gingerly sneaks on board past a snoozing SECURITY GUARD… As he’s looking at the impossibly advanced controls, ADAM enters without seeing him.

D.B.

Shit…

D.B. rushes to a storage container and hides in it. As he does so, ADAM comes along without seeing him and locks the storage container.

ADAM (On radio)

All set… Can the crew of the Song Odyssey

please take their positions?

CUT TO:

ZOE and MOBIUS in their flash space suits. GABRIEL, a black male Genesis Corp employee, is admiring them, dressed in the same garments. Standing next to GABRIEL is NADIR. A quiet, shy lad.

MOBIUS

These feel great. I’m

glad we didn’t cut

costs on the uniform. How

buff do you look, darling?

ZOE

Yup, they’re trendy alright.

GABRIEL

I think you both look

great, and I’m thrilled

to be a part of this mission.

Really, it’s very exciting.

MOBIUS

We’re thrilled to have you GABRIEL, now pass the

tachyon warp acceleration procedure manual.

GABRIEL

Certainly, certainly.

MOBIUS

NADIR, you designed these uniforms,

right? What was your inspiration?


NADIR

Marvel comic superheroes.

MOBIUS

Welllll…

ZOE

If the pants fit bubba, where them.

CUT TO: Launch moment.

MOBIUS, ZOE, MICHAEL and ADAM are sitting in the spaceship, The Song Odyssey, in their respective positions.

MICHAEL

Song Odyssey to HQ, do you receive?

HQ (on radio)

This is Genesis Corp. Final

flight checks are A-Okay,

and we are ready for launch.

ZOE (to MOBIUS)

Given this has never been done before,

how can we be sure it will work?

MOBIUS

My theory is that we wouldn’t

be here if it doesn’t.

Okay, MICHAEL. Punch it!

MICHAEL

Starting traditional boosters.

ADAM

Navigation screens look A-Okay.

ZOE

Auxiliary power stabilizers are operational.

HQ

T-Minus ten seconds… 10… 9…

The exterior of the ship begins to produce smoke and make noise. The crowd all watch with awe.

MICHAEL AND HQ

7… 6… 5…

The ship begins shaking and juddering. Zoe is clenching the throttle lever and MOBIUS places his hand over her hand for support.

MOBIUS

Ready to make history darling?

MICHAEL

3… 2… 1… ALL SYSTEMS ARE GO.

The ship roars with life and slowly bursts into the air with a stream of smoke.

MICHAEL

Okay, ascent rate is

standard and on target.

We’re moving people.

Hold on to something solid.

ADAM

Sequence vectors are looking good.

ZOE

Trajectory is established

and looking excellent.

MOBIUS

Okay, so as soon as we

penetrate the atmosphere,

we launch the time jump

to origin point, and then

activate the quantum

matter extrapolator.

ADAM

Target is A-1 in control…

Preparing to drop initial

fuel cells.

He presses a button and the early, now redundant fuel cells fall off the spaceship.

MICHAEL

Penetrating atmosphere in

T-Minus fifteen seconds…

Stand by for the time jump

lock and fire sequence.


ADAM

Time jump is calibrated and

all stats are looking perfect.


MICHAEL

10… 9… 8…

MOBIUS

Sequence alpha is running smooth.

Vector relay pattern is holding.


ZOE

Corresponding as set with the chronology

axis runner…

MICHAEL

5… 4… 3…

ADAM

Standing by to leap…


MICHAEL

2… 1… ENGAGE TIME JUMP…

ADAM presses the big important button as the spaceship hurtles out of the earth’s atmosphere.

There is a large whirring sound. The ship glows, and then disappears in the flash of a light.

CUT TO: INT – SPACE SHIP GOING THROUGH TIME TUNNEL – With the zoom effect of wormhole diving.

MOBIUS

Good God, it’s working…

ADAM

Minus 1,000, 2,000, 3,000, 4,000, 5,000…

Christ, we’re rippling backwards through

time at an unfeasible rate.


ZOE

Hold on everyone…


MICHAEL

Stand by to generate custom field shock.

ADAM

Okay, Mobius, are you ready?


MOBIUS

Ready as I’ll ever be.

ZOE

Instigating the primary

route channel of the time

quantum matter extrapolator.

MOBIUS

System check on the photon

generator and nanotics

holding facility.

ADAM

Photon generator and nanotics

are looking good…


MICHAEL

Terraforming bulk engine is operational…

ADAM

Destined historical origin

point is arriving

in 5… 4… 3… 2… 1… FIRE THE VOID SYSTEM

GENERATOR…

MOBIUS presses a button under a protected grill, and the screen goes white.


CUE: SPECIFIC CLASSICAL MUSIC.

Watermark caption: ‘Phase One’.


Then it morphs into black as ‘the void of space’ is generated pixel by atom. Then Earth, just a large rocky wilderness with water, is rapidly built in a massive terraforming procedure.

CUT TO EXT: The spaceship emerges with a flash of light in the black void… There is nothing but a dark, watery planet.

MICHAEL

Void development is stable, planet is

replicated. H20 input looking healthy.


ZOE

Time dilation is rapidly building.


ADAM

We’ve just built time gentlemen!

The quantum simulation is active!

I repeat, the quantum simulation

is active!

MICHAEL

Wow… Existence… Exists…

EXT. THE CRAFT FLYING OVER THE DARK WATERS – ‘DAY’.

MOBIUS

Activate the photon generator!

A huge scanning light beams from the ship over the waters of the ancient earth.

CREW

Wo… Wow…! Etc.

MOBIUS

Wow… We made it… it works…

Watermark caption: ‘Phase Two’.

ADAM is under a bank of computers flicking a few switches.

MOBIUS

Adam, are we ready to install

atmospheric conditions?


ADAM

The firmament build array

is calibrated

to the subset of the

nanotic development system.

We launch the build

probe into the waters,

and it should replicate

the atmosphere using the

planned technique with ionic

field valves set

to default status,

pulsing at a thousand

gigawatts on

initial set up power.

MOBIUS

Punch it!

ADAM presses a button, and a probe blasts from the Song Odyssey and splashes down in the dark waters. It fizzes and energises and begins to spool an atmosphere from the waters surrounding the planet.

The crew watch in awe.

ZOE

It’s working…


MICHAEL

You’re a genius, Mobius.

MOBIUS

Nice to see the scientific theory

works.

Watermark caption: ‘Phase Three’

MICHAEL

Trigger the terraforming bulk engine and prepare

rapid growth vegetation terraforming nanotics.

ADAM

Look at that… it’s beautiful…

CUE special effects shot of a stream of ‘nanotics’ (nanotechnology elements which are designed to rapidly terraform a planet with plant life) pouring out of the vessel and rapidly building plant life in real time.

Watermark caption: ‘Phase Four’.

ADAM

Okay, the terraforming process is under away.

Stand by to launch the star canon.

MOBIUS

Star canon loaded and ready for first deploy.

ZOE

Let’s get a sun up there people.

MICHAEL

Stand by to fire… and, FIRE!

ZOE presses a complex series of buttons which blasts countless photon generating balls at colossal speed into the universe, where one in particular grows exponentially in size very quickly using seriously smart technology.

MOBIUS

Sun build mode sequence is operational.

All systems working as intended.

ZOE

Well done, genius…


MOBIUS

Thanks, genius…

Watermark caption: ‘Phase Five’.

ADAM

Let’s get those oceans and that

bespoke atmosphere populated

people.

MICHAEL

Standing by to launch ocean contents

nanotic replicator.

MOBIUS

Launch when ready.

ZOE

All systems looking good, Captain.

MICHAEL

Launching now…

MICHAEL fires a button and another probe splashes into the sea. It rapidly opens up to reveal a machine which creates fish, birds and sea life in an instant.

Watermark caption: ‘Phase Six’.

MOBIUS

Okay, let us replicate

humanity in our default

reflection… Male and

female clones… Let’s

do this!

ADAM

On it…

ADAM flicks a few buttons and pulls a couple of levers, and enters the drop probe having check the rows of phials containing human and animal DNA as part of the conscious matter extrapolator.

ADAM

Okay, I’m ready.

MOBIUS

You sure you’re up for this?

ADAM

Wouldn’t be here if I wasn’t.

MICHAEL

Good, he’s ready. All

systems looking good.

Adam, shut the probe

portal.

MOBIUS

Good luck Adam…

ADAM

Cheers.

ADAM closes the drop probe door and sits in the chair.

MICHAEL gives him the ‘OK’ signal, to which ADAM responds with a thumbs up.

MICHAEL presses the ‘launch drop probe one’ button, and the probe jettisons from the ship towards earth.

MOBIUS

Now let’s just hope

he has a safe landing.

CUT TO: The drop probe hurtling through the atmosphere, burning up on entry as it does. It enters the clear sky of the barren world, now illuminated by sun technology, as the nanotics buzz about generating natural flora over the surface of the planet.

As the drop ship falls, it releases a parachute, and lands in a jungle region. As the drop probe smashes through the trees, the livery of ‘Song Odyssey’ is buffeted and scratched.

