The Matters Of Succession by M.A. Devecha at Inkitt
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The Matters of Succession

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Summary

Between a bitter North and a prosperous South lies Elnara, a small kingdom that has survived for centuries by standing in the way of conquest. When war finally presses too hard to ignore, Elnara turns to alliance rather than arms—and seals it with a marriage. Eliza leaves her southern home to become queen of a land already bracing for collapse. Her husband is honorable, absent, and fighting a war he may not survive. His mother, the Queen Mother, is watchful, precise, and unwilling to let the kingdom die for lack of foresight. As victories arrive too quickly and silences grow heavier than words, Eliza begins to understand what survival in Elnara truly demands. Power moves quietly. Decisions are justified as necessity. Bodies become instruments. Truth becomes negotiable. And beneath ritual, war, and inheritance, something old and patient begins to move—threatening to turn succession itself into a weapon. The Matter of Succession is a dark political fantasy about duty, inheritance, and the cost of preserving a kingdom, when the price is paid by those least allowed to refuse.

Status
Complete
Chapters
16
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Prologue

The land had never been whole.

It appeared unified only to those who had never stood upon it. On maps, the continent was rendered obedient—its borders drawn with confidence, its regions shaded in careful balance. Ink did what steel never had. It pretended agreement where only habit existed.

Those who lived upon the land knew better.

The continent breathed in divisions. Old resentments lay buried beneath roads and fields, layered so deeply that many had forgotten their origin while still honoring their weight. Wars did not end here; they settled. Alliances did not heal; they held things in place.

At the far north lay Hermal.

Hermal was a country shaped by refusal. The land rose sharply, stone pressing against stone as though the earth itself resisted intrusion. Mountains dominated the horizon, their passes narrow and treacherous, their slopes stripped bare by wind that never learned mercy. Valleys were few, soil thin, harvests uncertain.

Life in Hermal endured because it had to.

The Hermals spoke often of ancestry. They believed their forebears were carved from the mountains themselves, hardened by cold, sharpened by scarcity. Their songs were not gentle things. They carried stories of winters survived, of borders pushed back by hunger rather than enemies, of lands lost slowly while others prospered.

To the Hermals, loss was not history. It was inheritance.

They distrusted treaties. Ink faded. Stone remained.

Elora, Southward, the land softened.

Elora spread wide across plains and riverlands, its borders generous, its cities numerous. Rivers flowed slow and deep, carrying grain and timber, trade and rumor, binding the kingdom together with patient inevitability. Roads were maintained. Storehouses were full. Ports opened to distant seas and returned wealth without bloodshed.

Elora did not fear winter.

Its people had never needed to. Famine was a concept spoken of carefully, like a superstition best kept distant. Stability was assumed, reinforced by routine and tradition. Where Hermal survived, Elora endured through order.

Its strength was quiet.

Elora did not sing of conquest. It rang bells at dawn. It kept records. It repaired walls before they cracked. It ruled not by threat, but by the expectation that tomorrow would arrive much like today.

Between north and south stood Elnara.

Smaller than Elora, narrower than Hermal, Elnara occupied the one position no kingdom could afford to ignore. To the east, its coast opened trade routes that fed inland cities far beyond its borders. To the west, forests older than memory resisted roads and swallowed armies foolish enough to mistake trees for silence.

Elnara was not rich by excess, nor strong by numbers. It survived by placement.

For centuries, it had stood because it understood its value.

Hermal had tested that value first with force. Steel had met stone and failed. When blades proved costly, words followed. Envoys arrived bearing promises and conditions spoken softly enough to sound reasonable. When words failed, gifts came—ironwork of northern make, gold stamped with unfamiliar crowns, alliances offered and withdrawn with polite precision.

Each offer carried the same expectation.

Each was refused.

Elnara’s kings did not bind themselves to Elora out of affection. They did so because calculation demanded it. The south fed their people. The north coveted their land. To stand alone was to erode.

Hermal remembered every refusal.

They spoke of betrayal in low voices and public halls alike. Of forests and coasts stolen by crowns that arrived later and wrote history faster than memory could resist. Their anger did not burn bright. It aged. It fermented. It became deliberate.

