What is your opinion?
Cool Style
"I love your writing style and the story was great! Keep writing!"
Fantastic read
"I commend the author for creating such an interesting short story. I love the personification of the ocean. I hope the author continues to write like this."
Amazing!
"Very descriptively written. The plot is interesting and the author has a good writing style. Keep up the good work!"
Coral and Pearl
"I got goosebumps at the end, not going to lie. I just finished the story in one sitting and all I have to say is great job! Your story is proof that even with simple words you can manage to create something wonderful and you don't need big, long, confusing vocabulary to register an image in the reader's mind. I would have loved to know more about the backstories of Coral, the Prince and Pearl's husband. Though, that didn't stop me from enjoying the story as it is! "
Nice!
"Very interesting. Keep it up"
Great read
"Great story I would read it again. 😎👍"
Coral and Pearl.
"This was fun reading. It was okay and all but the summary does not go too well with the actual book. This is short but interesting. Keep up the good work."
Coral and Pearl
"Even without the nod to "The Little Mermaid" this story stands strongly on its own, as a unique exchange between neighboring noble houses and their relationship with the sea, and could use further exploration! I was interested to know more about how Coral and the Duchess Pearl grew their friendship to such a strong one, apart from being neighbors. I did not get the sense at all that the Duchess was greedy or evil in any way, so it didn't exactly align with your summary, I'd fix that. It would have been nice to get more from Coral's point of view throughout the story too, since she is the one with the secret, and keeping a secret can be exhausting, isolating and bring about lots of emotions, especially at such a high-profile, profound moment for the characters. Might just be my male perspective, but I felt like the Prince and the Duke got barely any screen time, surely they deserve some backstory too, even just if through thoughts or memories of Coral or the Duchess to give them a bit more life. Overall a very good story, and left me wanting to know more about the mysterious Star! Keep at it!!"
