Vortex
Lana Reyes
I brush a strand of hair out of my face and stare the mirror down like it owes me. The girl looking back is tired, sure—but she’s sharp. Hard where it matters. Unmoved.
“I’m Lana Reyes. Twenty-three. NYU law student.”
Said under my breath like a spell. A shield.
Because once I push out of this locker room, it’s game time. Vortex does not make space for people who forget their price.
The dress is regulation—black, tight, a hemline engineered to distract. I tug it like I’m reminding us both it’s a uniform, not an identity. The heels hurt. Fine. Pain keeps me awake.
The service door swings and the club swallows me whole.
Bass. Smoke. Money. Overpriced cologne and underdeveloped character.
Every girl here sells a version of the same fantasy: effortless beauty, empty smile, pliable body. I don’t sell anything. I deliver drinks and disappear.
Tray steady. Eyes alert. Mouth set to polite-but-unapproachable. Survival here isn’t visibility—it’s utility. Be useful. Be efficient. Be forgettable.
Adam’s behind the bar looking like he’s planning a murder. Sleeves rolled. Jaw set. Disdain, but couture.
“VIP,” he says. No greeting. Just a sentence.
I groan. “Let me guess—the Three-Percenters’ One Percent?”
“The Holy Trinity of entitlement,” he confirms. “Cross, Harrington, Blackwood.”
“Perfect. I was hoping for a pissing contest disguised as bottle service.”
He leans in as I pass. “Try not to look too competent. They love that—makes them think they’ve discovered something.”
Vortex hums around us like a locked engine. Guest list only—names whispered at the door, phones bagged, NDAs traded for entry. Mirrors instead of windows. Hallways that turn into rumors. If you have to ask what happens in the back rooms, you weren’t invited. Powder on glass, hands under tables, tongues in the dark. Anything goes, as long as it goes quietly.
It’s their bar. Their church. Their playground.
I roll my eyes and head for the velvet rope—because obviously they can’t breathe our air.
There they are.
Nathan Cross. Julian Blackwood. Elliot Harrington.
Owners, patrons, and problem sets in tailored black.
They sit like kings at the center of a glittering rot. Nathan is the still point—tailored suit, one decisive button undone, a man who speaks in decisions more than sentences. People watch him before they realize they’re doing it. Julian smiles like good breeding learned how to sharpen its teeth—Blackwood money, museum taste, a temper that never has to raise its voice. Elliot is gold and danger wrapped in charm, the beautiful disaster you forgive until you don’t—laugh too loud, hand too quick, appetite bigger than the bill.
The room orbits them. The rules bend for them. And my job is to pretend none of that matters while I pour the next round.
Rule one: don’t look directly at them.
I don’t. I feel it anyway—Nathan’s attention, cold and measuring.
I keep moving. If he sees me too clearly, he’ll clock the ways I don’t fit the champagne-and-parted-lips orbit, and I’d like to survive the semester without getting emotionally waterboarded by a billionaire.
“Lana.”
His voice lands like a command wrapped in velvet.
I turn slowly, tray balanced like a shield. “Yes, Mr. Cross?”
His gaze sweeps me. Not lewd—clinical. Looking for weakness.
“You’re efficient.”
“It’s in the job description.”
One corner of his mouth thinks about moving. “And composed.”
“Tips like composure.”
Elliot leans in, raking me like he’s pricing parts. “You ever think what else you could do with all that composure?”
I smile—empty, mechanical. “Every day, Mr. Harrington. Especially in torts.”
Nathan’s smirk twitches. “NYU law?”
“Second year.”
“Smart and fast.”
“I try.”
“Try harder,” Elliot mutters.
Nathan’s eyes cut to him—small, sharp. I take the cue and get out before anyone suggests a lap and calls it a throne.
“Let me know if you need anything else,” I say, turning on my heel without waiting for permission.
Even walking away, I feel it—the weight of Nathan Cross’s attention. It brands. Heat stitched into my spine. Mirrored wall, passing glance—there he is. Watching. Waiting. Like a man who already knows the ending and is giving me time to catch up.
The women around him don’t bother hiding disdain. Blonde, bronzed, Botoxed—packaged perfection with dead eyes. One look could skin a lesser girl alive. Message received.
