What is your opinion?
A lovely read!
"Romance isn't normally my go-to read, but this was a lovely short, simple yet sweet story! I love that the protagonist was very relatable throughout the story. You could probably add more depth to the guy to help the reader connect with them - for example, small little details on how he acts around the girl to tip off the reader to the ending. There were a few grammatical issues but nothing that made the story hard to read. All I would recommend is just checking sentence length. There's quite a few long sentences at the start which could be broken up a bit! Other than that, great little read. :)"
I totally fell in love with your story😍 soo short simple & sweetest one ❤️ . I would truly love to read it again n again untill I'll get my love😁😉❤️
"I loved it ❤️ n enjoyed the story as well. That's completely relatable to everyon's life almost."
Him
"This writer wrote very few words, but they were sweet and adorable."
cute!
"this is a really cute and adorable oneshot story by the author: )"
So sweet!!! 🥰🥰👍
"This is a sweet shorty story and I loved it!!! 🥰🥰 yes, the ending was predictable but it still doesn't stop the story from bringing a smile to my face and made me squeal. 😆🥰🥰 I also like the way you (Author) made the protagonist a beautiful and strong woman in her own way. And the fact that the guy wasn't the typical good looking popular guy but just a "guy with a beautiful smile"😁🥰🥰🥰💕 Author keep doing what you're doing because you're awesome! 👍🥰"
Him
"Loved it, and I hoped it was longer"
Him
"Short and sweet. "
Awwwwwwww❤❤❤
"Awwwwwww is all I can say. If you want to smile all day just read it. I haven't stopped smiling and my cheek hurts! I want something like this in my life! God!!!!! Its so damn cute😍😍😍"
It’s beautiful man
"Just a few grammatical errors but I’m not sure if English is a second language or what... it’s otherwise lovely"
Nice
"A short and sweet story. Its like the author explains a lot of things in a few words. The way he presented is remarkable."
Very compelling
"This is normally not the kind of story I'd read, but I was rentranced. Well done!"
Nice job
"So simple, yet so beautiful... great job ... you are only going to get better."
Soooooo Sweeeet!!!
"Beautiful and romantic!! Anybody can relate to it and reading it lifted my mood and put a smile on my face which is a great achievement!! It just needs some minor editing and it'll be super! 💜💜💜"
Little one Rockzz
"Your story is always admiring and cute. I love the way you showed girls power.... You made the girl character strong and stunning...Cool😎. Again loved your story and it is recommended to read... ❤"
Nice 👍
"Very sweet and cute 😊😀 A very good story, I loved it😀"
Sweet
"This is so sweet and simple...I love it...❤❤"
🥰 aww so sweet
"It was very sweet and I hope this isn’t the end of it. I loved it and I encourage you to write on, I’d like to know what happens in their relationship "
Good job
"I think it's a very sweet and cute story. You definitely have the skills of a writer. Yes, there is room for improvement but I think you are doing a great job. Grammatical errors are there but at the end of the day, the story is what matters the most. All the best, I hope you flourish as a writer💕💕😊😊"
Overall good
"Well sweet story about friendship turning into relationship...no much drama just straightforward and to the point... but I see you need to break the paragraphs in some places and also I found mixing up of tenses... Overall it was good...."
Great start!
"It's very Realistic and straight forward. You could work on the tense though because if it keeps changing midway it gets harder to connect. Great work overall and keep going!💕💕💕💕😉😉😉"
