What is your opinion?
A Rainy Sunday Morning
"It is a great story, I also love how you narrate the story. I would definitely learn that from you since it's one of my weaknesses when it comes to writing. ❤️❤️❤️"
Didn't see it coming
"This story seemed like a fairly tame romance until the unexpected scene on part 5. Well done!"
Sweet and Sexy
"I loved the book! The ending was a surprise but welcomed! : ) Only problem I had was the dialogue needs a little restructuring. Other than that this book was great! Awesome job author!"
Great
"So I want to say that the story itself was great the author knew how to write and manipulate emotions through her characters. Sylvester was my favorite character out of everyone. But what the author struggles with is separating dialogue tags and maybe just thickening a few details of the story that I think I would love to see as a reader. But I would say that this book is a solid 4/5 stars. Because the dialogue tags made it very confusing who was talking and this made it harder to imagine the story. Oh, and the plot felt rushed and a little unclear. Because the train of emotion was, happy, sad, angry, happy, horny. In that order lol. but I'll be clear. If the author interacts with this review I'll bump it up to 5 stars because one author interaction is excellent and because maybe they can explain a few things for me. But in the meantime, you should for sure check this story out."
Lovely story
"This story was romantic and cute! I loved this couple, Mary and Honey had some underlying insecurities and I admire how the author was able to put them on display, and how the author managed to make the couple sort out their own issues through communication. It's a short story but it keeps the reader entertained. Wonderful! 5 STARS"
Awesome story
"I really enjoyed reading your story. It was so good and well written that I read all the chapters. I really enjoyed how it was love story about a couple going through the motions of their relationship. You did very well at displaying their vulnerability during that time. Even though the story was about gay couple, I could still my own relationship through their eyes and I thought it was beautiful. Well done!"
Short But Splendid
"This is by far the shortest story I have ever read, but damn if it is not the best! The writer is so good in describing the scenes. It had a rainy setting, and at one point, the writer with his descriptive words was able to to make hear the thunder of the stormy night they were having."
Review !
"This short story was everything that you can think about based on the title. Mary and Honey were comforting, loving and amazing. The story passed the vibe check of their relationship. TBH this is my first LGBTQ story, and I am impressed 😌❤️❤️❤️❤️ Highly recommend "
Good story, structure needs work
"For those who enjoy a short story with strong emotional development, this is a great story for you to try out. It's got surprising emotional depth crammed into five (relatively short) chapters. The author could use some improvement on punctuation and grammar, but this is not something that will subtract from the overall enjoyment of the story. I would recommend this for anyone looking for a quick romance read and out for an emotional journey."
Great story
"The story was simple and straight to the point which is great, i also loke Honey in this story. Although it was really short i seemed to quickly like it however the pacing of the story is a bit slow im not sure if you did that because its a short story but overall its great"
