The Experiment

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17 chapitres lus

8 janv. 2021

Reviewed till chapter 4

"Amazing first impression. The book cover is so lovely. Of course with this little reading of this book I wasn't able to figure out the message you wanted to deliver. Still I was intimated with the book and find it just perfect. Without giving away too much of the story you hold the suspense and thrill till the end of the chapter. Amazing mix of mystery and science fiction. You have excellent character building skills. Also, grammatical skills and technical skill have nothing wrong with them. They just made the reading more fun and engaging. Lastly, I would say that this book deserve to be best seller!"

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Crimson McLenstill

14 chapitres lus

9 juin 2020

The Experiment

"I love it the plot is great and i think that this really deserves being read especially by people who aren't on this app and this encourages me myself and i to writ it is just.... No real word could ever describe this work of magnificently fine writing and the plot just transforms from this on the run teen to this amazingness also i have a book call "Ideas" which isn't really a book but it's ideas (like the title) for books that are based in the future for people. Also there should be a sequal from this about life after the experiment if they survive."

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Yourfavmango

0 chapitres lus

17 mai 2020

Amazing

"Just read a few chapters of this book, but it was definitely interesting and unique. I have never read any book on Deviants and considering this to be the first time, I was generally intrigued. Katrina comes across as a very strong portrayal of empowerment and courage, and that seems very good until now. The descriptions in every scene are realistic enough to hook the reader for more time, especially the cliffhangers, you're providing with. An extremely nice book would recommend to other readers, as well."

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L. K. Peyote

0 chapitres lus

15 mai 2020

The Experiment

"Wow...just wow...it definitely deserves to be read..."

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Marina 👻

9 chapitres lus

14 mai 2020

Very entertaining!

"This book has kept me engaged from the very beginning. There’s plenty of action but there’s also a good and detailed plot going on as well. I also like the characters and how they are developing as the story goes on. Overall it’s been a really good read and I can’t wait to see why happens next! "

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Meticulous Rice

0 chapitres lus

13 mai 2020

interesting!

"I found the book very intriguing and I really loved how you put the ideas together, no overflow of ideas or cramped up chapters. quite a captivating story and summary. Your vocab's make the story all the more interesting and I absolutely love your book cover. It also really reminds me of divergent!!"

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0 chapitres lus

13 mai 2020

Amazing

"This novel was amazing and error-free. It was a page-turner and it was so captivating. There's a unique storyline, as well as, well-characterised characters in the story. The summary of the story was also written well because it made readers want to read on. Plus its compelling title and cover made me love and enjoy this novel. The Experiment was well-written and well-edited by the talented author--Ellie. Five stars!"

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Emroad Foxy

1 chapitres lus

10 mai 2020

good book

"xd im just a 8 year old idk how to write a rating but its a good book AND BOOKS DONT REVEL YOUR SELF if you didnt know she has two accounts"

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5 chapitres lus

9 mai 2020

Awesome story and talented writer

"You are a very gifted writer. Your chapters were faultless, and I can’t wait to read more! I can offer only limited feedback, because I personally couldn’t find fault. Chapters/plot: Your chapters flowed effortlessly, with interesting dialogue, interactions, and plot twists. Each word in every sentence had earned its place, and is a mark of a well polished story. You have a great prose, with just the write mix of exposition, and description. Without giving too much away to your readers, your plot is unique and pulls you in from the first chapter. I came across no sections that made me want to skip ahead - you had me for the duration! The only feedback I can offer is on the blurb. The blurb could be helped by removing the questions posed (surprised/feel fear) and allowing it to focus just on who the character is, the conflict, and the stakes. "

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Bookworm123

0 chapitres lus

8 mai 2020

cool book

"I read this book and it was really good. I really like it,"

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0 chapitres lus

9 août 2019

Wow

"I read your other book The Tale of the King and it was amazing so when I saw that you posted another book, I came and check it out, it it didn't disappoint! If anything, I like the plot even more than the other one! -P.S. I love the cover!"

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Ellie

3 chapitres lus

4 août 2019

An Amazing Book

"In case you haven't realized yet, you can write a review for your own book!"

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Isabela

11 chapitres lus

21 mai 2020

Unique and creative plot

"Let me start by saying I am loving the story! The descriptions are thorough and clear, the story is really creative and unique, and the plot got me hooked from the first chapter. And your writing style is great! I only had a problem with the way that sometimes things move too fast and some details don’t seem to make sense. Like how Dean becomes the leader without any discussion, how 20 teenagers can build two villages in a month, or how all of a sudden everybody is killing each other just because of Dean."

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Khalesi_7

0 chapitres lus

7 août 2019

GAME OF LIES

"OBSESSED with the cover of this novel! The clever wording of the subheading had me hooked. For anyone who is a fan of 'The Society' I recommend you read this book, the plot line is interesting and I can't wait to see what happens!. Grammar: Great grammar and punctuation as well as the use of sophisticated writing techniques. Wording: At times the story could get a little bit too descriptive, sometimes less is more. Structure: It is hard to develop a sense of structure from the first chapter but in terms of the set out rather than plot, try to slow down the pace in certain areas in order to develop characters and ideas better. Cover: Nothing constructive to be said! LOVE LOVE LOVE! A very clever and alluring cover page."

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