Other kingdoms existed—smaller realms content to survive in the margins—but it was Hermal, Elora, and Elnara that shaped the continent’s pulse. Neighbors bound by proximity. Rivals bound by memory.

Far to the south, Elora continued as it always had.

Dawn came with bells.

In the capital, towers of pale stone caught the first light, their surfaces glowing softly before the city below stirred awake. Markets would open soon. Barges would move along the river. Guards would change shifts with practiced precision. Life followed patterns older than any living ruler.

Within the palace, Princess Eliza woke before the bells.

Her chambers overlooked the eastern quarter of the city, where roofs clustered tightly and smoke would soon rise from kitchens and bakeries. She sat at the window, wrapped in a plain wool shawl, watching the sky pale slowly from indigo to grey.

Sleep had come in fragments and left her restless.

Eliza had been raised within certainty. Elora did not surprise its children. From an early age, she had learned the rhythms of the court—the measured steps of attendants, the steady cadence of council sessions, the discipline of instruction chosen carefully for her station.

She was not unprepared for duty.

Yet knowledge did not quiet the unease that had settled in her chest.

The marriage had been discussed for years, always at a distance. Names spoken, then set aside. Routes traced on maps and forgotten again. It had lived in conversation as possibility, not inevitability.

Until it had become real.

Eliza pressed her fingers against the cool stone of the window frame. Below, watchfires still burned along the outer walls, steady and untroubled. Elora endured. It always had.

Behind her, footsteps approached without urgency.

King Jeon entered the chamber quietly, the crown absent from his head. He wore a dark tunic and carried his cloak folded over one arm, the manner of a man who had left ceremony behind for the night.

“You should be resting,” he said.

“I tried,” Eliza replied.

He joined her at the window, his gaze moving across the city with familiarity born of years. For a long moment, neither spoke. Silence had always been permitted between them.

“Elora sleeps easily,” she said.

“It trusts its walls,” he replied.

She glanced at him then. Age had softened his features and sharpened his restraint. Grey threaded his hair now, and his expression carried the weight of decisions made long before they reached daylight.

“I understand why this must be done,” Eliza said. “You have explained it often.”

Jeon nodded. “Understanding does not make it lighter.”

“No.”

Maps lay on the table behind them, partially rolled, borders traced in careful ink. The world reduced to lines.

“You were raised to endure,” he said. “Not to be hidden from duty, but to meet it without fear.”

She offered a small smile. “You also taught me caution.”

“That as well.”

The city below stirred as the first bell rang. Eliza watched movement begin—doors opening, figures crossing courtyards, life continuing exactly as it always had.

“I will go,” she said quietly. “I will do what is required.”

Jeon did not answer at once. When he did, his voice was steady. “That is all any ruler can ask.”

Light climbed higher, touching rooftops and towers alike. Elora remained unchanged, solid and enduring.

Only Eliza stood at its edge.

Northward, beyond rivers and forests, banners were being raised.

In Elnara, the city no longer slept easily.

Wedding cloth hung from balconies and towers, red and gold bright against stone, meant to signal unity and celebration. Wind tugged at the fabric until its edges frayed. Guards doubled their patrols. Messengers arrived at odd hours, their horses restless, their words delivered quietly and carried away just as quickly.

Inside the palace, preparation continued with disciplined urgency.

King Weston stood at the high gallery overlooking the central hall. Below him, servants moved in careful patterns, musicians rehearsed until their fingers stiffened, and courtiers argued over protocol with a desperation that betrayed more than concern for ceremony.

He did not intervene.

Queen Sapphirina stood beside him, her gaze fixed ahead.

“They’re pressing the northern villages again,” she said softly.

Weston inclined his head. “They always test.”

“Not like this.”

“Elora stands with us,” he replied. “This marriage binds it.”

“It binds time,” she said. “Nothing more.”

Below them, Prince Ramon crossed the hall, posture composed, expression controlled. He did not look up.

Beyond the walls, the land waited.

And the fractures—old, patient, and unresolved—remained.

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wow this is fantastic writing what a great first chapter, looking forward to reading more you’ve hooked me in ❤️😍

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