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The Child Atlantis Kept

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The Child Atlantis Kept. Lieutenant Robert Maynard pulls an impossible survivor from a field of wreckage off the Carolina coast — no ship, no story that makes sense, and eyes that glow teal in the dark. She is Neraya. An Atlantean. And the most dangerous pirate on the Atlantic is still coming for her. Edward Teach — Blackbeard — does not want gold. He wants to control every sea on earth. Neraya carries the power to do it. All he has to do is break her. Maynard stands between them with one damaged ship, a fracturing crew, and no allies he can trust. He has already gone AWOL. Already lost his pardon. Already made every choice that cannot be unmade. He keeps making them anyway. What Blackbeard does not know — what no one above water knows — is that Neraya is not what he thinks she is. Not a weapon. Not a key. Something far more dangerous. The battle at Ocracoke Inlet is coming. History will record what Maynard allows it to record. The rest belongs to the ocean.

Status
Complete
Chapters
60
Rating
5.0 1 review
Age Rating
16+

The Deep Remembers

Chapter One —

Neraya-

The ships came from the dark.

Neraya heard them before she saw them — the groan of timber, the snap of canvas filling with wind, the low percussion of oars pulling hard through black water.

Three vessels moving without lanterns.

Moving the way predators moved, with the patience of things that knew their prey had nowhere left to run.

She stood at the bow of the stolen merchant sloop and felt the ocean speak beneath her feet.

They found you.

She had known it would come to this.

Known it since the moment she surfaced into the night air two weeks ago with salt on her lips and a mission burning in her chest. Atlantis did not send its people to the surface lightly. What she carried — what she had been trusted to find — was worth protecting at any cost.

Her people had told her that before she left.

She had believed them.

She believed them still.

That was not the problem.

The problem was that someone had told Edward Teach exactly where to find her.

The first ship emerged from the darkness to the east, close enough now that she could see the outline of her hull, the black flag hanging limp at her mast.

Then the second to the north. Then the third cutting off the southern passage with the slow, certain confidence of something that had already won.

Three ships. Forty guns between them at minimum. Her stolen sloop carried six.

Neraya placed her hand flat against the rail and let herself feel the water below.

It was deep here — deep enough that the pressure of it registered in her chest like a second heartbeat. Deep enough that she could still do what she was made to do.

She turned to the two surface men her mission had required her to trust.

They were standing at the stern, watching the ships close in with the tight-jawed stillness of men who understood exactly what three ships in the dark meant.

The older one — Carver, she had come to call him — met her eyes and shook his head slowly.

“Too many,” he said. “There’s no outrunning them.”

“I know.”

“Then what—”

“Get below,” she said. “Both of you. Now.”

Carver opened his mouth.

She looked at him with eyes that caught the starlight in ways human eyes should not, and whatever he had been about to say dissolved. He grabbed the younger man by the collar and hauled him toward the hatch without another word.

The first cannon fired before the hatch closed behind them.

The shot crossed the bow close enough that she felt the displaced air move across her face.

A warning.

They wanted her alive — or at least intact enough to be useful. That was the only advantage she had and she intended to use it.

She closed her eyes.

The ocean here was six hundred feet deep. She could feel every fathom of it pressing upward against the thin wooden hull beneath her, vast and patient and ancient in ways that even Atlantis was not.

The sea had existed before her people built their city beneath it. It would exist long after everything above and below the surface had been forgotten.

She had always found that thought comforting rather than frightening. Her people did not share the sentiment.

Focus.

She reached down through the hull, through the wood and pitch and barnacled copper sheeting, down through six hundred feet of cold Atlantic darkness, and she found the bottom.

She found the pressure and the current and the slow geological memory of the ocean floor, and she took hold of it the way a person took hold of a rope — carefully at first, then with everything she had.

The sea responded.

It always responded.

The first wave built without wind to drive it — a long, deep swell that traveled outward from the sloop in all directions at once, invisible beneath the surface until it reached the hulls of Teach’s three ships and made them shudder.

She heard men shouting across the water.

Heard the creak of rigging suddenly pulled taut.

She built the second wave bigger.

The cannon fire stopped.

She opened her eyes.