It comes to a rest at the base of large trees, and Adam unbuckles himself and steps out. Like the first man on earth, Adam takes a breath, filled with awe.

CUT TO:

Onboard the ‘Song Odyssey’.

ADAM (on radio)

I have touched down on

Earth… Everything

is okay.


MOBIUS

Well DONE Adam… Begin scattering

the active organism DNA modelling facility

in the replicator when you’re ready.


ADAM

Will do… Just loading up a horse

template.

MOBIUS

It’s not right that he’s alone down there.


ZOE

Get drop probe two ready for me…

MICHAEL

Copy that.

MICHAEL goes to the cargo hold and opens the container with D.B. hiding in it. He sees D.B. cowering in there.

MICHAEL

What the? Who the fuck are you?

D.B.

Listen, I can explain…

MICHAEL

I think you’d better. What

the HELL are you doing

on this ship?

ZOE

MICHAEL? What’s wrong?

MICHAEL

Look what I’ve found…

Before they have a chance to work out what’s going on, D.B. jumps out, grabs Zoe about the head and neck and starts pulling her toward drop probe 2 door.

D.B.

Listen… I don’t know

where the Hell we are,

or what the Hell you’re

doing, but you’re coming

with me.

ZOE

Get off me!

D.B.

Move again and I’ll break your neck.

MICHAEL

Let her go man… There is

no easy way out of this.

How did you gain access?

D.B.

Questions, questions…

I don’t know what you’re

doing, but believe me,

with that Mobius twat

involved, I’ll

be seeking to ruin

it. Now don’t get in my way

while I launch this probe.

You’re coming with me…

Try to break free,

and I’ll kill you.

ZOE

Just do as he says MICHAEL.

MICHAEL

Are you sure?

ZOE

Sure.

D.B. pulls her into the drop probe, and he presses the ‘manual release’ system, which triggers the probe to launch.


MICHAEL presses the launch button and probe two peels off toward Earth. MOBIUS comes running through from the other rooms.

MOBIUS

MICHAEL… Drop probe two

has been authenticated,

without my command. What’s wrong?

MICHAEL

Where have you been?


MOBIUS

It’s phase seven. I was taking a well

earned break. Is that okay with you?

MICHAEL

I’m afraid I’ve got some bad news…

CUT TO:

ADAM working on the DNA extrapolator. He is modelling a series of animals for production in the rapid build facility. He looks up to see probe two drop and land not far from his position.

ADAM

Good. It’ll be nice to have some company.

CUT TO:

MOBIUS on the ship. He is furious.

MOBIUS

You’re telling me this

mission has an uninvited

member? Where the Hell

was security?

MICHAEL

What can I say? None of us would have expected this.

MOBIUS

The entire mission

is now compromised.

This is dangerous

to a serious degree

of terrible, MICHAEL!

MICHAEL

I know, I know…

MOBIUS

We’re going to have to

try and contact HQ through

the time channel.

MICHAEL

But that could take up

so much energy we won’t

be able to undertake a

rapid rescue plan.

MOBIUS

They have to know! We

can’t create existence

with an illegal stowaway!

Questions will be raised!

Big questions! The entire

project could

be in trouble!

MICHAEL

Let’s just hold off

for a time. Calm down.

Wait and see… There may

be other ways around this.


MOBIUS

We’ve got enough fuel to jump back to

the future, but a series of time

channel comms could jeopardize

those reserves, and that’s

not including rescuing them.

MICHAEL

Therefore… as said… let’s just

calm down, and bide our time.

Something good may come out of this yet.

MOBIUS

I only hope you’re right.

CUT TO:

EXT. EARTH – Probe ship two is among the trees.

D.B. and ZOE escape the pod.

D.B.

Where is this? Where are we?

ZOE remains strong and silent. D.B. panics briefly and runs off into the jungle.

ZOE

Asshole…

ZOE fetches a flare gun and electronic torch from the drop probe. She turns the electronic torch on and sticks it into the ground. She then fires the flare directly above her.

CUT TO:

ADAM with his field scanner analysing the area. He sees the flare go up.

ADAM

I’m coming Zoe!

ADAM dons a jetpack and zooms into the skies.

CUT TO:

CU of ZOE removing cargo from the probe. ADAM finds her and lands in the area.

ADAM

Zoe! You made it!

ZOE

We have a problem…

ADAM

What?

ZOE

An intruder on the ship…

He took me captive and is

somewhere now out here.


ADAM

An intruder? Whom?!

ZOE

No idea… A stowaway on the project.

ADAM

But how can that be?

ZOE

That’s what I want to find out…

ADAM

The mission is jeopardised!

ZOE

Just don’t panic… I’m sure

we’ll work something out.

CUT TO:

The Song Odyssey – INT.

MOBIUS and MICHAEL are studying graphics on screen.

MOBIUS

I never thought a mission like this would

require weapons. But now I’m thinking weapons

are the one thing we need we didn’t include.

MICHAEL

One man… he’ll come unstuck.

No friends, no knowledge,

nowhere to go… We just bide out time.

MOBIUS

Adam should be working on

the genetic extrapolator,

not worrying about intruders

into the build project.

MICHAEL

Agreed, but I’m sure he’ll

figure something out.

Or Zoe. They’re not stupid.

MOBIUS

Did you get a look at the face?

MICHAEL

Didn’t recognise him. He had

a scar down his right eye

though.

MOBIUS

A scar, eh? Hmmmm…

FLASHBACK to MOBIUS being punched in the face by D.B. as a young boy.

MOBIUS can’t be sure it’s him, so shrugs and ignores.

MOBIUS

Let’s get a signal to Adam,

tell him what’s going on.

MICHAEL

I think he already knows… Listen…

ADAM is coming through on a televisual channel.

ADAM

I’ve rendezvoused with Zoe…

She told me what happened…

MOBIUS

Zoe… are you okay?

ZOE

I’m fine… Was a bit shaken,

but he’s run into the

jungle. I don’t know how

long he can survive

out here alone.

MICHAEL

He may well be pack when

he gets too hungry. I want

you both on full alert

at all times until he’s

reprimanded. Do you understand?

ZOE

Copy that.


MOBIUS

Adam… Crack on with the

creature development

extrapolator. We

continue with the mission

until when and if

something transpires.

ADAM

Copy that.

The screen goes blank.

MICHAEL

We may never see him

again, or he might return

to get supplies. He’s

posed a total danger to the

entire project.


MOBIUS

Two against one down

there is better than Zoe

being alone.

Let us hope for the best.


MICHAEL

Agreed.

CUT TO: ADAM and ZOE at the drop probe two crash site.

ADAM

Well, I’ve got the animals,

you’ve got the humans,

I suppose we better set about

cultivating the planet’s

population.

ZOE

I can have a prototype working

by tonight I reckon.

ADAM

I’ve already lined up the

livestock production generator.

It’s just a question of producing

each creature now

in the physical world environment.

ZOE

You know, twenty years ago,

when Mobius first pitched

this project, I hoped

one day his mad ideas

might come to fruition.

It’s hard to believe this

is all real.

ADAM

With a mind like his, we owe him a lot.

ZOE

Everything…

ADAM

I guess this makes you ‘Eve’…

ZOE

You can all me Eve if it pleases you.

ADAM

And me more famous and important

than Neil Armstrong…


ZOE

Only biblically… And you know how the

braindead no longer accept

the ancient texts

as legitimate evidence for higher

intelligence.

ADAM

How did Mobius know?

ZOE

How did he know what?


ADAM

That he was destined for all this?


ZOE

Well, I’m not sure he did. It just seemed

like a good idea. As soon as he’d cracked

the physics behind time travel and rapid

terraforming, he was like a kid with a new

toy, and a mind buzzing with creative

ideas.

ADAM

What about your son?

ZOE

He was warned about the

dangers of the mission.

He knew there was a strong chance mummy

and daddy wouldn’t be coming home.

He was always destined to be a major

part of the project anyway, given

we doctored his genes at birth

as part of Mobius’s ‘divine implant’

theory.

ADAM

Joshua’s a bright kid…

Takes after his parents.


ZOE

You know it. Okay. I’m

ready to fire the machine up.

We’ll have company within

24 hours if the rapid genetic

development software

functions correctly.

ADAM

Let’s get making people…

ZOE

And not the traditional way…


ADAM

No, of course not!

ZOE

Weird though, isn’t it?


ADAM

What?


ZOE

To think that human cloning,

illegal in our day

in the future, is the source of all

humanity.

ADAM

No weirder than anything

else I’ve experienced

today. Listen, I can’t

leave you until we know

where he is…


ZOE

See this?

ZOE reveals a fire axe.

ZOE

If he comes back, I’ll be waiting.

ADAM

You sure?


ZOE

Sure…


ADAM

Okay, good luck.


ZOE

You too… Now populate

the planet with life!

ADAM

On it!

ADAM leaves. ZOE gets back to work.

FADE OUT.

FADE IN… Evening sunset – EXT. EARTH

ZOE is preparing the DNA replicator to generate a humanoid in the machine that was in Probe 2. She is running last minute checks on all the contents and necessary levels of matter building equipment.

