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The Eternal

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Summary

Bellamy Sancho was living her life in the past... literally. Having moved to Santa Fe, New Mexico, Bellamy embraces the city in the desert and its past. While working at the Nee Mexico History Museum, a series of events lands her in the crossroads of a mysterious stranger, Eldridge de Leon. With history yet again repeating itself, Bellamy finds herself deep in the history of the mysterious and prominent de Leon family that abruptly disappeared from the pages of history, a century and a half before.

Status
3yrs ago
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Prologue: Weight on the Shoulders

The searing desert air razored through my dry lungs as tears filled my eyes. A great flood of sunlight drowned the desert landscape of cactus, blue-white sky, unflamed red sand, rugged rocks and hot dust.

A white-hot silence clung to the reality of this moment. I was on my knees. The hard, ruddy ground emoting blistering hest i to them. I wanted to beg... I wanted to cry, cry out for mercy! Yet silence... silence was my friend. Sweat dribbled down my face. Scrapes torn into my skin along with ragged cuts and predestined bruises spatter scrossed my body and the now disheveled ivory cotton dress I wore. My feverish lower lip was split in two and crisp with the grit of dried blood. Here I kneeled, between good and evil. Like a living scale, weighing this on the shoulders of a cross I could not bear.

To my left, he stood. The Bad... a silhouette against the backdrop of harsh sunlight, angered desert and a ghost of a skeleton town stuck in time. To my right, he also stood. The Good stood parallel to the Bad. At any moment the scale would tip between good and evil.... History was about to repeat itself again, and this time... I was the sole great witness to it all.

I held my breath.

Suddenly, in a heartbeat, the scale tipped before me.... I shut my eyes and screamed. In that moment, it went on for an eternity....

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