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A total charmer!

"This book! This book was a lot of emotions to be honest. Funny, romantic, heartbreaking, to be precise it was a roller coaster. And I was glad to be a part of it. The author's writing style is so vivid that I could literally feel myself standing there. Through every little picturesque. I loved the book despite not being into the genre much. There were a few grammatical errors but that can be fixed with editing. So nothing to worry. Great job author! Keep it up! ❤️❤️"

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GREAT ❤❤❤

"Amazing book..😍😍😍... everything is well written and the characters are so loveable...well some...the plot is so captivating...and the chemistry...yes...i would most definitely recommend to any and every one"

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Extraordinary Tale

"Thank you to the author for writing this book. The author has a magic with words. The vividness of every scenes has been expressed so beautifully that you can't help it but fall in love with this novel. It mentions recent on going topic. It is not a traditional Cinderella story. Nor a boring story of two roommates. You are going to get invested into reading it if you start once. So what are you waiting for? Dive right away! I swear you will fall in love with the characters. The sarcasm and humour will have you all giggling. Overall it was a great read where I felt all the kinds of emotion. This book deserves a perfect sturdy 10 on 10 🤩🤩"

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Love it!!!

"This book is amazing!!! Love everything about it 😍 thank you for this amazing book❤️🔥"

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Promising Start

"As my title suggests, this is a promising start not only to the story but to your journey here on this platform and as a writer. The premise of the story itself is quite promising with easily recognizable characters like Amy and even Adam who readers can not only relate to but liken to people in their lives. There’s a lot of heart at the core of this story and your natural story telling ability shines through. That being said there are quite a few grammatical and sentence structuring errors that somewhat interfere with an otherwise great story. Those things are nothing a good proofreader can’t fix. I enjoyed the piece as a whole and can’t wait to see more from this story and your future work! Well done. "

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Walls Of Fire

"BDSM, is that a Kardashian fashion thing? LOL, luv it! Really great story, just a bit of syntax issue. Can't wait for more. 🤩"

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Great work!

"Just first chapter into it and I'm loving it! Amazing work💥💕😃"

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Xérès Éveillé

"This book is certainly a spin on the traditional romance stories that have a similar plot and that made it even nicer!"

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"Amazing book😍"

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Nothing to Complain🤩

" Not a kinda a reader who reads the first chapters and jumps to the review section. You will get many here 😅 Here is my feedback:- I'm on Chapter 3 only so it is a bit early to give a review. I have read the book twice till now. It is hard not to express how much I am loving this book. Girl you got me nuts at Ian Somerhalder part. God! I had a huge smile on my face. Adam is a douche!!!😠😠 Amy is like me...a clumpsy bag LMAO Can you update faster? I'm dying to know how phone call is gonna be. #Recommended"

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Love it....

"I love the plot. Although, I don't like stories with sad endings but this one is definitely an exception. I do live the flow of the story and the chemistry between the main characters. I would live to see where this story goes. The story just reminds me of candy crush....😁😁 I got all hooked up and I can't wait for the next update. On first seeing the book cover, I thought it was something cliche. Then i read, and I would say it not something cliche to me but something close to reality. Honestly, I am a bit embarrased by the fact I judged the book by its cover. Well, the book is sure going to be one of my few favourites. Good job, by the way! 👍👍👍👍"

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Well done so far

"Good job author 👏The flow of the story is good, the plot - intriguing and I can feel the chemistry between the 2 central characters. Also, the affection for Amy is visible and I can sense her sorrow and her despair. And, although we were warned this story will not have a happy ending, I really hope they will solve their problems in the end. What can I say ? I just love a happy ending 😍😊"

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Must Read

"I am not fond of cliche romantic novels where the Mc is weak and then we have badboys and extraordinary unwanted drama which bring the lovers together but this book is different. I have a crush on my doctor because of which I found this relatable...hahaaa. You have me all blushing. James is being excess sweetness as I can see and I love the plot already. The topic is fresh and plot looks promising. Eagerly waiting for the next update. All the best for you works👍"

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Cute

"Very cute and unexpected. The grammar needs some work, though. Besides that it is an enjoyable story. "

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Walls of fire

"It’s not a bad story! It need some work, but over all I liked it!"

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Calm before STORM

"I love the way it starting. Story is amazing as well as complicated. Love it. Thnx Author for the story."

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Walls of fire

"Amazing book"

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Walls of Fire

"I love the way you convey your story. The first chapter felt a little bit 2D to be honest, but thereafter , from the second one I was able to connect. ❣️❣️❣️ In an Overall view, I like your book. Since I am not too much into erotica, if the upcoming steamy chapters are what can I continue to read , then I will surely do continue to read the chapters. Grammar is something I can't judge. I am waiting for how the plot is going to unfold.😊"

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Walls of Fire

"I am captured with this chemistry that is building. Work on the grammar and dialogue a bit. Add more show of the scene too. Keep writing!!!"

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