What is your opinion?
Great
"The story was great"
The Wine’s Divine
"What an absolutely wonderful short story. A perfect light read with a real feel good factor "
Really good premise
"This is one of those diamonds in the rough you can find on this site. I enjoyed both the detail in the writing and the characters themselves. We especially found out a lot in this latest chapter, which makes the reader even more invested in finding out how this book ends. The dialogue was realistic and witty, which I loved, and the MC is relatable. Really good read and idea. "
Unique!
"(I read 5 chapters. I've found the count off on here when I write reviews lol) First off; that cover is, well, divine! That prologue was just amazing too. So hooking and had a light yet cheeky tone to it almost that was just amazing. the descriptions throughout were well written and placed. I didnt see any grammar/technical issues, either so YAY! XD The plot is really unique and I love the easy, light writing style too. I'll definitely be back to finish this! <3 "
Great Light read
"I always enjoy mixing a little fantasy with the mundane, I find myself smirking at the screen more often than not when reading through this story. Can't wait to see how it ends, keep up the great work!"
In love
"I am in love with the premise of this story - really really fun interpretation of the gods and goddesses. As a nerd of greek myth, I love (there are a few parts that kind of stray from myth and are slightly incorrect, so maybe doing some fact checking is important - but again a lot of myth is told from many different sources who have different accounts of things, and it's always okay to have your own interpretations. The only one I had a problem with was saying Artemis is a demigod b/c she is def not - in fact, Dionysus is a demigod who ascended to being a full god through his many feats to prove himself - and even still he's not always included in the pantheon) But I digress, either way, plot is great and super creative. I love seeing people's interpretations of the gods, especially since I'm working on my own endeavor doing a rewrite of the Iliad that will include the gods so its always fun. Anywho, technically the writing is great, no complaints there. Didn't see any grammar mistakes that were major. It's engaging and interesting and the characters are well written and sound like college students. It'll be interesting to see how this plot develops, I'd love to see some sinister stuff be introduced (perhaps Haphaestus intervenes? Esp if you have this story coincide with when Hephaestus learns of Aphrodite's affair with Ares and traps her in the net) Overall, love this book, very great job and keep up the good work!"
Strong!
"Strong storyline, strong characters, and I loved it! The cover design is incredible as well, and you'll definitely get some eyes from that. I think this was an incredible start, and I cannot wait to finish it!"
