What is your opinion?
Quite gripping
"Enjoyed reading this a lot. Excellent blend of paranormal and modern mafia stories."
Loved it can’t wait for more
"Great story that captures your imagination😊😊"
Loved it!
"I really enjoyed reading this book. I don't even have any pointers! It captired my attention from the start and the plot was very good. Good job ✨"
The Vampire's Unexpected Love
"Everything is great no complaints can't wait to read what happens next. Great writing."
This book is awesme
"I loved this story. It captures my imagination and shows emoitions a geart deal. Great job Gabriel."
Love
"I love this story so far. You get just enough information per chapter to get the idea why their love is so hard on both of them. "
Great
"Very interesting would love to read more "
The vampires unexpected love
"I like the story already, the plot of it is great. Punctuation and grammar is understandable and I already know I’m gonna love this story. And your writing style is great overall."
Needs a bit of improvement
"I like the author's writing style because her grammar and punctuation are really good. However, what frustrated me the most was the fact that her narration in certain scenarios is quite short. Always remember to 'show' your readers rather than just 'telling' them. Another small point that bothered me was the fast pace. The story feels really fast-paced in some parts. You might want to think about just editing it a bit. Lastly, I wish the character would be a bit more developed because it surprised me how easily the female protagonist gave in to the male protagonist who actually killed her parents. Mate bond or not, I expected her to process her emotions for a bit longer. But then again, I've read up to chapter 10 so far. I'm pretty sure the characters would develop by then. Until that happens, I wish the writer the best of luck because I know that she's really talented!"
(Chapter 1-2) An Erotic YA (if that's even possible)
"The start of the story jumps directly to how the main character met this sexy vampire. I think it would be better to strengthen your main character, make the readers understand her more, before instantly making Gabriel as the main focus of the story. Let us have empathy toward the main character, or the fairies first, make us think more about her dilemma, and show us the world they were living in. The tragic past, the good-looking man, and the fantasy are the classic formula of a YA novel, but since this is an erotica, I can see how you try to make it sexy most of the time. I have to admit that erotica is not my cup of tea, but the sprinkle of YA might be a good thing for readers like me. Keep it up! Regards, Kei Angelus"
An interesting idea struggling to get out
"The underlying theme of this novel - creatures of light (elves and fairies) and creatures of dark (vampires and werewolves) contending in what, I think, is supposed to be a contemporary society - has enormous potential. However, it is let down by lack of attention to detail. The leading characters are also well developed. I feel I know them and enjoy their interactions. However, I was not able to keep track of all the secondary characters. The world building confused me. Most descriptions pointed towards a modern day society (mobile phones, nightclubs etc.) and yet the main character works in a village blacksmith’s. I did, however, appreciate the detail of using fireballs to operate the furnace. The political structures of the two domains need to be developed further. Here, the ideas seemed to be invented as they were needed rather than being introduced gradually. And, finally, the whole work needs thorough editing. There are far too many basic grammar, language and consistency errors. - GN -"
The Vampire's Unexpected Love
"I have no taste for it and wind up my reading with hardly two and half chapters. It lacks interest and pulling of the reader and the writing style is also a bit wayward. Any way all the best and wish the author to get more readers!"
