What is your opinion?
Interesting story
"The plot intrigues from the very start. I like the fact that the author makes a lot of gaps in chapters making it easier to read."
Very Unique
"The plot itself is very unique and intriguing. I love the names you use in your story as well! I think maybe break down your paragraphs a bit better and fix a bit of the dialogue and you’ll be all good! "
A journey of fajro
"Its very good book love the characters and way they joke and care for there queen"
Interesting!
"Quite an interesting story with great characters :)"
A Journey of Farjo
"I am intrigued by the world-building you have set up for this story. I am eager to see more—fair use of the first-person narrative. You rarely see that in most fiction books. As for the main character, while I find their backstory riveting, I did find myself a little confused about when the MC was talking and when your other characters were speaking. I had reread just a little too understand. On another note, there were a few grammatical errors, but nothing too severe that takes the reader out. Even with these few critiques, A Journey of Farjo is an excellent read, and I encourage anyone who enjoys this type of fantasy to give it a read. Please continue to provide the author with support and feedback for this piece."
Love it.
"Wow ok need more!!!!! Like now....."
I liked it
"Nicely writen, all thow it repites it self with the thoughts of the carracters i engoyed it. It is colorfull and interting i realy haven't noted grammer mistakes. "
Intriguing
"This book is perfect for fantasy lovers as it just has fresh content. The storyline, the plot, and the characters are also developed in a beautiful way. However, there were some unanswered questions regarding the MC. Also, not to mention the frequent grammatical and punctuation errors. But that's nothing to worry as it can be fixed with proofreading and editing. Other than that, I believe the author has done a pretty good job. All the best!♥"
A Journey of Fajro
"This is a paranormal book dealing with vampires. If you are fond of mystery, this one is for you. The character of the protagonist's father was kept as mysterious. Like why does he spend time with his child? How he dies? All these questions will arouse your level of curiosity to a greater extent. However, I do feel use of punctuations can make the book a great piece. Punctuations is an essential part, and throws an overall impact on the hook like how do you want your readers to read the lines. It helps in providing a better experience. In my opinion, a basic introduction like providing the physical appearance, name, or at least the sex of the protagonist can make the whole thing more interesting (to be honest, I was confused about the gender of the MC). You are doing great, but I think dialogues can be more smooth. You can proofread your work a number of times before publishing to avoid the mistakes. And, you can also check out books from very professional authors to get a better idea (best option). All the best in your journey!"
Beautiful !
"Your book is really good! I love your plot but u have a few grammatical mistakes but no problem it can be solved ! 👏🏻💗💯❗️❣️"
A Journey of Fajro
"The descriptions and details of the world are very vivid and give a clear picture of the characters and settings/environments. I like your unique use of words for describing people, their tone, and the setting. I would suggest shortening your paragraphs and fixing the minor grammar errors I spotted, (capitalization after commas followed by dialogue, more use of commas, and some misspellings). Keep up the good writing."
Interesting
"First, got to say I was confused because didn't expect to be a book about vampires, so got me a bit lost while reading the summary and then knowing about the story plot. its interesting really creative and grammar mistakes just a few they can be fixed. also, the writer used a really good way to capture you. I'm just halfway through but looks really interesting keep it up and Good luck!"
Good plot
"I liked the plot of the story. However, you should consider shortening your sentences and using punctuation to make it easier to read. The dragon character was a nice touch. With a good editing, your story could turn out great!"
Good plot
"I liked the plot of the story. However, you should consider shortening your sentences and using punctuation to make it easier to read. The dragon character was a nice touch. With a good editing, your story could turn out great!"
