What is your opinion?
Towards the Dawn
"Has potential but the first chapter felt a little too dragged out. Either due to the large spaces between the lines or there was so much added. Might be able to break the chapter up."
Towards the dawn
"At first, i was like "what" and then I am like "wow" - this just shows that the suspensions and mystery is really cool and i really enjoyed it. However, some of your paragraphs were too long for my liking but that's just a minor mistake - maybe you can break them up into two or something else? But overall, really liked the plot of it!"
Amazing Characters!
"G C Fer here, doing my review of Towards the Dawn So the story itself is detailed and the blurb had caught my interest. From the two siblings, to Elizabeth, and the events surrounding them. I'm all in on this. The title, itself, looks very positive. I am a sucker of anything related to fantasy. I am an imaginative person and I can picture how the way the story flows through the interactions of the characters and their progressive development that would nurture them into the character that they would have to become. Since this work is ongoing, I am yet to give my full review. So... all of us are struggling with punctuations and stuff, right? Trust me, we are all good in English but to be honest, we tend to ignore grammatical and punctuation errors, right? It may affect the informality of our story. However, I started learning about this two errors... so I used an app to check it for me. I may suggest the same, there were a few errors but they weren't as relevant as the story, which is totally amazing, in my opinion. Overall, man, I'm waiting for your next updates. Good job!"
Interesting...
"This book has lots of description and it makes me feel as if I'm in the book with the characters. You've developed the characters well and it's clear that they have their own unique personalities. The story is engaging and I can't wait to read more :)"
Thrilling.
"An easily enjoyable story, with a good plot, solid characters and strong premise. The only downside is the monotonous or rather average start as there seems to many ideas are in a chapter. But when one continues, it becomes more entertaining as other characters get involved! So a nod to the author for getting the plot moving swiftly, although some ideas could be considered separately. Above all, it was a great read and I can't wait to read more."
Unique and intriguing
"The story is very unique and it's obvious you obtain a lot of knowledge when it comes to classical writing. I love the unique vocabulary that is used and I honestly think the writing style is even more captivating that the plot in on itself. I I also really like the detailed descriptions and the thoughtful names and speeches. It's clear to me that the story is not just a first draft but a well-proofread book. That also made the experience very enjoyable. At first, I was a bit confused by the plot and what was really happening but after reading a few chapters everything became clear. And don't get me wrong, even the parts I didn't completely understand were very intriguing and kept me at reading so that's another positive aspect. If I have to be completely honest, the only thing I would criticize would be the choice of cover. I know design is not everyone's strength but I personally wouldn't have even started reading this book if I'd just randomly stumbled upon it. I would recommend to work on that but otherwise, this is definitely a story worth checking out!"