There is a cracking of a twig as D.B. approaches.

D.B.

Listen… We need to talk.

ZOE grabs the axe.

ZOE

Stay away from me, or I

will ram this through

your skull.

D.B.

Look, I know it looks

bad… but really, I’m an

okay guy.

ZOE

Who are you? What do you want?

D.B.

I’m an old school colleague of Mobius.

He doesn’t know about me these days,

but I read up on him in the New Scientist,

and was intrigued at his success.


ZOE

He told me all about his friends. He

never mentioned anyone like you.

D.B.

Well, it’s been so long… Look, where are we,

exactly?


ZOE

You’re on planet earth.

D.B.

What year?!

ZOE

The very first.

D.B.

You what?

ZOE

You heard. You won’t understand

the technology

involved. You don’t seem

the brightest.

D.B.

Well, there’s no need to be rude… Here, are

you hungry? That vegetation is growing at

a remarkable rate.

ZOE

The installed initial build

functionality will revert to usual

velocity of growth after the initial

subwave nanotics have established

the field bed. I have food, thanks.

D.B.

Look, can’t we just be

friends? I admit I

don’t know how you create

such genius technology,

but I’m still a human

being, aren’t I?


ZOE

I’ll be the judge of that.


D.B.

Taste this… it’s good.


ZOE

No thanks.

ZOE goes to check a state of levels on a screen and trips, cutting herself on the axe in her hand by mistake.

ZOE

Arrghh! DAMN!

D.B.

Here, let me help you.

ZOE

Leave… me… alone…

D.B.

You’re in pain though, right? This

is a natural pain relief.


ZOE

And who made you the master of biochemical

healing?

D.B.

I do know ‘some’ stuff…

ZOE

Give it here then…

ZOE eats the fruit from a tree and starts tripping out.

D.B.

Feels good, right? I ‘think’ it’s DMT.

ZOE

Y… yes…

D.B.

Good… See? I’m not so bad…

ZOE

I guess everyone can be redeemed.

D.B.

And when you’re fully intoxicated, you can pleasure me.


ZOE

I beg your pardon?

As they get closer in trust, DOM whips the axe out of her hand and puts it around her neck.

D.B.

If I was truly evil,

I could kill you now…

So why don’t you show

a little trust, huh?

ZOE

O…okay…

D.B.

Good… good… Now, seeing

as we’re out here all alone,

I could do with

some cheering up myself.


ZOE

What do you want?

D.B.

Oh, I don’t know… Let me think…

D.B. grins malevolently.

ZOE, increasingly intoxicated sees his size and looks uncertain.

D.B.

Come on baby… that natural drug should

be taking effect big time now. Come give

old D.B. some love.

ZOE walks away tripping, disorientated, wide eyed and vacant in the mind.


She stumbles into a cave. She sees a vision of a rustic young humanoid boy, struggling, with flint, to scratch something into the wall, lit by the fire. He looks at her with eyes of terror.

She manages to stumble forward, and places her right hand over his right hand… She hallucinates a computer mouse in the future rendered perfectly over her right hand, writing digital fragments into the cave wall. The boy looks afraid and in awe.

She shudders and falls back, grappling for logic and reason. She cannot find it… And pukes as she sees a laser optic sight slide along the cave and when it rests upon her forehead, and blossoms into the graphic of a rose.

She has a paroxysm of desire, and D.B. approaches, shining and shimmering in a false golden light.

D.B. unzips his flies and reveals his penis to her off camera.

She kneels down and begins to fellate him in a druggie stupor.

D.B. grins with insidious pleasure.

CUT TO: EXT: EARTH – Next morning.


ADAM birthing from the cloning machine the world’s first cow. It is rapidly built inside a cage using high tech lasers and ‘ingredients’ of livestock gleaned from the local terrain. It is designed fast from the skeleton upward, until it emerges grunting and snorting, a healthy living cow.

ADAM

Awesome… The system works.

ZOE comes running through to ADAM’s downed probe.

ZOE

Adam… Adam… Help… I think

I’ve done something

incredibly stupid…


ADAM

What’s wrong?

ZOE

The impostor… he came

to me… and gave me

a substance… and… and…

ADAM

And what?!


ZOE

I might have ‘done things’ with him…

ADAM

You what!?!?


ZOE

I was drugged… Tripping out and everything.

ADAM

Mobius will kill you!!

ZOE

I know! What are we going to do?!


ADAM

Where is he now?


ZOE

I don’t know. He disappeared again.

ADAM

For goodness sake! Are you insane?

ZOE

He charmed me… I believed

for a moment he wasn’t

so bad… and then the

drug he gave me hit me

and I lost my marbles.

ADAM

For God’s sake Zoe…

ZOE

God? How ironic…

She looks up to see the letters ‘G Od’ as the only surviving livery on the side of the ship from the words ‘Song Odyssey’.

ADAM

Well, I’m not telling Mobius.

This is your call.

ZOE

He’ll never speak to me again…

ADAM

I can’t believe you’ve be so stupid…

ZOE

Now can I…

CUT TO: The Song Odyssey mother ship in space.

MOBIUS is livid on learning the news.

MOBIUS

You did WHAT?!?!!?

ZOE (On transmitter)

I’m sorry. I’m so sorry.

He drugged me and

I lost control of my senses.


MOBIUS

HOW COULD YOU?!!?

ZOE

I’m sorry bubba… Please, forgive me…

MOBIUS

FORGIVE YOU!? I’M OUTRAGED!!!

ZOE

Oh bubba, I’m so sorry…

MOBIUS

GOD DAMN IT, YOU WERE THE ONLY WOMAN I TRUSTED

MY WHOLE LIFE…

ZOE

I know… I know… the Hannah thing from years

ago… you must think me so awful.

MOBIUS

YES I BLOODY DO!!!! NEVER

SPEAK TO ME AGAIN!

YOU WILL SUFFER FOR THIS

FOREVER!!! SO GODDAMN

UNPROFESSIONAL!!!

MOBIUS smashes the console in rage and sparks fly.

MOBIUS

Oh shit…

MICHAEL

MOBIUS… What’s wrong? The probe

salvage systems have

gone off line…

MOBIUS

YOU WON’T BELIEVE WHAT

HAS HAPPENED. Is there

no way you can fix it?


MICHAEL

I’m a pilot, not an

engineer, but I can

take a look. If we

don’t fix it, they’ll

be stuck down there

forever…

MOBIUS

I know… then again…

maybe that’s just

what she deserves… Either

way, we now have no

choice but to send a trans

time comms channel.

Genesis Corp has to

know what’s going on.

MICHAEL

Well, look, the bulk

of the mission is done

or able to be completed…

the very fact we exist

in the future is proof

our plan works… So

it might not be all so bad.

Keep the faith, brother.

CUT TO:


EXT. PLANET EARTH – Drop probe two landing zone.

ZOE looks maudlin and upset as she creates a synthetic human from the genetic development machine. We see it being generated from skeleton upward, through the layers of flesh. After the process is complete, ZOE opens the container they’re made in. It opens its eyes, and gets out, looking pale, naked and haunted.

ZOE (miserably)

He gives you life… so use it…

The synthetic human wonders away as she begins to create the second one.

CUT TO:


GENESIS CORP: The future. (2077).

GABRIEL is working at his desk when the time channel comms signal begins beeping.

GABRIEL

Shit… Oh my gosh, oh my gosh…

The message reads: ‘Mission jeopardised as feared. Implement Operation: Juliet Charlie’.

GABRIEL

Juliet Charlie?! Oh

my gosh… Oh my gosh…

Where’s Joshua’s number?

CUT TO: ‘The Song Odyssey’ in the distant past.

MOBIUS

Listen MICHAEL… I haven’t

been square with you

on a few matters.

MICHAEL

I thought I knew everything

about you, Mobius.

MOBIUS

I never told you the truth…

the whole truth…

MICHAEL

Go on…?

MOBIUS

I always believed I was vital

to humanities existence

at a profound level… but

I never knew the generation

of the planet would go in

keeping with the ancient

texts the wait it has / will…

until now…

MICHAEL

So what do we do?

MOBIUS

We… don’t. The earth

is still terraforming,

and the project is

building… but in order to

rid the world of evil – which

I never wanted installed

into the program – I’m going

to have to need my sons help.

Evil, is an error in

the code, and as

you know, Joshua was raised

under specific puritan

methodology to cultivate ’specialist

DNA’. I’ve prepped him since

birth for the possibility.

The possibility I feared

would happen, but never

believed until now.


MICHAEL

So what do we do?

MOBIUS

We have to go back to our

own timeline to get him.

MICHAEL

What about Adam and Zoe?

MOBIUS

Taking time dilation into

account, they might not

know we’re even gone.

MICHAEL

We can’t leave them there.

What if something goes

wrong our end?

MOBIUS

It’s a risk I’m being forced to take.


MICHAEL

My God Mobius… Are you in inhuman?

MOBIUS

Not inhuman… no… It’s just cold, hard,

brutal logic… to get the job done.

