What is your opinion?
I'm speechless!
"Whoa, what a spine-chilling terrific suspense thriller! I was literally at the edge of my seat this whole time I was reading this story. The plot and the writing style are damn awesome that I don't even mind the few grammatical mistakes or a few wrong uses of words here and there. They don't even make any mark on my brain while I chew on my nails with my eyes darting across the screen, taking in the horrors of the scene. Just get some editing done and it will be perfect. I hope you write more such short stories and then maybe publish them as a collection. Great work! Keep it up."
My Review
"First off, great plot!! This story hooks you in right from the beginning. The author truly shows you how psychotic someone can be, and it leaves shivering all by yourself. As someone who doesn't read this genre very much, this story was really refreshing and unique leaving me to want to read more and more. With a mixture of mysterious characters and wild personalities, this story keeps you at the edge of your seat."
Thrilling and mysterious!
"I’m speechless of how the author makes it to unfold gradually the psyche of his creepy character 😁 The suspense is ongoing! You just can’t stop reading it! It makes your heart pounding furiously! Is amazing how the story bewilders you but grasp you in that mysterious and intriguing atmosphere! Great job! Amazing full of awe! "
Poetic and lyrical
"This story captivated me from the first sentence. From a tale of love and obsession, it's almost poetic as you read on. Stunning writing style, grammar and overall plot. Thrilling and left chills down my spine!"
It’s written in the best way it can be
"This was really captured in a disturbed, chilling manner and I read the whole story sitting at the edge 😨. I was feeling like I am also present there. You have written it the best way you could 👍🏻. I really enjoyed it -👌🏻"
Captured so well
"This was really well captured in a dark, chilling manner and I wanted to carry on reading sat at the edge of my seat. The length is perfect for a commute read. There were a few minor grammatical issues but over all really really good and love how it’s written."
You are just mine
"I want more...😢😢"
You Are Just Mine!
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Creepy and Captivating
"Damn! I was like 'WTF is going on! But that made me want to continue reading, obviously :)! It's a bit confusing in the beginning, I guess because there's not really a setting or any kind of information about the context, but that does drive up the intense speed. I assume it's a reflection of the character and in that opinion, I think you portrayed him nicely. My heart is actually beating like crazy from the suspense!"
Great Start!
"I really love the plot line to this, the whole obsession and infatuation reminds me a little of “You” by Caroline Kepnes (in a good way) but this is completely original. I think that perhaps getting an editor could help you out a lot as there are quite a few grammatical errors that make some of the sentences confusing to read. I will continue to read and can’t wait to see where it goes! "
You Are Just Mine!
"A nice, yet haunting short story. I enjoyed it, however I wish the plot was more developed and wasn't a same cycle of calling and killing, calling and killing. Yet, I thought this was an interesting perspective on a psychotic killer. With grammar- I noticed a few mistakes which is fine because I still could understand the story. It came down to mistakes such as "?!?!" which emphasizes a point, but ultimately makes the story look a little unprofessional. I like this book, because it reminds me of the Netflix show "You".... overall good job!!"
You are just Mine!
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You are just mine!
"Short and straight to the point, this is a story about a psychotic obsession that owned my attention from the first paragraph. I found a few grammatical errors, but you barely notice it because the mind becomes so focused on the story itself. Overall, amazing! You have talent with your amazing style of writing and I hope you build on it and become even greater!"
