What is your opinion?
Never read anything like this
"I've never seen or read any books like this as of yet. It's so different and unique I love how the author describes every detail. Definitely something I'd love to continue reading! "
Very unique and interesting story
"The story is interesting from the first page. Filled with lots of twists and turns, interesting plots and it gave me the feel of old magical, adventure films I used to watch as a child - a group of friends (some found on the way in their quests) stumbling along, getting in further trouble on the way, meeting more characters that we'll either love or hate until they find "the bad guy" and defeat him (or her in this case). Even though it's of an older time, it's written in a modern way. I also like it when books introduce characters who I dislike until later on after they've grown as people and then on me, which is what this story has done. I haven't read a book quite like this one, it was interesting and a good story line to follow. There were a few typos that I noticed (but even the most well-known books have those). Apart from that, it was a great read. Well done on your achievement and on a good story!"
great plot
"this book has a great idea or more likely it can give the reades some unique tastes of a world."
Review
"Overall amazing!! if i were to simply go into the nitty gritty, 2 things that slightly bother me. Firstly, you have a habit of starting some of your sentences with 'And' and 'But' which doesn't sit right with me personally. i know there's that whole thing where an english teacher would say to never start a sentence with either of those but many authors do so at the end of the day thats up to you. Secondly, you only really use very short sentences. It's not good to have run-on sentences but its nice to have mix between short sentences and longer ones rather than only really short ones. But honestly, in many ways this is my personal POV so if you don't agree than that's perfectly fine."
Sange, Savage
"Wow, that first chapter was a massacre alright. Who are these men who dare invaded her village?! Well I like Lilliane, she's sweet. Good so far! Some grammatical errors but all in all, don't stop writing. :)"
Amazing
"I love the natural flow and the level of detail the writer provides. Both the male and the female characters have a lot of potentials, especially Lilianne, with her uppity royal attitude. I can't wait to see how their relationship develops throughout the story."
Amazing
"I read quite a bit of the first chapter of the book, the use of detailed words, and describing the surroundings and the feelings of the character were amazing, I see this book going very far!"
I like it
"I like it, I see how well it's growing well. it's one of these stories where we all see something special in it and I truly mean it, This could become published someday."
Sange
"The story is developing nicely. It is interesting till now. At times there seem to be a few errors similar to the ones in chapter one. However if ignored its quite enjoyable. The scenes depicting violence really evoke fear. Just as they should. You can also visualize a few of them. Keep wriring."
Amazing
"I really liked your attention detail and the plot. The story seems extremely interesting and grabbed my attention. The adventure in this story really shows out and I enjoyed reading it."
Pretty good so far.
"The opening chapter open up pretty well. I like stories that show action quite early on as I feel I get immersed up in the story before I find out what the story is even about. It's easy to follow and understand what's going on and you describe things quite well. I noticed a few minor misspelled words here and there, but it doesn't disrupt from the story. I'm aware it's not finished, so I don't know were the story is going in terms of a full plot, though what I read so far, this had potential in being a pretty good story. Good job so far and I hope things work out for the author in making this into a full book. "
Great!
"I’ve completed reading the first chapter, and it has me wanting to keep going. The beginning was fast paced, and kept me engaged in the world the writer painted. It is definitely something worth reading. I look forward to seeing this book in it’s entirety. The writer has a unique, and captivating writing style."
Extremely Good plot!
"Okay I’m glad i read Your book I only read The First chapter but i Can already tell that it’s amazing. I mean Like THE PLOT Your writing style is very Good and very describtive. It gives a lot of details that makes The story come to life. Your characters has a Good depth and is interesting to follow. The only thing i could be a little confused about is The identity of The main caracter. Like man Or woman. But at The same time it’s Nice with a little mystic. You have a great story and plot, Your writing is perfect, Your only flow in my eyes is that i belive that You Can make Your caracters more mystic and beliveable. For example The Beauteful blonde lady at The start. I know she was suposed to be a hysterical lady but Your choice of words made her Sound a little too cliche. Dont misunderstand Me, she gets just The right depth later on but The First impression is very strong and doesnt match her fighting skills. I hope it makes sense, Sorry I’m not that Good at explaining. But I really Like it! Please keep on🙏❤️"
Good concept
"The story has a good concept, but I feel that in some chapters the story turns confusing. I would have liked that the time in which it takes place would have been clearly stated in the beginning. I found that in some chapters the story gives the idea of being taken place in a medieval time, but in others I saw parallels with modern concepts. Aside from that, I think the story has great potential. "
There’s a lot going for it!
"This is an intriguing story. The beginning honestly confused me a bit and for a while I was thinking, “I don’t even know this characters name. But the setup is very clever in making you interested it trying to find that out. There are a few grammar errors that the author has expressed they are fixing. Over all I think this story has a lot of potential, just need some fixing and it will be great!"
Not my genre, however...
"The author definitely has talent and that is displayed here very nicely. The plot is interesting, the characters likable, and it's easy to follow. I bet with some fine tune editing, this could have a shot with an agent. That said, the writing style is very on and off for me. Again, this is a talented writer, but there are telltale signs that they are also a beginner.. Extensive use of adverbs, very long and sometimes clunky paragraphs, dialogue that flows here but not there, the use of colons and semicolons, and expositional writing (meaning there are moments where the story seems to stop just to explain something). These can all be ironed out with more practice, no problem."
My view on the book
"The book is very well written. The grammar is very much on point. The plot however is not really my cup of tea. "
What a fighter!
"What an exciting book! The descriptions and details you will encounter in this book are unreal! It will make you feel like you are literally present. The author who writes this book is very talented and has created a wonderful world that will suck you in. Sange is an engaging character and allows for all sorts of twists and turns. The book is currently undergoing editing, but none of the mistakes and changes will deter a reading experience. That author is very kind and open to listening to feedback (even welcomes it) and although the story is brilliant, your opinions are not unnoticed as you read as well."
Great Story
"I love your imagination. You did well creating a plot and keeping mystery of who the hero truly is. I saw the growth in your writing which was a treat. Your chapters were too long and too discriptive. While the characters interacted you used "sigh" "aghm" in stead of "Sange sighed in frustaration" for example. I was a bit bothered by that, however later in the book, you stopped using those discriptions. Chapter 11 was an improvement from length and dialogue. I loved how you introduced each character and how you grew the bonds slowly. Over all the story has grown beautifully and I can't wait to see what happens next."
Intriguing story
"It's seems like a fun story so far. The beginning wasn't very pleasant, but cutting up deer never is. Good read, bad memories, that stuff stinks as much as it is gross to watch. lol. Very detailed, felt like i was there watching. I'm definitely going to read more, and i would recommend it for a nice read. The punctuation could use a lot of work, need more commas, and the grammar could have a look see. But that aside, as I said in title, intriguing story. And don't worry about the length of your chapters. Chapter length is up to you. I hope this helps."
