AllyMay

Captivating

Okay, wow! I have to be honest, I was not expecting this book to go where it went and I am in awe of the writer! It's nothing I've ever read before and I couldn't stop reading it! The description is beautiful. In chapter three I was shocked/interested in what was happening. I was shocked that she didn't scream or try to fight back. I hope there is some explanation as to why she went with it. Amazing job!!

More More MORE

Okay, I'm in! I thought the writing was very clear and easy to read! I like the misdirect and I am itching to read the next chapter!

Enjoyed it

I've read three chapters of this story and the grammar needs work but the idea of the story is interesting. The idea of a counsellor and client is always spicy! :)

Page turner!

I've read 15 chapters of this book and IT'S AMAZING! Each chapter I read compelled me to keep going to the next. It's easy to read and I could imagine everything. I like the length of the chapters, I didn't find it too long allowing me to easily go to the next. I'm going to continue reading this book, I just wanted to write a review because it's so great! :)

Amazing!

This is a great read! The writing is smooth and easy to read. I found myself needing to keep reading and thinking about the story when I wasn't reading it! Amazing job!! :)

So Descriptive!

What a descriptive piece of writing! I felt like I was right there looking at the clock punch machine. I like how you described how it sounded. It really brought it alive. I am a romantic, so the end of your chapter is really what hooked me! I wonder if we will get the lady's point of view. Regardless I am looking forward to the next chapter!

Great work!

I read the first chapter and I really enjoyed it! I like the perfective of Jack talking to Bill. I thought the writing was smooth and you were able to paint a picture. I'm excited to read more!

Captivating

I read the first two chapters and I was intrigued the whole time! I really enjoyed Emma walking the walk. Meaning that she was able to recognize that she would be no better than the books she hates if she didn't take this leap of faith. I can see the first two chapters be the beginning of a Hallmark movie! Great work! :)

Amazing!

This story had me hooked on the first chapter! It is a different take on a magical world I've read before and that makes it feel fresh and new. I love the old stories and songs that are woven into this book. Just amazing!

Interesting start!

I thought your over all idea of the story is good. It has me hooked to see if she will betray Cassidy or if she will obey the destiny her father laid out for her. During some parts I was confused on who was talking during some of the dialogue. I'm excited to read more!