Or none of us will exist. Zoe and Adam

know all about my pre-warned ’Key decision

bravo’ in case of mission failure.

CUT TO:

The future – GENESIS CORP – DAY.

JOSHUA comes running into GABRIEL’s office.

JOSHUA

I heard what’s up. Fire up the second

vessel.

GABRIEL

The Adonis? But you’re not fully trained

on its technical specification yet.

JOSHUA

Dad taught me enough. He made an exact second

model of the Song Odyssey in case something

went wrong. Well, I guess something has

gone wrong, and I’m the man to help.

GABRIEL

But what if something goes awry for you?

JOSHUA

I’d rather die trying to rescue my parents

than die here alone not knowing their fate.

GABRIEL

Then I’m coming with you.

JOSHUA

You sure? You do have a wife who loves you…

GABRIEL

Genesis Corp is my life’s work too Joshua.

I’m integral to the plan at a lower

level, and I wish to help.

JOSHUA

Okay, grab a helmet. We launch ASAP.

GABRIEL

Copy that.

CUT TO: INT. The past on the Song Odyssey

MOBIUS

Okay Michael, standing

by to jump to original

origin point… Hold on…

MICHAEL

Standing by…

MOBIUS

3… 2… 1… HIT IT!

MOBIUS presses a large red button and the ship zooms into light speed and disappears back towards the future.

CUT TO: EXT. FUTURE PRESENT DAY – GENESIS CORP.

JOSHUA

3… 2… 1… All systems go…

GABRIEL

Copy that…

The reserve time travel ship launches, and they peel into the air before launching the time jump process.

CUT TO:

The Song Odyssey arriving back in the future, and landing at GENESIS CORP.

MOBIUS

We made it… Now let’s find my son

as part of the evil extraction process.

CUT TO:

Distant past… The reserve ship arrives at the beginning of earth’s cultivation process.

GABRIEL (looking out at earth being developed by nanotics).

Oh my God, it’s beautiful.


JOSHUA

Something’s wrong… There’s no sign of the

Song Odyssey anywhere on scan.

GABRIEL

What about on earth?

JOSHUA

It’s picked up the two probes.

They’re still here… But…

GABRIEL

But what…?


JOSHUA

There’s a number of humanoid

lifeforms registered

on earth on the pickup

sweep scans.

GABRIEL

The human cloning experiment

is going well then?

JOSHUA

Yes, but there’s a foreign

genetic strain…

An impostor somehow. Neither cloned

DNA or our own team.

GABRIEL

That makes no sense…

JOSHUA

No, I know. We’re going

to have to fly down there.


GABRIEL

Okay, setting computer

sequence to landing

process.

The reserve ship enters the atmosphere.

ZOE and ADAM are working on the ground.

ZOE is teaching a newly modelled human female clone to speak.

ZOE

I… am… Zoe…

CLONED FEMALE (Struggling to communicate)

Eh… em… Zooey…

ZOE

No no, ‘I am Zoe’.


CLONED FEMALE

Aye am Zoey.


ZOE

Better! Good!

ADAM is harvesting a young piglet from the machine, and allows it to run among the others once the build process is complete.

They look up to see the vessel approaching, surrounded by a few animals and cloned humans.

ZOE

Phew… They haven’t forgotten us…

ADAM

Wait… that’s not the Song Odyssey.

THAT’S THE RESERVE SHIP! THE ADONIS!

ZOE

That’s not in the plan at all.

Something must be up…

We see D.B. spot the ship as he’s having sex with one of the cloned human females, he gets up and sprints in its direction.

The reserve ship lands on planet earth.

JOSHUA

Okay, give me a while to find them.

If anything goes wrong, contact me on

the transmitter. You stay here

and protect the craft.


GABRIEL

Copy that.

JOSHUA lowers the landing gantry and begins to descend when D.B. comes sprinting out of the bushes and smashes him around the head, knowing him momentarily unconscious. D.B. enters the reserve vessel.

D.B.

GET ME BACK TO MY TIME ZONE NOW.

GABRIEL

Who are you? You are breeching Genesis

Corp rules and regulations.


D.B.

Don’t give me that… Recalibrate the reality

time jump system. That IS what this is about,

isn’t it?

GABRIEL

I do not have the authority to…

D.B.

Just do it…

JOSHUA arrives from coming to.

JOSHUA

Listen, I don’t know who you are, but

you are ORDERED to stand down.

D.B.

I take orders from nobody… Now GET ME

OUT OF HERE!

D.B. rapidly scans the dashboard and presses a button. The ship launches again.

JOSHUA

What are you DOING? You don’t know

how to control this thing?

D.B.

I can hazard a guess.

D.B. presses ‘Return time sequence’ button.

CUT TO ZOE and ADAM:

ZOE

Leaving so soon?

ADAM

I don’t know what going on anymore.

Come, let us generate a leopard.

ZOE

Why can’t a plan come together?

CUT TO: The bridge of the Adonis.

It is travelling briefly through time but stops in the mid range future.

GABRIEL

YOU DON’T KNOW WHAT YOU’RE DOING.

THE PRECISE COORDINATES ON THE

TIME JUMP WE’RE NOT CALIBRATED

YET FOR THE RETURN JOURNEY DUE TO

CHRONOLOGICAL OSSCILATION DROP OUT.


D.B.

THEN WHEN ARE WE?!?!

JOSHUA

I WARNED YOU.

D.B. looks out of the window and sees earth about 5,000 B.C. way after the origin time point, but still years ago from the traditional future present of 2077. A young tribal man emerges from the fields of somewhere in the middle East and looks up to see the vessel. This is EZEKIEL.

He looks perplexed, and falls to his knees in terror.

JOSHUA

Pass me the ship manual, we have to get back to

our traditional timeline. AND YOU, YOU SIT DOWN

AND SHUT UP…

D.B.

Make me…

GABRIEL emerges and smacks him round the head with a fire extinguisher. He passes out cold.

JOSHUA

Back to the traditional present Gabriel.

GABRIEL

What about Operation Juliet Charlie?

JOSHUA

You think we can still

go ahead with that,

given we have an intruder?

GABRIEL

It might be the only way…

I’ll lock him in

the cryo bay. We can

then continue with

the mission.


JOSHUA

Okay, we’ll give it a go.

We’re going to have to jump

to Y axis time point in the timeline.


GABRIEL

Calibrating specific jump nodes as we speak.

JOSHUA

Okay, let’s do it.

CUT TO:

Close up of a high tech contrivance which is an IVF implant device.

GABRIEL removes it from its housing.

GABRIEL

Okay, I was trained

how to use this…

It stores your

genetic code, right?



JOSHUA

Right… And as soon as

we rendezvous with

the intended vessel,

we undertake the plan.

Time jump specs are

installed. Let’s do this.

JOSHUA punches the time jump button and the craft zooms off leaving EZEKIEL perplexed.

CUT TO:


Young virgin MARY outside her home circa 1 B.C.E. she is washing fabrics and singing an ancient mysterious song.


The Adonis arrives and lands discreetly. GABRIEL disembarks and walks toward MARY. MARY looks afraid.

GABRIEL

<in Aramaic>

Be not afraid…

He raises the IVF device and smiles. MARY looks confused and unsure.

CUT TO:

PRESENT FUTURE DAY – MOBIUS and MICHAEL have landed back at GENESIS CORP.

MICHAEL

He’s nowhere to be

found right now,

and the reserve ship

the Adonis is gone.

He must have gone after us.


MOBIUS

Damn… If that’s true,

then I only hope

he knows what he’s doing.

MICHAEL

Present day conditions are

all running smoothly,

however, which would indicate…


MOBIUS

…That he’s achieved his mission…

MICHAEL

Correct.

MOBIUS

I guess all we can do now is wait.

CUT TO:

OAD and the birth of JESUS CHRIST via MARY. JOSEPH is smiling holding her hand and she holds the IVF device metal name holder in her hand. The magi have arrived bearing gold, myrrh, etc.

They all smile and awe at the arrival of the new baby, the cave they are in deluged in spiritual, golden light.

A man runs in, speaking in Aramaic. English subtitles read:

MAN

Come… You must leave, Herod is

killing all new born babies.


MARY

Where can we go?


MAN

Head for Egypt… You

will be safe there

as asylum seekers.

CUT TO: MARY and JOSEPH packing the donkeys with their baby and travelling across the desert plains.

CUT TO:

CU of D.B’s eyes on the Adonis furious with rage and hatred.

D.B.

Get me out of here…

GABRIEL

You should be so lucky.

D.B.

Look, come here… I know how to get

out of this…

GABRIEL

Oh, you do, do you?

D.B. has managed to subtly untie his manacles, and grabs GABRIEL’s head and smashes it against the wall. He breaks free of his chambers and runs to the ship console. He presses a button on the time console. JOSHUA enters.

JOSHUA

DON’T!! You don’t know what you’re doing!!

D.B. swipes at JOSHUA, knocking him old cold too.

CUT TO:


CUE MUSIC.