All three ships were moving now — not toward her but in response to the water beneath them, their helms fighting to hold steady against swells that had no business existing on a calm night.

She had perhaps two minutes before they steadied. Perhaps three before they realized what was happening.

It was not enough time to run.

It had never been enough time to run. Blackbeard had planned this too carefully, closed the distance too precisely, cut off every heading before she had known they were coming.

She thought of the mission.

Of what she carried in her memory, locked away in the language of her people — the knowledge she had surfaced to find, that she had found, that could not be allowed to fall into the hands of Edward Teach.

She thought of Atlantis below her, her city, her people, the civilization that had trusted her with something irreplaceable.

She thought of whoever had told him where to find her.

That thought was the coldest thing in the ocean.

Forgive me, she thought, though she was not certain who she was asking.

The sea, perhaps.

Or Atlantis. Or the two men below deck who had not signed on for this when she had hired their small and undistinguished boat a fortnight ago.

She put both hands on the rail.

She reached down into the water not for a wave this time but for something deeper.

Something that lived in the space between current and tide, between the movement of water and the stillness beneath movement.

Her people called it the Voice — the frequency at which the ocean was not merely water but something older, something with weight and intention and a memory that stretched back to the first moment the world had cooled enough to hold the sea in place.

She had been trained to use it carefully.

In small measures.

With precision and restraint, because the Voice did not discriminate between what it was aimed at and what happened to be nearby.

She used it now without precision or restraint.

The ocean answered her the way it always answered — completely, immediately, without question or condition.

The water directly beneath the three ships dropped six feet in an instant, a cavity in the sea where there should have been none, and then surged back with the force of everything that had rushed in to fill the void.

The sound was extraordinary.

She felt the impacts through the soles of her feet even before she heard them — three heavy, simultaneous shudders moving up through the hull of her own vessel as the wave hit all three ships at once.

She heard timber crack.

Heard the high sharp sound of a mast giving way. Heard men in the water.

Her sloop was moving too — pitching hard in the surge she had created, the deck tilting beneath her at an angle that would have sent a less certain person sliding toward the rail. She held on.

The sea was her element.

Even disrupted, even violent, it did not reach for her the way it reached for everything else.

The hatch flew open behind her.

Carver hauled himself out with the look of a man who had heard the end of the world and survived it narrowly.

“What did you—” He stopped. Stared at the water.

At the wreckage already beginning to spread across the surface — broken spars, canvas, barrels, things she did not look at too closely. “God in heaven.”

“Get below,” she said again.

Her voice came out quieter than she intended.

The Voice always cost something. “There will be more of them. This is not finished.”

“More of—”

She heard the fourth ship then.

Smaller than the others, faster, already coming around the eastern wreckage with her guns run out.

A reserve.

Of course.

Teach planned everything.

She turned back to the water and understood that she had nothing left.

Not tonight.

Not after what she had just done.

The Voice had taken everything she had and was asking for more and there was simply nothing left to give it.

She looked at the fourth ship.

Then at her own sloop, already riding low — she had not noticed the hull breach until now, a crack along the waterline where the surge had stressed the seams beyond what the old wood could hold.

They were both going down.

Then let them both go down.

“Get below and hold on to something fixed,” she said to Carver. “Hold on and do not let go no matter what you hear.”

“The ship is sinking—”

“I know.” She turned to look at him. “Hold on.”

She faced the sea.

She let go of the rail.

The ocean took her before the sloop’s bow fully dipped below the surface — took her cleanly, without violence, the way it had always taken her.

The cold rushed in from all sides and the noise of the surface world fell away and there was only the dark and the pressure and the slow powerful rhythm of water moving in all directions at once.

She let herself sink.

The last thing she heard before the silence closed over her completely was the groan of her sloop’s hull giving way above her.

Then nothing. Then the deep.

The sea kept her.

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author

STRONG start! <3

6 days
author

Very clever use of name - Neraya - originally of Hebrew origin, meaning "Light of Lamp of God", and alternative meaning from Thai with similar spelling "Naraya"- meaning Water Nymph or Divine Being - utilizing "Neraya" already subtly evokes the ancient, pre-Olympian oceanic deities as an underlining presence in the book.

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I’m already invested. Beautifully written. Can’t wait to read more later on! ☺️

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