What is your opinion?
Amazing
"Love the plot.... love your style of writing but need to improvise the punctuation use and starting the conversation with capital letters. Over all love the story."
It spiked my curiosity
"The introduction was very well written.It somewhat captured my attention and made me want to read more. Every chapter was like asking me to read the next one.The story was very intriguing.Well done!"
Enchanting!
"I love the fantasy and adventure in this book I really want to know more! Amazing writing skills author a few grammar mistakes but hey not everyone can write perfectly you know what I mean? Keep on writing your characters are interesting. I can't wait to see what the future brings to you! Best Regards my friend"
Exciting
"The description was the first thing that caught my eye, and going through it I got hooked and excited to read more. The main character seems strong. Reading to this point really got me excited and I really can't wait for the next update. I don't really know what I dislike about the book. I love it all 😂 I am going to share this book with my friends, I am sure they would like the book too. Thanks for sharing this book with us. 😘 "
Interesting!!
"The story is really interesting. This is a great book so far. I think what makes a book interesting is whether the first chapter makes you curious or not and you have definitely succeeded to to keep me curious. Great job author, keep your amazing work ahead❤"
House Of Fire
"It was my first time reading a book that is so different from what I usually go for; however, I really enjoyed every aspect of it. The different elements all combined together to form this book were certainly laced together in an amazing plot. The buildup was great and the story was simply amazing. There were a few grammatical and spelling mistakes but all that can be fixed with some quick editing. You did a phenomenal job and I really do wish everyone reads it! Keep up the amazing work! "
Creative twist of Astrology!
"The plot itself is amazing. It's such a creative twist of the use of the elements (fire, Earth, water, air) and filled with mystery, love, family saga, hope, a struggle for self-identity for a teen, and a building a dream world of peace and serenity. I love the images of the castle and the symbolism used throughout. I immediately cared for the protagonist, Coral, and wanted to know where the story goes for her. The metaphorical of powers is lovely. I was thrown off, however, by the continued errors in punctuation, including not starting paragraphs and dialog with a capital letter. there are also quite a few spelling errors. I wrote comments on the early pages where I saw this repeated pattern. With some professional editing and perhaps a Writer's support group, the author can hone the craft well enough to give this very creative and intriguing story justice. It's too good not to polish to perfection."
Intriguing
"I loved your use of descriptive language, everything felt very real and connected, the plot surely is an page turner and you went into detail with a lot of things which I appreciated. I’d say use more dialogue so it feels more personal and humane. "
Captivating
"So far I really have enjoyed reading this book. After finishing a chapter I found myself wanting to start reading the next, which is always a good sign to me I like the character building so far and am drawn into the world wondering what surprises it hold. I would definitely recommend."
House of Fire
"I love your descriptions and how you weave the character's feelings into their actions. Your writing style also makes it a smooth read. One thing is just there are a few missing quotations, punctuations, and small grammar mistakes. Love to see more!"
DDRead
"I’m enjoying the plot and the descriptive writing. I’m looking forward to finding out more about Elementals and see where it takes Cora."
My POV
"There are two things which make this book interesting are the plot and the way of writing. A strong mysterious vibe is felt while reading the book, and the writing style of the author makes it more flourishing. A book with potential"
Coral
"I enjoyed the world created, and I think this author has a lot of promise. I look forward to more. I think once this gets edited and the grammar errors are corrected it will be even more enjoyable then what it already is. I can't wait to read more."
Nice plot and great sense of setting up a scene
"I like the scene, which you tried to create, I am able to feel myself being there, sitting as the main character and able to feel what its like."