Montage sequence of the little baby JESUS growing up and becoming a boy where he plays with childish toys, to a teenager scoring weed outside a pyramid and consulting the ancient texts. To a young man wondering alone in the wilderness. All the while intercut with images of D.B. on the Adonis trying to work out what to press.

CUT TO:

JESUS CHRIST as a young man in the wilderness.

The Adonis crash lands, covering the ‘S’ of ‘Adonis’ so it reads ‘Adoni’ and there is damage to the system. D.B. leaves the ship, taking a jet pack with him, and begins to haunt the young JESUS CHRIST for a sustained period of time.


JESUS stares at the words ‘Adoni’.

JESUS

Father?

JOSHUA comes to, as does GABRIEL.

JOSHUA

My God, it’ll take

days to repair this…

GABRIEL

Where is he?


JOSHUA

Don’t know, and right

now, I don’t care.

We have to repair this

vessel ASAP… Pass me

the tool box.


GABRIEL

How long do you think it will take?

JOSHUA

Days, maybe weeks, as long

as the integrity of

the ship circuitry is not

compromised. The wires

are all mangled and

the motherboard

of the time jump system

has anomalies which

will need debugging.

GABRIEL

We best get a move on…

JOSHUA

Oh, and if you see that

guy, perhaps kill him?

GABRIEL

I’ll think about it.

CUT TO JESUS CHRIST walking through the wilderness. D.B. approaches him, and speaks in distorted, Satanic English, as he picks up JESUS with his jet pack and transports him to the high temple, and the mountains, etc. JESUS answers in broken English.

D.B.

So what makes you so special to Genesis Corp?

If you are the Son of God,

tell these stones to become bread.


JESUS

It is written: ’Man shall not live on

bread alone, but on every word that

comes from the mouth of God.’

D.B.

If you are the Son of God, throw yourself

down. For it is written: ’He will command

his angels concerning you,and they will lift you up in their hands,

so that you will not strike your foot against a stone’.


JESUS It is also written: ’Do not put

the Lord your God to the test.’


D.B.

All this I will give you, if you

will bow down and worship me.

JESUS

Away from me, Satan! For it is written:

’Worship the Lord your God, and serve him only.

CUT TO: JOSHUA banging a hammer against the infrastructure of the ships design, he fixes a plate and drills it into position.

JOSHUA

Only forty days too late for departure…

But that should be working now. The ship

technical manuals are most detailed.


GABRIEL

Good, because we’re running out of food

supplies too.

JOSHUA

We should be ready for launch…

D.B. arrives at the gantry ramp again and enters the ship.

GABRIEL

You…

D.B.

Listen… We need to talk…

JOSHUA

Get out…

D.B.

No… You need me to return to our home time.


JOSHUA

Why don’t we just leave you here?


D.B.

Because if you did that, time would

not be fully operational, would it?


GABRIEL

I’m not sure you’re included in the fates of man.


D.B.

Well, we’ll just have to find out, won’t we?

GABRIEL

Josh?

JOSHUA

Leaving a cretin like this in the here

and now ‘could’ disrupt time gradient

behaviour and do serious damage to the

known flow of the space time continuum.

D.B.

Your matter extrapolator… it can design

pretty much anything in a 3-D build then?

JOSHUA

That is correct.

D.B.

Good, then design me this…

D.B. hands JOSHUA a photo of ‘the throne of Satan’ as found currently in Berlin.

JOSHUA

What the Hell is that?

D.B.

It’s a sculpture devoted to

mythology originally found

in Turkey.

I love it. I found it when I went

on a Hitler cruise to Germany. It’s

in a museum there.

Take the design and build it for me.

If I’m the devil, as you think, then

this is my throne, surely?

So build it for me. I want to

see what this tech can do.

JOSHUA looks at GABRIEL blankly.

GABRIEL

Lock him in the cryo chamber

again and build it.

He might be right that it’s a

part of history, with his

name on it.

Besides, stone rendering takes

up very little computation power.

JOSHUA

Okay.

D.B. is locked in the cryogenic booth again, and JOSHUA sees about feeding the design of the ‘throne’ into the ship computer.

Very quickly a real marble sculpture is rendered outside the ship using the future design.

GABRIEL

A part of me thinks we should leave

him here on it. Mythology, eh?

Truly, Satan is the father of lies!

JOSHUA

I think he fancies himself a Zeus when

high on cocaine.

GABRIEL

Is that woman Zoe?


JOSHUA

Doubt it… Possibly Hannah?



CUT TO: PRESENT FUTURE DAY – GENESIS CORP.

MOBIUS is looking intently at data sheets.

MOBIUS

Given the Adonis is missing, and there’s

no sign of Joshua, or Gabriel for that

matter, I can only presume they

got the message and implemented

Operation Juliet Charlie.

MICHAEL

Then what do we do now…?


MOBIUS

We wait for time to catch up and realign.

I.e. They should be returning if all has

gone to plan…



CUT TO: A cave in ancient earth Eden – Early evening.

ZOE is an old lady, dying, next to ADAM, an old man, with their two biological sons Cain and Abel, with plenty of synthetic human clones and animals watching, including a child of one of the clones impregnated by D.B.

CAIN and ABEL are scratching images into the wall of the cave with a flint. They resemble humans and animals, with a further image denoting the circular probes.

ZOE

I guess they’re never coming back.

ADAM

We were warned all along about the dangers

of the mission.

ZOE

I guess he made ‘key decision bravo’.

ADAM

I guess.

ZOE

At least I don’t die in vain Adam.

At least I know I had purpose.

ADAM

You’ve done all you can.

ZOE

I hope they remember me… in… the future…

ADAM

You know they will.

ZOE

Thank you… for helping me…

ADAM

It is my honour.

ABEL

Mum… are you going to be okay?

ADAM looks at ABEL and smiles, then turns to ZOE.

ADAM

It’s okay… Let go… Mission accomplished. We’ll be fine.

ZOE

May Mobius bless you, Adam…

ADAM

And also you…

ZOE takes a final look at her children, and passes away from old age.

CUT TO:


The Adonis hurtling through space time. It arrives back at GENESIS CORP. The gang plank is lowered and GABRIEL marches D.B. out by the scruff of his neck.

D.B.

You need to destroy this entire company.

You’re a disgrace to traditional logic

and physics.


GABRIEL

Silence infidel.

D.B. makes a break for it, and escapes the building, with Gabriel chasing behind. JOSHUA emerges to meet his father, MOBIUS.

JOSHUA

He’s done as much damage as I imagine

he can.

MOBIUS

I wouldn’t be so sure Josh…

JOSHUA

Oh, dad… it’s good to see you.

MOBIUS

Well done son. Seeing you here now, I

can only assume the mission was a success.

JOSHUA

I believe it was.

MOBIUS

Well done son. In you I am well pleased.

CUT TO:


CUE MUSIC: ‘Easy living’ by Uriah Heep.


JUDAS’s hands take the twenty pieces of silver, and he wonders out of a room looking shifty.

ROMAN SOLDIERS grab the Christ.


The disciples are all talking amid themselves in fear.


JUDAS hangs himself from a tree.


Jesus is crucified in a silhouette, with the disciples huddled together.


CUE montage sequence of all his disciples being murdered in different places, except for ST. JOHN the divine who is exiled in a cave on Patmos.

CUT TO: FUTURE PRESENT DAY – GENESIS CORP.

MOBIUS is doodling a man in Hell in the foreground.

MOBIUS

Listen, I have to be straight with you.


MICHAEL

Go on…


MOBIUS

Known existence wasn’t

the only invention I designed.

MICHAEL

Oh?


MOBIUS

I’ve known that D.B. villain most of

my life. Evil has a way of ruining the

most wonderful things… So, when applying

the quantum blueprints to existence, I

realised a fate render for the evil doers

was necessary if the bulk of humanity

is to have a ‘winning experience’ in

the long range future.

JOSHUA

What did you add to the fate render?

MOBIUS

Each Mobius strip Joshua, depicting the eternal loop, has a twist in the middle. The pinch point

of infinity.

JOSHUA

What… did… you… design?

MOBIUS

A penal zone for the iniquitous,

hidden behind the simulation veil

in a transdimensional cross patch.

You might call it…

JOSHUA

What?


MOBIUS

Hell…

CUT TO:


GABRIEL chasing D.B. through the modern city streets of New York.

GABRIEL corners him on the edge of a large industrial wasteland with a deep hole.

GABRIEL

You can’t keep running from what

you’ve done.

D.B.

Who are you anyway? YOU HAVE NO RIGHT TO

TIME TRAVEL…


GABRIEL

WE MADE EVERYTHING…

D.B.

You’re deranged mad men with too much power…

GABRIEL

There’s only one lunatic present, Sir,

and I strongly feel it isn’t me.

D.B.

Stand back, or I’ll kill you…

GABRIEL

With what?

GABRIEL approaches him slowly, and simply pushes him over the edge of the industrial abyss. He falls into the pit of the dark and gloom. Not a ridiculous, deadly height, but quite a fall nonetheless.

GABRIEL smiles and turns to return to GENESIS CORP.