I make it to the locker room on autopilot, press my forehead to cool metal, breathe.
Rent. Tuition. Mom’s prescriptions.
Not Cross. Not this. Not now.
“You keep forehead-fucking that locker and it’ll file for a restraining order.”
Adam. Thank God.
He glides in like a runway built from bad decisions—black shirt, rolled sleeves, forearms and attitude.
“What are you doing back here?” I mutter.
“Elliot got cologne on me. Had to change. Apparently ejaculating on someone’s chest is his preferred goodbye.”
“Charming.”
“Between the orgasm and the asset-diversification pitch, I almost felt like a person.”
A real laugh slips out—brief, bright, foreign.
“Do you two cuddle,” I ask, “or is that reserved for his offshore accounts?”
“Cuddle? Babe, I’m lucky if he remembers I exist once he zips up. Post-nut clarity of a hedge-fund apocalypse.”
“You’re a slut.”
“I’m a slut with boundaries,” he says. “Spelled out in NDAs.”
He sees it when I turn. The coil at my spine. His tone hardens.
“Lana. You’re dancing too close to Nathan Cross.”
“He hasn’t touched me.”
“Yet.” Flat. “But he’s circling.”
“You sound like you’ve seen this before.”
“I have. Maybe not Nathan, but his species. Elliot. Julian. Men who treat women like acquisitions and loyalty like a kink. They don’t flirt—they assess. They dismantle. And they only want the ones they think will break the prettiest.”
Cold crawls under my skin.
“They’re not gods,” he says, softer. “Just bored men with too much power and zero consequences.”
“I’m not falling for him.”
“Good. Then don’t flinch. Don’t blush. Don’t let him watch you bleed. These men don’t drink—they drain.”
I don’t feel better. I fake it anyway. “Let’s go serve emotionally stunted billionaires.”
“Welcome to Vortex,” he winks. “Trauma’s on the house.”
We walk back into the dark pulse together.
At the table, Nathan tracks me like a predator too bored to pounce. I meet his eyes anyway. Hold a second too long. Let a small, defiant smile flicker. Then I set the tray, pulse thunder in my ears, and move.
By the end of the shift, I’m wrung out. The wad of cash helps—$2,500 buys a few more weeks of pretending I’m not drowning.
I slip out the back. The city air hits like a gasp. Brooklyn is a world away from Vortex’s glitter and rot. It’s mine.
Mark.
The thought softens something I didn’t know I had left. Messy curls. Ink-smudged fingers. Quiet steadiness when everything else spins.
We met first semester, him crashing into my study table with a sketchpad and a grin. He stayed. Where I crave control, he brings color. He never asks me to shrink.
I unlock our apartment. Turpentine and cinnamon tea. Paint-splattered canvases breathing on the walls.
“Mark?” I call, kicking off heels.
He looks up, brush between his teeth, shirt a lost cause. His smile when he sees me is soft and real, like I’m the best part of his day.
“Hey, you.”
Arms around me. Warmth. No questions. He smells like paint and comfort and a life I used to want.
I let him hold me.
But my cheek on his shoulder doesn’t anchor like it used to.
I drift—to ice-blue eyes that watched me like a warning. To a voice that said my name like a promise no one intends to keep.
Nathan.
Shame curdles. I blink it away.
“Long shift?” Mark murmurs against my temple.
“Brutal,” I say. Not the rest.
He doesn’t press. He never does. He draws slow circles into my back, like he can sketch the exhaustion out of my skin. “I wish I could fix it.”
“You do,” I lie gently, because it used to be true.
“Movie and popcorn?” I ask.
“Only if I pick.”
“Not a chance.”
We nest into blankets and burnt kernels. Something we’ve seen. Something safe. His hand is steady on my arm.
My mind isn’t. It keeps circling Vortex, landing on Nathan, on the way he looked like he already knew how I’d fall.
Here, with the man who sees me, I should feel whole.
Instead, I’m inches from something I can’t reach.
Sleep pulls. I let Mark hold me because tomorrow the performance starts again.
Tonight, I need the lie. Even if I can already feel it slipping.









Loving this story so far! Can't wait to read more and see what happens 😍
enjoying this so far, great start
loved how it started