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Good book

"Chose this rating because this book deserves it. Awesome writing with a hell of a plot line. "

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Shhh ... You need to feel

"This book is awesome.. all the things written is being felt. The feel is fucking true."

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The whisper of Silence

"I loved it so much, buttttt i want moreeeee!!!!!!"

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When will you update???

"So fucking interesting"

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The whispers of silence

"Very captivating"

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The whispers of silence

"A perfect book for everyone.love the authors plot, keeps me on suspense. Grab your own copy"

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Great Day in the Murnin'!!!

"You had me with Chapter 1 all the way til the end!!! Fantastic!!"

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Puts the Ass in Assassin

"(I'm not apologizing for the pun title) The Assassin By FoxyBooks Requested: 5.6.2018 Written: 5.13.2018 This was deliciously gripping! A lot of erotic novels aren’t my thing, simply because they leave out the extra element of plot--but The Assassin is fucking fantastic. It was a marvellous cross between the sexy genre and thrilling danger. There were a few grammatical errors here and there, but not enough to distract the reader from the ride they’re on. Well done!"

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Sort of Cool Actually

"I really liked it from the first chapter. It was crazy good. Keep writing please I would love to read the whole thing."

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Awesome

"I actually really like the story. I'm hooked "

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Good Grief!

"Wow! I was hooked from the very beginning. The shocks at the end of some of the chapters had me exclaiming out loud, "What!" Even though this is dark and disturbing, I couldn't stop reading. Want more! I love your writing style, you make it come alive. I hope there is more to come. A.R."

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Creepy and Powerful

"This story (so far) really unnerved me. Each alternating chapter is told from the POV of a profoundly disturbed person, and I honestly felt dirty after each one. The other chapters (told from another POV) are easier to take. Still, this is some creepy, interesting stuff, and I'd like to see more."

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I am hooked

"The story keeps me wanting more."

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Fghhfvnju

"You are the crumbs of my poor biscuit and I'll buy some stuff for a prayer and I'll buy some stuff for a prayer and I'll buy some stuff for a prayer and I'll buy some stuff for a prayer and I'll buy some stuff for a prayer and I'll buy some stuff for a prayer and I'll buy you Np but "

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Good

"Pretty good so far"

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Great!

"I love your style. Although I'm not a fan of romance, your word choice entranced me! I think you have great potential to go far!"

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Great start!

"Drawn in right from the very beginning. Completely hooked! Cannot wait to read more."

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Intense Erotica

"Keep everything I write here with skepticism because I'm going to be honest - I'm not a huge fan of erotica. I rarely - if ever - read erotica stories. As a result, I'm not as well versed in understanding what makes a good erotica and what makes a bad erotica. What I do know, however, is that your descriptions are incredibly spot on. And for a short read like this, descriptions are absolutely necessary to make the story alive. I didn't catch any grammatical errors either. However, this just isn't my kind of genre. The official first chapter made me think it was rape, and that tends to elicit an immediate "no" from me in any of these stories. But once again, I am not well versed in this genre, so I could be completely wrong in my complaint."

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The Assassin

"This story got me hooked from the very beginning. I tended to lose focus in some parts due to some repetitive words but the author's writing style would get me on the track again."

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Interesting 1st chapter

"I thought this was well written and interesting but it didn't grab me in the first chapter. It sets up a good basis for the rest of the story but I felt I could have been told more than just the main characters inner feelings. I found no mistakes and it is easy to read. I wish you all the best with your writing."

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