D.B. hurt and damaged at the base of the ‘abysm’, surrounded by debris, pulls out his phone and makes a call. He dials stored number ‘HANNAH’.

HANNAH’S VOICE

Hello? Hannah here.

D.B.

Hannah… It’s me… I need your help…

HANNAH’S VOICE

Where are you?


D.B.

Find… me… Call FRANK and NICK too.

CUT TO:

GENESIS CORP LABS – A close up a concealed inferno. MOBIUS, JOSHUA NADIR, and MICHAEL are all looking into it.

MOBIUS

Hell had to be designed, as

a firewall actuality

based theory manifested

to house those who

disrupt the knowledge of

the ‘program’ and behave

inappropriately. That is to say:

‘The reality simulation’.

If the Hell fate render

were not to be implemented

into the fate channel of

the simulation, evil

would grow exponentially

due to the demonic

equation of freedom

of will combined with

disbelief in higher

intellect and ’things

unknown’ to them.

The Hell fate render

is ostensibly the

dump tray for all

human cloning in the

experiment that was

devoid of actual purpose

or reasonable

methodology.

JOSHUA

Where is the Hell zone located?

MOBIUS

In a subdimension beyond

the veil of this

3-D quantum simulation.

It’s completely sealed

off from access to the

public until after the

specified date,

when only the damned will

be escorted there

using an atomic veil disruptor

portalisation trigger

system.


MICHAEL

The specified date of what?

MOBIUS

The victory over my many enemies.

CAPTION: “Some months later…”

CUT TO:


CU of news report on Television. D.B. is on TV as a world leading business man and politician. He is smiling and speaking to the masses.

D.B. (On TV)

Thanks Jeremy… It’s great to be here.

JOSHUA

Dad… you seen this?

MOBIUS

As I feared… He’s lusting for global

power.

D.B. (On TV)

And it is with the powers invested

In me that as CEO of Fate Limited, the

leading brand in perfect future ideals,

we can now offer humanity a rare and exciting

opportunity to become at one with

the internet 24/7 with the new biochip

13, which is now approved for use, and to

connect us all automatically, at all

times, to the earth net system.

JOSHUA

He’s trying to lead them all…

MOBIUS

They lap up his every word, not knowing

he’s making slaves of them all.

The internet always was a hot bed

of irrelevant drama queens all

believing palpable nonsense and conspiracy

theories.

JOSHUA

What are we going to do? He can’t win. Can he?


MOBIUS

Don’t worry. His company Fate Ltd has

an insider working for me. An old friend. I’ll reveal the final trick in my plan when ready.

JOSHUA

I hope you know what you’re doing.

MOBIUS

Hey, Josh… it’s Dad! Have I ever let

you down yet?

CUT TO:

A crowd of fans of GENESIS CORP outside the building.

D.B. pulls up with HANNAH, FRANK and NICHOLAS in a blacked out van. They all emerge wielding machine guns and shoot the entire crowd dead.

FADE OUT on a CU of D.B. laughing madly as he sprays the machine gun shouting ‘DEATH TO THE BELIEVERS!!!!’ repeatedly like a maniac.

FADE IN:


JOHNNY as a middle aged man being given a ‘crown’ of electronic wizardry by MOBIUS.

NADIR is tattooing JOHNNY’s thigh with the words ‘FAITHFUL AND TRUE’.

MOBIUS

This will help protect you.

You always were a great friend

Johnny, and now I need your help

in the conflict.

JOHNNY

It’s great to be included.


MOBIUS

You might find this helpful too…

MOBIUS unravels a ‘laser bow’ and hands it to JOHNNY.

JOHNNY pulls it back and fires a high powered laser bolt at a target wall. It explodes leaving a large hole.

JOHNNY

Awesome…

CUT TO:

D.B. as a rich and successful business politician in his office studying the microchip that will go in everyone’s right hand or forehead so they may trade electronically. FRANK and NICHOLAS as older men are with him.

FRANK

I can use my trendy pop culture

prophet status to

deceive many into thinking you’re as

awesome as we think buddy.

NICHOLAS

And my unit of punks will enjoy smashing

the system, given they’re all anarchic

nutters! Bless my little nutters!

D.B.

Hannah… my love… Pleasure me…

We see HANNAH for the first time as an adult, drunk, with a glass of wine, laughing at the photo of dead bodies of believers in GENESIS CORP.

HANNAH

Like I pleasure all your men?

D.B.

Yes my little whore… Come come.

My turn.

HANNAH

As is your will, my Lord.

As she goes down on him, he takes a black marker and writes “Babylon the great, mother of whores and of Earth’s abominations”.

CUT TO:


GABRIEL and JOSHUA – HOME – DAY.

The TV is on again, again promoting D.B.

JOSHUA is preparing a high powered rifle. He looks through the scopes, and inspects its functioning.

JOSHUA

I’m not risking him getting any

more powerful… He can’t destroy all

of us. Even though I know that is

his wont. He must be stopped.

GABRIEL

I’m not stopping you kid, but won’t

Mobius have words to say?


JOSHUA

Dad relies on technology too much,

and not enough in direct action.

In the few short months he’s been

rising to power, we already

have wars in the middle east and

rumours of wars. I’m going to do what

I have to do for everyone.

GABRIEL

Good luck then kid.

JOSHUA locks a bullet into place with the letters ‘D.B.’ inscribed on them.

CUT TO:

J-P and D (as old men) are dressed in cheap clothing and being interviewed on national television for a current affairs program.

INTERVIEWER

So you both knew Mobius at school, and

believe he is the inventor of the universe?


J-P

That’s correct. He always was ahead of his time.


D

Mobius is a categorical genius. He was

inventing multi user domains within an

advanced 3D environment before any of

us new our subroutines from our patch

relays.

INTERVIEWER

And you wish to tell the world just how

great Mobius and his creative team are?

D

We want the world to appreciate the truth,

now we know it. We understand for many

it will be hard to accept, however, the

truth is miraculous, and we are fully

witness to our friend’s achievements.

J-P

I believe he has imbued us with

extraordinary knowledge and powers,

seeing as we were good friends, and

I for one thank him.

INTERVIEWER

Well, don’t you think he has a lot to

answer for too?

D

Only if you’re ungrateful for existence…

The audience in the studio boo and jeer, filled with disbelief and hatred.

CUT TO: EXT – Studios – DAY

J-P

I told you they wouldn’t believe us.

D

We tried.

J-P

We did.

D.B. approaches in a long black mac and shoots them both point blank range with a silencer, and then waltzes off casually without being caught. They both die.

INTERVIEWER

In a dramatic turn of events, our

controversial guests today have

been murdered outside

the premises of this very studio.

The audience in the studio whoop and cheer that they’ve both been killed.


Camera closes in on the two corpses, the data on an electronic wall calendar reads: ’3rd July 2077’.

CUT TO:

EXT. - Outside the Whitehouse, near future. FRANK is addressing the people – DAY.

NICHOLAS is with his gang of rowdy punks, all jeering, drinking, cheering, fighting and acting like fools.

FRANK

I have a vision! A vision for humanity!

A vision where we can all coexist as one,

under the direction, and leadership, of

my old and excellent friend, D.B.

Come D.B., tell us your excellent plans

for the way ahead, and an exciting future,

where people can do what they want,

all the time, with no fear of penalty.

Now, I have been in charge of this outfit

for nearly 42 whole months, and I have

enjoyed every moment serving you people

with my knowledge of the future.

But now I must make way for D.B. to take

the podium, as he has VERY exciting news

for a VERY exciting future…

D.B. takes the podium.

D.B.

If you knew the sensitive

information I was privy to, regarding

EVERYTHING, then you too, my friends,

would be as cutting

edge in your thinking as

Fate Limited is today,

and DEFY the time meddling

threats of Genesis Corp.

Making my first billion

through the bioimplant

industry in animal welfare

was just the first step.

With this new technology, we can

immerse the entire world

into a functional,

exciting and first rate

tech system of

inconquerable power.

JOSHUA is hidden in a van with his gun. We see D.B. through the hair lines of the scope.

D.B.

And it is with the GREATEST pleasure

in the world, to finally implement the

new biotech into the world’s first person.

Jamie, if you could come forward please…

A smiling man, JAMIE, motions forward to the podium, and they inject in his right hand a microchip, and cover it with a QR tattoo.

JOSHUA takes aim, and shoots.

BANG!

D.B. is hit in the head and falls over. The crowd scream in terror. Panic ensues.

JOSHUA (to GABRIEL)

Let’s move.

The van peels away from the mass panicked crowd.

CUT TO:


CU of D.B.’s wounded head being rushed to hospital on live news TV.

REPORTER

The famous innovator and politician

D.B. has had an attempted assassination

on his name. He is struggling to breathe,

and doctors say it will be a miracle if he

survives. There is no knowledge yet on

any suspects or exact motive,

as the FBI scour the area.

We will keep you up to date on any

further developments as they come in.

This is Tracey Philip’s reporting

for CNN.

CUT TO:

JOSHUA and GABRIEL back at home.

GABRIEL

Great shot Josh. What are you going

to do if he survives?


