Echoes of Her

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Summary

It began with a dream I couldn’t forget. One that clung to me for weeks, like smoke in the folds of old clothes. There was a man. A girl in a car. Blood, silence, and the echo of something I’ve refused to see in myself. I didn’t know what to do with it, so I wrote it down. This story is that dream, unraveled. A descent into memory, illusion, trauma, and the truth that waits beneath it all. Genre: Psychological Fiction / Surrealism / Dreamcore / Trauma Narrative

Status
Complete
Chapters
8
Rating
5.0 2 reviews
Age Rating
16+

The wishper



Have you ever noticed how the sweet wind feels over your sweaty body? Especially in summer...soft, sweet, strangely comforting. That’s what I notice right now, even though the windows are sealed. I open my eyes, finding myself inside a car parked still somewhere on the street. Every door and window is shut tight.

And yet, the wind.

I must be imagining it. But then my hands are sticky and warm. They tremble slightly.

There’s blood.

It’s mine. I don’t know how, but I know it is.

I try to see everything possible within the small space of the car. The whole place reeks of rusty metal and something coppery, it's blood. I lower my gaze to the side and find a white landline phone laying next to me. I pick it up. It’s very old. Nearly dead. No. 3 key is broken, and no sound comes from it. I think it’s silent. Lifeless.

Until I bring it closer to my ear.

A sharp pain goes through the right side of my head. My body jerks. The phone slips from my hand and falls on the floor with a dull thud. My breath shortens. I sit still, one hand clutching to my forehead, what is happening?

Slowly, I pick it up again. As I lean forward, I notice the carpet — soak in red and brown blotches of blood. I stare at it. My mind is not processing and my pulse are moving fast.

I press the phone to my ear again.

There’s something this time. Not a voice exactly, maybe a whisper. I try to say something,"Hello... is there —"

A low crackle. Then a sound. A man’s voice — not speaking, just… that almost silent breathing. Then a faint moan.

My throat tightens.

I wait there, my body freezes but no word comes out.

Just that sound like someone miles away, hurting quietly. The line clicks. Dead silence. I lower the receiver slowly. My fingers trembles.The dial tone never comes back.