What is your opinion?
Amazing
"I love the plot of the story. It is very intriguing as well as the protagonist, Jill. I also liked the ominous and curiosity that is evoked to the reader. The author is very successful in showing the badass nature of the protagonist and all the elements of fantasy fits perfectly. I can't wait to read more. Keep it up author."
Amazing Read
"I enjoyed reading this action packed story. I love it when the main character of the story is a strong and smart woman. I read the second book, and the world you created is fascinating, with humans and fairies working together against evil. I'm pretty sure the first book explains how the humans were kicked out of the fairy world. The powers the fairies and Jill possess are very cool. I like the character Jill and her family's story. I don't want to give anything away. It shows that Jill will do anything for her family. Her relationship with her parents is lovely. I also like the humor thrown in there, especially the Spanish dialogue, haha. Your writing is also interesting, you have a combination of telling and showing in the story. You tell the story, but then you add the fight scenes, and I'm able to picture them like a movie scene. If you concentrate on showing, the story will be longer, but it will also give the reader a more personal feel of the scene. But you do both great, Great job. I look forward to reading the first book, and the future book, to see what happens to Jill and her family. Great work!"
Superb!
"I really loved how the story begins. The future self talking is very unique and out of the box. The plot of the story is also very appealing. Jill is a great girl and the way the character is written is just amazing! Good job author! Thanks for sharing :)"
Magnificent
"Your writing style is so good. I loved the plot and how it developed and sure convinced me to read the previous books. Even though it took me some time to read the whole thing, I do not regret it. Why? Because your writing skills are just perfect. Though I believe I should read the previous in able to understand the plot even more. I won't lie, I am not used to this story category but I am very happy that I read yours. You have so much talent. I really think it is perfect. PS I loved Jill throughout the whole story no matter what. Very very good job. Continue and please never stop because I think we all deserve to read such a perfect written story. I bet all your books are just as perfect as this one. I'll go check and I am sure I won't regret it. I highly recommend it. This is iconic and so well written! "
Amazing
"I really loved the plot and the characters. Your story is amazing. Keep it up"
Girl with sword = freaking awesome
"This story is awesome!. this ties in perfect with your other story. Jill is a very cool girl. not only that, but this girl kicks ass with her sword and all the other awesome things she can do. I know you haven't finished writing this story, and i haven't seen any reviews, so I am gonna to be the first one and say "GREAT JOB!!". Jill is like someone out of a comic book. This girl is deadly even though she seems like a nice girl who has suffered a lot with the loss of her mom and the way the story tells about her life. it is nice to see a new angle. i always did wonder what was the girl from the future was doing during the incidents of Wild Knight Adventures, since she does appear in the other story, but we only see a bit of her. Keep on writing man!"
Wild Knight Adventures
"I've read 5 chapters of the book (skipping around slightly so I can get a good concept of your style), and I do like the plot. Admittedly, it's not really the genre I'd gravitate to, but you put a badass heroine in anything and I'm immediately on board. I was a little confused though - and maybe more context for this is given in the first book - as to, culturally, where this is all taking place. Her name, Jill, is a common English name and she says "wanker" which makes me think she's British. But then the cover shows her in what is a clear anime style and it seems they're (I'm assuming) speaking Japanese to one another. So... Where is this taking place? Is she a Japanese girl living in Britain? Or a British girl living in Japan? I'm a little confused - I think that needs to be fleshed out a bit, or perhaps I missed it since this is a sequel. I also think this suffers from some showing vs. telling, especially in the first chapter (0) where you give us a run down of basically everything. I'd rather that have been slowly revealed, unless it's a recap of the first book, but if that's the case, the reader, generally, will have read that, so you don't need it. Focus on letting the reader come to certain conclusions, especially since it's 3rd person POV, your narrator should be unbiased. Describe the actions and the characters feelings and let the reader decide for themselves who is "evil" and who is "good" - it'll be much more engaging that way, I think. Overall, though, I like your action scenes. I'm pretty horrible at writing them so kudos to you for doing it since I avoid them like the plague as a result of my ineptitude with it. Good job and keep it up! :)"
Great Concept!
"The going back in time to save the future trope is of course not new, but from what I've read you've got a very good start. I read the up to the end of the second mission and I love how well she gets on with her Dad, having good relationships with your parents is important for characters. The only slight problem I have is that you have almost too much description. There isn't too much dialogue, and you give a lot of background. This can be overwhelming for the reader. Keep up the good work! Sofia."
Very interesting
"Very enjoyable fictional fantasy novella! Nice fairy civilization with their own conflicts. Every character has their own story to tell."