JOSHUA

Plan B.

GABRIEL

Plan B?

JOSHUA

Yeah, go to war.

CUT TO:


D.B. in private hospital bedroom – DAY. His head is bandaged but he is alive. HANNAH visits him. He can hardly communicate, but does.

D.B.

You know who this was…

HANNAH

Genesis Corp operatives?

D.B.

Who else? Everyone loves me, except

those time meddling freaks

and their fans. When I’m out

we’re going to chip everyone and destroy

Genesis Corp and all its fans.

HANNAH

Yes Lord.

INT. TV interview room – DAY

D.B. has recovered with a small bandage still on his head. He is being interviewed.

D.B.

Genesis Corp were most likely

behind my attempted assassination.

Having had dealings with them

in the past, I can reveal to you

now they have time travel technology

and are MEDDLING with the fabric

of space time.

INTERVIEWER

But Mr. D.B. that is an extraordinary

claim. I trust you have the evidence

to support this accusation?

D.B.

What would you say if I told you

they implemented Christ into

history using time travel

and IVF treatment?


INTERVIEWER

I’d say you were mad as a satchel

of rodents.


D.B.

THEN IT JUST GOES TO SHOW HOW LITTLE

YOU KNOW. GENESIS CORP NOT ONLY

MANIFESTED CHRISTIANITY IN THE PAST

USING TIME TRAVEL, BUT WERE INVOLVED

IN ILLEGAL HUMAN CLONING AT THE

DAWN OF TIME.


INTERVIEWER

Security! Please, D.B. settle down. I

Understand you’ve been through a great

ordeal, but you must try to remain

rational.

D.B.

I AM RATIONAL… IT IS YOU WHO DO NOT

KNOW THE TRUTH. YOU WEREN’T THERE, MAN.

People of earth, I advise

you to be implanted with the biochip,

so we can generate the global tech network

as pioneering new visionaries of a new

dawn for humanity… And we will DESTROY

Genesis Corp and all their fans…

INTERVIEWER

Security!

CUT TO:


Montage sequence with The Rolling Stones’s ‘Gimme Shelter’ playing.

MOBIUS is hurriedly punching code on a computer and launches a large rocket called ‘New City One’.

HANNAH is drinking lashes of wine as she laughs and fornicates with generally thoughtless men.


The birds tweet, the sun is golden, and GENESIS CORP explodes.

The alarms sound.


Lines of people cue up for the biochip.


Others who refuse the chip are imprisoned or killed.

MOBIUS is desperately working on analysing designs for the chip.

JOSHUA is seen fighting in a war with other saints, who are killed.

JOHNNY is seen riding a white horse with his crown and laser bow, and causing all manner of victorious damage as he fights.


JOSHUA escapes unharmed.

Troops around the world are mobilised.

MICHAEL gets into his car, and it detonates, killing him.

GABRIEL is buying a newspaper with D.B.’s headline on the front: ‘Chipping mankind for a promising future’ when a masked assailant shoots him close range in the stomach as he squeezes past. He dies.

CUT TO: MOBIUS’s home – DAY.

JOSHUA slams down a copy of the Bible.

JOSHUA

Fire the response signal NOW…

Before he chips and kills us ALL…

MOBIUS (on the phone to NADIR).

Release the four agents who are

bound at the great river Euphrates…


CUT TO:


CUE MUSIC: Marxman – ‘Ship Ahoy’

NADIR’s hand twiddles some knobs and buttons.

CUT TO:


A patch of land over the Euphrates. The ground begins to shake and crack. An underground, hidden chamber of high tech cryogenic housing emerges, and four warrior agents like something out of Star Wars on crack emerge, highly weaponised, and lethal.

AGENT ONE

It’s time… All units report in.

AGENT TWO

Let’s go to war against these

heathens, gentlemen.

AGENT THREE

We have a lot of culling to do.


AGENT FOUR

Unit one to echo clear…

Pump ’em and dump ’em.

Looks like a third of humanity

has past its sell by date.

CUE shots of the four agents being epic in war at physical and lethal levels against wicked humans who reel in fear and dread.

CUT TO:


Back at home – INT. - DAY

JOSHUA

Four agents?

MOBIUS

Watch and learn, kid. If I contact

Chris at Fate Limited,

he can grant me the signature

destabilising subcode. I then merely

feed it into the Genesis Corp

pulse generator, via the satellites,

and they all drop like flies.

JOSHUA

How do you know?

MOBIUS

You think I’d let me arch enemy try

to outdo me in technology, son?

You think less of me than I imagined.


JOSHUA

Well then do it, and hurry.

MOBIUS

I’ll be wiping out a lot of people.

Will you still respect me as your

father?

JOSHUA

Of course! You invented them in

the first place!


MOBIUS

Illegally…

JOSHUA

I don’t hear them complaining!

MOBIUS

Okay… Thankfully, the system

was in the basement and was not

effected by the explosion. As soon

as I flick that switch though,

D.B. will be even madder.

JOSHUA

That’s a risk I think we need to take

at this juncture.

MOBIUS

Okay… I’ll phone Chris… it’s time…

CUT TO:


CU phone ringing. CHRIS answers, the black friend from the start of the film now a grown man and working inside Fate Limited as an industrial spy for MOBIUS.

CHRIS

Hello? Fate Limited?

Chris speaking,

how can I help?

MOBIUS

Chris… It’s Mobius…

CHRIS

MOBIUS!!! Are you okay?

I heard what happened

to your colleagues…

MOBIUS

It’s time…


CHRIS

Oh, okay…

<whispering>

I guess you want the

subcode field wipe signature?

MOBIUS

Correct.


CHRIS

Okay… it is ‘1-1-2-7-7…’

FADE OUT as he lists the long number string.

CUT TO BASEMENT OF GENESIS CORP – DAY

MOBIUS

6..6… 1… 3… 2… 3…

JOSHUA is inputting the numbers as MOBIUS recites from his notes.

MOBIUS

Passcode: ‘EchoNodeOne777’

JOSHUA

Done…

MOBIUS

Okay, now charge up the Hell fire pulse

array. This will communicate with our

satellites.

JOSHUA

And then?


MOBIUS

And then we detonate everyone in the

world with his insidious chip.

JOSHUA

Okay…


MOBIUS

Ready?


JOSHUA

Ready as can be…


MOBIUS

Fire the electromagnetic pulse

charge through the chip explosive

patch channel.

JOSHUA presses a button. We see the machine whir with lights.


A satellite in space brims with power and beams a signal out over the whole world.

We see people with the chips in their right hand or forehead literally explode and self-conflagrate. Thousands of them, in streets, stores, beaches, and various locations.

CUT TO: OFFICE OF D.B. - DAY

D.B.

WHAT DO YOU MEAN THEY’RE ALL DEAD?


HANNAH

Someone had access to the chip data

security and pulsed a charge

through a component of the chip which

was designed by a Fate Limited employee

to detonate extensively. They were

all walking time bombs.

D.B.

Who the HELL developed that?

HANNAH

It was the team under a certain

Chris Tingle.

D.B.

BRING ME THE HEAD OF CHRIS TINGLE,

AND SELL A NUKE TO THE TALIBAN AS

A SIGN OF MY DISGUST!

I AM SO ANGRY I COULD EAT A NEW

BORN BABY. ALIVE!

HANNAH

Please Lord, try to calm…


D.B.

DO IT!!!!

CUT TO:


CUE MUSIC: “Lift me up” by Moby.

Aerial flying shot of the sea approaching the landscape of NEW YORK. As the camera tracks in, New York is detonated in a nuclear explosion.

The music and visuals fade to black.

There is a sustained pause of black on screen, for a longer period of time than normal, with just an audio track of screams.

INT. THE THRONE OF SATAN – BERLIN - DAY

Then it flickers white to reveal the ivory bust of Emperor Nero in D.B’s hand in a CU on a reverse zoom. It tracks back as D.B. is nursing his sore head and severe loss. MOBIUS’s hand walks into view holding a mystery device.

D.B.

You scummer…

MOBIUS

Thought I might find you here.

Fate is a funny thing, eh, D.B.?

D.B.

Yeah, destiny’s a gas. Why?

Why did you do that?

MOBIUS

Same reason a dog licks its balls.

Because I can.

D.B.

So what now? You rule the world?

MOBIUS

No, not entirely but it is

time to meet your fate.

D.B.

What fate?

MOBIUS

The fate render of the simulation

has Hell itself installed into the coding.

This is where you will spend the

rest of your days.

D.B.

Hell? Give me a break…

MOBIUS

You can’t win, D.B.

HANNAH enters the room with two heavies and CHRIS TINGLE with his arms in cuffs, beaten and bruised.

D.B. (to HANNAH)

Is this the man?

HANNAH

One Christ Tingle…

A traitor in our midst

like no other.

MOBIUS

Good to see you Chris.

I hope they didn’t

hurt you too much.

Hello Hannah. Long

time no see…

HANNAH

Hello Mobius. Still sore?

CHRIS (shrugging with tape over this mouth)

Um-Phum-Fa-Oom-Fa.

