What is your opinion?
Review
"First of all good start, you can immediately the main character and see the way she will be and act. My only advice here is the Paragraphs, try to make them at least six lines. so the reader can't get tired from reading a long paragraph. Also if you make it shorter it will help n your chapters. The story structure and flow are good, just a bit of change on the paragrpah and will be awesome. I didn't notice grammar mistakes and though the story is beginning it's still heading on a good direction. Kudos to you and keep it up1"
Feel
"Only 2 chapters have been written so far so it's difficult to truly judge and leave an accurate review but so far this seems to be headed in a great direction. The MC is relatable and full of fire. The plot is still vague at this point but the writing style was lovely. Overall, great job and good luck with the rest of this story!"
Great start
"There are only a few chapters, but I can definitely feel the beginnings of a great story. I love the main character, she is relatable and refreshing. I love your writing style, but there are a few grammar and punctuation mistakes (easily fixed and they don't take away from the story much). I'm excited to see where this leads!"
Intriguing
"An intriguing tale of self-discovery that is reminiscent of its title! This novel, though only two chapters in, is lush with profound feelings and complex emotions. I adored Madelaine's free-spirit and the resilience she displayed when standing up to her "friends". Also, the family dynamic later introduced adds an entirely new depth to the story that I appreciate. My only concern is the grammar, but it's nothing that renders your novel confusing and is easy to fix. Overall, this is a unique insight into the stereotypical 'popular girl'. Well done!"
