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The exit plan

"Thank you for sharing your writing. This was written perfectly to show the sides of people and never knowing what someone might be going through in their lives "

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great story!

"hey mate, nice work there and great conversations. I also noticed that its your first story here...just like me, I hope to see another story from you. The "Turn off the lights" contest looks great!"

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Intriguing

"This is an extremely interesting read. Though the author needs to work on the grammar part which I am sure they will fix it during editing. Overall, great book"

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Poetic

"This isn't typically my genre, but after the 1st chapter I was hooked! The author does a great job of sucking you in. She is very poetic with her writing and so descriptive. I love will's character and how you really feel like you're going through his feelings with him. Great job author keep going!"

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Brave

"I would like to give you credit for writing a story and making the MC the anti-typical hotshot writer tend to use. I love that you are using normal everyday individuals with normal everyday feelings and hardships. It brings light to the kids who are bullied. I loved that about this book. Despite all the negative appearances, the guy is human and has the same thoughts and emotions as the Hotshot guy. With that said, I like the story, but I am a bit confused about how teenagers in your world are able to do just about anything they would like to do, like get married and fly off to a honeymoon in the middle of a school year. I love how you did not end the book in a happily ever after and a tragedy for the MC. You showed that a marriage doesn't always turn out and you gave the ordinary guy a chance at redemption. Keep up the good work!"

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The Exit Plan

"The story has all the makings of a great read. It is written very well, both in language use and description. Kudos to you. Best wishes, Shobana"

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Wow!

"The writing style is very captivating and vivid. It's very easy to imagine everything. The descriptions are very nice, too. It seems Will is trying to come around with the terms of losing someone you love. He then has to get over the guilt of falling in love with someone else. What he feels, I somehow feel it too. Great story!"

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A lovely read

"Wow! This story is so differ from anything I've read. I really loved the settings and the attention to detail you've done with this. The characters were described so well and by the end, I felt like I personally knew them somehow. Great work!"

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Great

"I really enjoyed reading the book. The whole idea is something refreshing after reading a lot of disappointing books. I would suggest only to add a better cover because the story is too good and also needs an equally beautiful cover. Also the pace was better than other stories so i liked tht too. Love, sruthi 💕"

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Amazing!!!

"I finally finished reading your story. I was very confused at first not being able to follow what is who n where. But i waited patiently and it was a treat. I loved how you descriptively wrote the chapters and scenarios, but if you would like to make it short that will be really grate. I was hooked pretty well. You put really good punch lines in between hats off for that. the plot proceeded slowly, but that is your writing style. Overall i liked it better than most of the books. Good, grammar was good too. I need to take lessons from you on that. ;-) ;-) Overall a good pacakge!!."

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A pleasure to read

"I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Its not usually the genre that I go for, yet the attention to detail and exciting characters kept me going. I look forward to reading more of your work."

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Interesting

"The author has done a great job at showing the reader emotions especially with the intricate descriptions. It’s a fresh perspective of love and the prologue just interest me the moment I read it. Besides a couple of grammatical errors, the story was easy to read and comprehend."

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Gripping

"You come into this story with GREAT suspense. There’s the perfect amount of confusion as you see the two characters interact with each other over their subject. You can tell their responses were written carefully to be give just enough but not too much. It leaves you at the end of just the prologue asking for more. I admire your writing style and can’t wait to read further into this book. Keep up the good work!!! 💖💖💖💖"

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My thoughts on this book.

"I just started reading this book. And, it’s for sure going to be read again. Not only did the first few chapters catch my attention. But, the interesting summary did as well. This story has a great layout. Strong grammar. It’s efficient of getting the points across and The plot of this story is something worth talking about. Keep up the good work and I most definitely will be reading the rest of this story and more works that you produce. "

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Wow! This story is amazing. The prologue alone was just enough to draw my attention to the whole story. Nice work.

"Amazing story"

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AMAZING

"The setting of the story is completely new to me. Never read any book set in South Africa or been to South Africa but the writer's vivid description gives me an insight into life there. The issues that are pointed out by the book like racism, body positivity, puberty and what it does to one are tackled in a manner that assures you the writer wrote while thinking of how a teenager would react. Simply amazing!"

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exit plan

"okay i know i just started reading it but its addictive, i am on ch 7 and i love the diff POVs. i wanna know how its gonna end tbh"

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Awesome!

"I loved the different points of view of this book! The plot is captivating and made me want to keep reading. I did think there were parts where parts were taken too fast and it should have been slowed down, but other than that I REALLY like it and want to read more. "

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The Exit Plan

"The start is really good with the plot you are leading us on. The story is really good."

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legit

"A legit book that seems good. You seem to have done your research. Good"

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