Paper Crane by Fujimoto_Girl at Inkitt
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Paper Crane

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Summary

A short story about a troubled teen and a young woman’s cold kindness

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Paper crane

Short story


The rain had been soft that evening, clinging to the windows of the 7-Eleven where Kimberly worked. The heater barely functioned, so she sat behind the counter in her coat, counting minutes instead of customers.

It was 11:03 PM when Benjamin walked in.

He didn’t speak, just wandered slowly through the aisles. Kimberly noticed how his shirt clung to him—wet from the rain, collar stretched, hands trembling as he picked up a pack of ramen only to put it back. Again. And again.

She sighed. “You buying something?”

Benjamin froze. His eyes flicked to her, cautious, not scared. “No. Sorry.” His voice cracked.

He turned to leave, and something in her chest pulled. Maybe it was the way his hair stuck to his face. Maybe it was the way he hadn’t asked for anything.

“Hey,” she called. “Take the damn noodles.”

He stopped. Didn’t turn. Then nodded, slow. She tossed him a plastic bag and looked away before he could say anything that might make her feel something again.

He came back the next night. And the night after that.

Always at the same time. Always soaking wet. Kimberly never asked questions. She just slipped snacks into his hands and pretended not to notice when he stayed longer than he should. Sometimes, he’d sit on the floor by the magazine rack and sketch quietly, and she’d smoke behind the counter in silence.

They never talked much.

Until one night, he asked, “Do you think people are born bad?”

Kimberly didn’t answer right away. Just stared out the window. “No. I think they just get tired of hurting.”

He nodded like he understood.

Weeks passed. One day, he didn’t come in.

Kimberly waited. One night. Two. Five.

On the sixth, she found his sketchpad tucked behind the cereal shelf. The first page was a drawing of her—tired eyes, cigarette in hand, looking out a rainy window.

The second was a boy curled up on a bench in Central Park, surrounded by pigeons and snow.

On the last page was a single paper crane, inked in trembling lines. Underneath, in small print:

“Thank you for seeing me.”

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