What is your opinion?
Rad
"cool"
Good work!
"I think that the start of the book is good and that it captures my attention! I love the way it reads and how I flows. This makes me want to read more!"
Very good book
"I like all the characters in this, and the imagination is phenomenal. For the most part, it has good pacing, and there are a lot of conflicts and twists to keep readers intrigued. The grammar needs some work, and sometimes a lack of punctuation around dialogue can make it a little confusing as to if it is dialogue or narration we're reading. Other than that, I really enjoyed reading this and seeing the development of the characters, especially the love triangle with the MC. "
Intricate
"I really enjoy characters that realize that they are more than what they realize. Especially when there are twists and turns. Keep up the good work!"
UNLEASHED
"Amazingly storyline with interesting characters."
Still early
"The prologue is interesting and I can't wait for chapter 1. Since it's only a prologue, still early for me to write any comment but as I said before, I can't wait for the next chapters to come out."
Unleash the Power Within
"This is a story with a very broad scope. Greek gods, powers, a fantasy kingdom, a princess...there's a lot going on here. This is a fantasy mystery story and it's really fun to uncover more about this world with every new chapter. I found it delightful albeit confusing. I struggled to understand the plot and the setting. I think it's lack of environmental details contributed to my confusion the most. Otherwise, it has a lot of potential. "
Really Good
"This novel has a lot of intrigue and drama. I wish the ideas in each scene were not rushed though; makes it hard to follow the story sometimes. Otherwise I am very sure it will be a major hit! "
It is a great story
"The plot is amazing but I feel the writing is a bit confusing to understand there are too many details at once. The character monologue is well written and absolutely what I liked the most. But I feel it can be less detail heavy, aside that it is a great book."
Amazing
"Its an interesting read and I cant wait to see what happens next. Please watch out for petty grammatical mistakes though. Overall, I enjoyed reading this book"
Lovely
"Really good. It would be so funny if the gods and goddesses talked like this but I am really enjoying this. Best of luck dear."
Attention Grabbing 👌
"I love the use of Greek mythology! Your writing style also serves to draw the reader in and keep their attention... However, I would develop each angle of the story before moving to the next. There are too many moving parts at once... for those who do not know Greek mythology it might be too much to follow. Never stop writing ✍️ ✨️ Blessings 🙏🏽"
Unleashed: The Power Within
"Sheila, an ordinary girl with dreams in fashion industry, has been suffering from sleeping problems lately due to the strange dreams she's having. I read up till the fifth chapter, and I can tell that the Greek gods are involved and that the plot has good potential. It's an ordinary MC tossed into an extraordinary situation! Technically, the characters appearances and the settings need more clearance. There are run-on sentences, grammatical and punctuation errors, as well as redundancy. Writing is a tricky business; there is overwriting in some scenes and underwriting in others, but the author has the passion to tell the story and has the ability to keep the readers hooked. Keep up the good work!🌻"
