What is your opinion?
Superb!
"I had been following your stories for some time now and I couldn't imagine a book with such vivid descriptions as this story! I never wanted it to end! If this book were in bookshops, I would purchase a copy for myself! You have the knack to not only tell the story, but able to describe it in such a way that I hated it to end. I have already put it on Social Media for others to know they must read this, and I have a few who would definitely enjoy this story. Not once was I bored. You kept the pace so well that I cannot express further that this book should be shared and published. You have touched me with this story, and I don't mention it lightly. You have a gift. Use it. And if there are ever more to come, you have just earned yourself a new fan! Well done! It's been an exciting and enticing piece of literature. Keep it coming! Your attention to detail stands out incredibly. You have what it takes to become GREAT!"
UNIQUE AND MAGICAL
"The story started off on quite a spin, the blurb was awesome and the beginning profoundly engaging. As I read more and more of it, I realised that the story is a bit like idk, a magical, supernatural spiral that never ends, we see new characters come and go, new magic powers and visions and it's a lot to take in right away but it saturates well with the rest of the plot the deeper we delve. The characters are funny and their relationship is sometimes quite troublesome, but mostly hilarious. Very unique in every way, although it gives me flashbacks from some movie scenes, I can't tell whether you go inspiration from those or not. Inspiration does come subconsciously from many places, so I don't mind. The book is wow! However, there is still a place for improvement, like when you jump from present to past and things like that. I'm also working on my tenses, so I recognised it immediately. With a bit of work here and there, it would work out great. Other than that, this book needs to be published right now, it's original and traditional-style so it would be perfect! Can't wait to read more from you :)"
Aquarius Review
"A great story told with some gifted characters full of charm wit and ingenuity! Never a dull moment with this group of mischief makers! "
Aquarius
"Welldone Author... I’ll be expecting more of this book from you... it’s really descriptive and amazing.. even though I’m still on the 6th chapter, I know I need to leave a review. "
Just Wow.
"Just wow. An amazing story, wonderful and magical descriptive passages and characters which I found myself rooting for instantly. Brooke is interesting, Johnny is fun and I feel like I could really get inside the head of Nessa. As a fan of the bildungsroman novel, this story is a testament to the wonders of growing up and it is a beautiful tale, well paced and brimming with adventure."
Descriptive!
"I love how descriptive this book is! I feel like I can see exactly what the characters are wearing and each character has their own personality that I can easily feel and read as well! I don't like to play favourites but Nessa is definitely in my list! I cant wait to read more updates!"
