All Rights Reserved ©
Rito que no salva y no desgarra.
Ecos
rebotan en mi piel.
Mente seductora,
atraviesa mi ser.
¿Cuál fue tu conjuro,
mujer de mil fantasmas?
Resopla intuición,
alimenta detección.
Tinieblas y cumbres,
tintes oblicuos,
desatan temor:
maldición de ocasión.
¡Cuán afán de ambición
desgarra mi pulmón!
Vuelo y muero
en tu sincera devastación.
3
Love this
0
Funny
0
Spicy
0
Suspenseful
0
Emotional
0
Profound
0
Heartwarming
0
Shocking
0
Good Writing
0
Compelling Plot
0
Great Character
0
Strong Dialog
Merrell Bunting: Well written, kind of quiet story, I enjoyed it. I am still a bit perplexed over whether this was a second chance mating story with choosing or completely a chosen mate story. If it is a chosen mate tale it leaves one a bit worried about a fated mate showing up. Either way it was a nice read.
Read Now
Catherineb83: Story good just would have liked her not to wear a mask
Read Now
Shriya: It's a beautiful story with strong characters and a great story line. It's emotionally very engaging from start to finish. I enjoyed reading this.
Read Now
Carla Little: This is a great book! I like the story so much I don’t want it to end! I will definitely read it again.
Read Now![Fated to My Ex- Best Friend [Moving to Galatea]](https://cdn-gcs.inkitt.com/vertical_storycovers/ipad_49edb1dbf9a28b50b9c4d68d8598359b.jpg)
raymondwrite: Hi! I hope you don’t mind me reaching out. I’m a beta reader currently offering feedback to writers who want another perspective on their stories. I focus on honest but encouraging feedback on plot, pacing, characters, dialogue, and the overall reader experience.No pressure at all—if you're interest...
Read Now
Denver: Superb story, can't wait for the other two parts to this. Strong characterisation and story telling.
Read Now
Authors can write and upload their manuscripts on Inkit for free and writers retain 100% of their copyrights while writing on Inkitt
Readers can read all books for free, without any ads and give the authors feedback.
Books that perform well based on their reader engagement are published on our Galatea app.
Muy bien y me encantó.