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Amazing

I loved it right from the first chapter honestly. You have such a way with words that it kind of makes me jealous. It was a little confusing for me at times, some sentences need a bit of rewording but, great job. I can't wait for you to update it :)

Enjoyable

I definitely liked reading it, it was a light read and the plot was interesting. I am not a huge fantasy fan but I had no problems finishing it. Keep it up :)

Good job

I really like your idea, I think its unique and deserves more reviews and attention even if I am not a fantasy fan. I would recommend going over the grammar a few times just to make sure its perfect but other than that Good job :) I enjoyed it

Loveeeee

I loved it, your writing style is my favorite and I think its obvious you know what you are doing. I can't wait for you to update it! Amazing job

Review

It may be useful for your story If you go over it again and check the grammar since I noticed a lot of mistakes and it took me out of the mood of the story. Your writing style is not my favorite but it was still a nice story. Good job :)

Really enjoyed it

I must admit that I was sad to see that only six parts had been published. I enjoyed reading your story; it was very entertaining for me, and I found the dialog to be a little refreshing, as it can be overdone at times. I'm not a big fantasy fan, but your story really drew me in; great work.

I like the start

there is only one chapter posted so I can't judge much but it is a nice start!

Nice Start

It looks like a promising start but I would suggest going over the grammar once again so its perfect, I also would recommend using italic font for the thoughts since it makes it easier to read

good job

I really liked that chapter, keep it going! :) it is a nice start, but maybe look over the grammar

Great job

I really enjoyed reading this, I like your writing style a little too much