HANNAH rips off the tape so he can speak audibly.

CHRIS

I did what I did for the higher good.

MOBIUS

Of course you did, friend.

D.B.

Hannah, security, dispose of them both.

MOBIUS

Not so swift there, Diablo.

I’m holding here

in my hand the trigger system to

the Hell fate render. I just need

to point this at you, squeeze, and

you’re fired, literally, forever.

D.B.

Your tech solutions to human issues

are beginning to anger me…

MOBIUS

Release Chris…

HANNAH and the security look toward D.B.

D.B. urges them to do as he says.

They release Chris from his binds.

MOBIUS

There is no escape for you Diablo.

I managed to launch the New City rocket

into space before you destroyed Genesis

Corp too… On board that rocket is another

quantum matter extrapolator, with a unique

mission.

D.B.

What unique mission?

MOBIUS

To prove I am better, and have always been better

than you since school, I have developed

a plan for a mass housing containment system

for the remaining saved on planet earth. A massive

cube city, will be designed in space, 1,500

miles square.

D.B.

You’re building a city in space?

MOBIUS

Building it in space, correct, and when it’s

fully generated, it will be descending to earth.

D.B.

Well, I have to hand it to you Mobius as

an idea’s man… You’re clearly

leagues ahead of the average fool.

MOBIUS

The trick to matter extrapolation and

development was simply a case of truly

analysing the processes of atomic structure,

and creating a feed channel with atomic laser

pick ups to galvanise matter automatically into

industry standard conversion, according to

build design templates.

D.B.

Good for you… And time travel? How’d you

begin to clock that one?

MOBIUS

Time is a relative illusion.

It is a vessel for our

communal shared experience.

All we had to do was realise time

was a fabricated energy voltage within

a macro vacuum, set in a mass void.

We realised the principles of the tapestry,

and we applied the self-replicating paint

at origin point by engaging with subset

energised field loops in a

chronological distortion

process.

D.B.

Round and round we go, eh?

CHRIS

Like a Mobius trip, D.B.

MOBIUS

You must accept your fate, you and

all your minions. You nearly jeopardised

creation itself. There is no higher

crime than that…

D.B.

SO SUE ME… SECURITY… KILL THEM…

Security go for their guns, but Mobius flashes his trigger system at the two security guards. He presses the button, and a Hell fire portal opens up in the room consuming both security guards with screams of pain as they are consumed into the transdimensional plane. They disappear and the portal closes.

MOBIUS

Now you Hannah… but is there anything

you’d like to say to me for destroying

my life age nineteen, when on the cusp

of greatness?

HANNAH

Er… Sorry?

MOBIUS

I loved you like no other…

HANNAH

Well, it’s a shame you weren’t adequate

in the right ways then really, isn’t it?

MOBIUS

You revolting woman…

HANNAH shrugs nonchalantly.

HANNAH

It’s no biggee.

D.B.

So you’re the creator, and I’m the bad guy.

I get it, I get it… Me and my malignant,

massive schlong and my handsome daring

doo were too much for you. You’ve been jealous

of me, all your life, haven’t you?

MOBIUS

Given the scope of my acumen, and your

insidious behaviour, I feel it is the other

way around. It’s why you should never

bully anybody. Causality applies to

morality as much as anything. And now

you’re feeling the causal chips coming

home to fry. The plane of flame pain awaits

the main vain.

D.B.

GET OUT OF MY FACE.

D.B. hurls the bust of Nero at MOBIUS who dodges. D.B. grabs a long sharp lance and twirls it around his head, and then runs screaming at MOBIUS.

HANNAH follows suit, and begins screaming with a shrilling scream while revealing concealed knives using a mechanism on her wrists which produce blades when she thrusts her arms downward.

MOBIUS

Get out of my creation…

MOBIUS fires the trigger at HANNAH and then D.B. They are both portalised to the Hell zone with a blood curdling scream, with real emphasis on the graphics opening the portal to a place of fiery doom as they reel in horror at their own demise in another dimension.

MOBIUS (to CHRIS)

It is done…

CHRIS

I suspect your mum would be very proud.


MOBIUS

I suspect yours too. Excellent job.

It pays to have close friends from school.

CHRIS

It sure does Mobius. Let’s get a bite

to eat.

CUT TO:


New City One rocket in space. It rapidly builds using the laser quantum matter development extrapolator a massive 1,500 golden city above earth.

CUT TO:

JOSHUA walking along the winsome summer meadows of his home region. He hears a deafening noise and looks up. The New City is slowly entering the earth’s atmosphere and lands in the Atlantic ocean reaching all the way up to space. It appears SPECTACULAR.

CUT TO:

JOSHUA standing on an impressive floor in the NEW CITY. People are happy and milling all around, smoking joints from the leaves of the tree of life which grow abundantly within the walls.

MOBIUS approaches his son.

MOBIUS

I’ve recovered the time array system.

I’ll be able now to finalise a few of the

aspects to creation to ensure all things

flow smoothly.


JOSHUA

Ahhh… the data tablets… and your wise dictates.

MOBIUS

That’s right…

JOSHUA

I miss mum…


MOBIUS

Don’t worry… She was the best.

I’m dealing with my emotions

better these days.

JOSHUA

I just want to thank you for everything.


MOBIUS

No need. I know.

JOSHUA

Well, you’re omniscient, aren’t you?


MOBIUS

Omniscient? Not so much. I never said

I was ‘all knowing’. I’m just smarter

than your average guy.

JOSHUA smiles lovingly as they both take a drag on a joint.

CUT TO:

INT. REBUILT GENESIS CORP – DAY.


Machines are operating on the sleeping FOUR AGENTS who are muscle bound elite warriors who look ready to kill. The machines prepare them for their mission by adding biological and mechanised amendments to their bodies while they are in stasis. They are then transposed to the four cryogenic cooling tanks on conveyor systems by the last leg of the mission.


MOBIUS is standing outside the Song Odyssey as they prepare for a final launch. A large four pod container is lowered into the bulk of the ship, producing gas.

CHRIS is with him, and they are writing ‘YAH-WHO!’ onto the front of the ship with a white spray can.

MOBIUS

Yah-who, indeed… Creation, by us…

All thanks to good education.

CHRIS

I knew you were a bright

spark since Faber House.


MOBIUS

Are the four agents on board and in stasis?

SLOW ZOOM INTO THE CARGO HOLDER. We see inside four cyborg upgraded humans with weapons and advanced features looking like they’re ready for war, in stasis. These are the FOUR AGENTS who were awoken earlier in the film.

CHRIS (V/O)

The four agents are installed,

and ready to fly. Cryogenic tanks

are stable and operational.

MOBIUS

Four of the most dangerous men

in the SAS allowing us to use them

for cyborg engineering, biological

upgrades and such plans which will

have their families pensions met

handsomely.

CHRIS

Ready for launch?


MOBIUS

Just got to install a handful of bug patches

first for a few old friends…

He takes off and calibrates the time jump first to ’6th of July 2077’.

CUE MONTAGE SEQUENCE AND MUSIC: ‘Don’t you forget about me’ – Simple Minds.

He finds the corpses of J-P and D.

He resurrects them from the dead using technology, and they join him on the craft.


They head to the point of origin of Eden. A while after Zoe and Adam have died, and scans the perimeter of the Euphrates. He creates an electronic stasis chamber for the FOUR ANGELS by blowing up a huge hole in the earth with a daisy cutter, placing the sleeping agents in their containment pod in the hole, and recovering it with soil.

He flies to circa 5,000 B.C.E. and flies over a rustic nomadic tribe in Egypt near the pyramids.

The vessel settles on the top of Mount Sinai, as it does so, the spray painted words of ‘YAH-WHO’ are scratched off by pressured branches of trees rubbing against the fuselage, leaving only ‘Y H WH’. MOBIUS presses a button and the craft consumes itself in smoke.

The fragile, timorous hand of MOSES climbs to the venue, and he looks afraid and aghast.

MOBIUS speaks into the exterior tannoy system.

MOBIUS

Be not afraid… For I am the Lord…

MOBIUS presses a button on a machine, and two rock tablets are rapidly inscribed with Hebrew symbols using laser technology, which he delivers to MOSES in person.

He then beams an image of animated fire onto a nearby bush, but it obviously doesn’t burn.

MOSES is humbled, scared and in awe, and walks away with the engraved stone tablets.

Then the ship takes off again, and he punches in a new data code.

We see ST. JOHN THE DIVINE in his cave, scrabbling around.

The ship arrives using high speed time travel to outside his cave.


The old man ST. JOHN is peering through the gap in the rocks, when MOBIUS presses a button and projects imagery into the vision of ST. JOHN THE DIVINE.


We see a quick history of the future as witnessed in the film, and ST. JOHN grabs a pen and parchment.

He writes down: ‘The Revelation of St. John’ (In Ancient Greek with subtitles) on a piece of papyrus.

FADE TO BLACK


END CAPTION: “Inspired by the book of Revelation, by St. John the Divine”.


THE END.


END MUSIC AND TITLES: ‘The end of the world’ – U2

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