C. Swallow

Adore It

Enthralled!! Hebard's story is already off to a fantastic start. I am already invested and can't wait to read more! Your author voice is uniquely warm and passionate. Your ideas are beginning to flourish so please continue. I would love to read more.

Sexy & Wholesome

This was a super spicy, super sexy read, with enough wholesome moments sprinkled in to give it a homey slice-of-life feel. It was exactly what was needed after what they went through to be together. It was SATISFYING as F to be able to read them enjoying one another without stress. The love and respect they show one another is a prime example of a healthy, STRONG relationship. Overall, this was a hot hot hot read. I love their teasing and the sex scenes are 10 outta 10. Thank you, Dani! Don't stop writing!!!

Wholesome, Delicate, BEAUTIFUL story!

The author built an extremely in-depth world full of well-rounded thoughtout characters. She writes so consistently and weaves together a generous plot with enough spice mixed in to keep you addicted to the budding romance between Jess and Gabe. Every piece of action builds their love, trust and respect for one another. Gabe is a sexy, moody vamp who learns to drop his shields around Jess, who gets swept violently into his world. Gabe protects her throughout it all. He is a devilishly, sexy hero. The world itself is poised to erupt into so many directions, I can only fathom what the author has planned next and can't wait to see this series develop further. Thank you for this warm, cozy read. And of course, I can't-not mention the SUPER hot, sexy banter and steamy sex scenes that will make you completely obsessed with their classic dynamic. I hear down the pipeline there is some crossover happening in the future with Lady Nefalum's Come, Let Us Prey [smirks] that is going to be so f*ing epic! Also, so happy to have made a friend with you, DaniBrown xo thank you for sharing your world with us on Inkitt!!

Not My Alpha 🐺

Very well written, captivating story, unique and spicy 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 definitely worth reading. I hope Kenzie gets her vengeance and her happy ending 🥺

The Bid Bad Deo 🥵🔥

Some spoilers in the review so don't read if new to the book!!! I read this in one go, I felt anxious that it would end even when I was only half way through. What a wild, dark, twisted, hot as hell ride. I'm so hooked, I need more. You have a very unique writing voice, and it makes your work stand out from all others. Reading this is like watching a movie in my head. I love a pure dark romance and hell this is it!!! Bring on more!!! I would also kill for a book about Erin and Morael, and a book for Rose and Cy and Calix. Pretty please 🙏🥺

Love on Safari

I love the MCs sassy character and Odek's caring nature, most of all I love the holiday mood. Such a good read. Impatiently waiting for more! It sucks you right in like you're on holidays with them 😍❤️ can't wait for them to have some adventures together heheh! More please!!!

The Alpha's Doe

This book is hands down the best thing I've read in a long, long time. Ace and Doe's dynamic is perfect, they're so sweet together it's killin me, plus he is so frickin possessive and it's sexy as all hell. I love this book so much. Thank you for writing this and I am impatiently awaiting the next chapter.

Fantastic, keep it up! 🖤

You're a very talented writer and please keep creating, as you know how to paint a picture with words ;) which is what a lot of authors struggle to do! I'd reccomemd this story to romance and fantasy lovers 🖤

Review

Hey girl so I read 5 chapters. I can tell you have the story well planned but you need to maybe practice going with first person point of view, I have a feeling it will fit your writing style better, if it comes from the eyes and mind of the protagonist: Jasmine. I would focus on making chapter 3, 4 or 5 the introduction. What I mean by that is its totally okay to start chapter 1 in the action. And try to make it in the eyes of the protagonist if you can! I suggest just trying it for fun, don't be worried if you can or can't do it just try ;) trust me it's way easier than third person! Make sure to add in what Jasmine feels towards these boys, it would give the story the one thing its lacking which is emotional connection so the readers can bond with your characters. I can read names being listed and I'm told who is who but it's better to practice 'show don't tell'. This is a very common error for first attempts. Practice writing an action scene while avoiding over explaining the background details that aren't important yet. Focus on Jasmine's emotional state and how she feels and how she sees these boys and the party! And practice starting a new paragraph everytime someone else speaks!! You have all the imagination down pat, now you need to paint a picture slowly, don't rush and focus on one thing at a time. It's all practice makes perfect, you got this !! X

Wow! Intriguing :)

I really love it because you clearly have a passion for the story and writing so I know the ideas are going to keep unpacking into something beautiful and entrancing! Keep up the great work! x you have a natural talent and you should keep working on it! x