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The Unchosen One's Return

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The Unwanted. Since he was born, God has been a being of Perfection, our creator, who gifted the universe life; their reach meant no limit, and in order for humanity to show their gratefulness for that gift. Religion was born, and some stepped forward claiming they are the messenger or child of god to deliver the message and guidance to the middle realm, However as time goes on, an incurable disease slowly rots them, letting their greed guide their decision from being a messenger and child of god to become god. Disregard of life, normalize sacrifice, disconnection, and mindless devotion. Religion is practiced in the horrifying way possible. The Unwanted, Unchosen One has witnessed and has lost those he loves and cares for from life to life because of this blind devotion. he convince that God, the perfect Savior, ignores their children's cries and mourning for help to rest their suffering souls The Unchosen One, filled with an uncontrolled rage, built his power. Thousands of battles, he managed to emerge victorious from hundreds of them and merge that power to call it his own. His success came from the freedom of countless failures. Then he rebels against his own parents, the God Race. However, he was later confronted by reality. The Perfect being can bleed. Everything he believes and sees for a hundred years shatters in front of him. There is no such thing as Perfection. After the Unchosen One abandoned his rebellion against his own parent, he asked the god for forgiveness. His last wish before he restarts his life in one of the countless universes out there, The Unchosne One, Liatart: I wish for ignorance, so I can rest peacefully A new world he arrived in, Where politic of self-interest, superpowers, and the Wealthiest govern the world Liatart:" From the World, I from it may be living, but everything is soulless, and this new world may be just as insufferable, but it is actually alive. I appreciate it for it's beaty of life"

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1mo ago
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79
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18+

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Limness Arc: Save the Kingdom from Maleverlem Empire’s Influence now shifting to a man’s mistake_ Currently _Need A Rewrite ) New approach: Speak less, Tell less

What to expect: Lacking something; need something to fill the gaps, confuse writing, no smooth in between, rough grammar, too much jumping around, telling too much

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Pansolina Arc: Dethrone Incompetent King (Can skip this)_ ( Need A Rewrite )

Supreme Nation Arc: The Unchosen One, Laora, Demon Race and God Race Conflict’s History and Plot Regime Change in Maleverlem Empire_5th World’s Superpower

+ Chapter 1 to 3_The Uchosen One arrives in the Supreme Nation

+ Chapters 4 to 18, history about the conflict and rivalry between the Demon race and the God race, including the Unchosen One’s first arrival in the current world (Can Skip This)

+ Chapter 19 to 21, return to the present, Empress Laora and the 10 Chencellor plot the Regime change

Lusain Tannia Arc: A stunt The Unchosen One will perform to make the blame on him more believable - The Battle Between The Unchosen One Vs The Warrior King

+ The Unchosen One Fail to Defeat The Warrior King

Leodard Bruce, The Warrior King. He is a man of his country, the Kingdom of Lusain Tannia

Maleverlem Empire Arc (Animation Golden Year 2028)

Regime Change in action,

The Unchosen One Vs The God of Domination, The Actual Emperor Of the Malevelem Empire, Galador Rim Lamatia

More other issue

- The 3000-year time jump needs to be shrunk to 200 Years, During The 4th Chosen Child of Miracle, The Miracle of the Same

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