What is your opinion?
Purple Pearl Eater
" This review pertains to the first two chapters only. You don’t want to mess with the law firm belonging to the inquisitive Amira, her identical twin Amara and the physically attractive Caleb. On the the surface the three fight against injustice of all kinds especially if it involves cheating children. But in reality their law firm hides their true identities and motives. In secret they are Werewolves who prefer to curb their appetites for human flesh at least for the time being. What they crave more then anything is to once again posess the purple pearl, a special jewelry that is necessary for their tribe’s continued survival. A rather unique werewolf story. I dare say I have never read a werewolf story quite like this one before. So far I haven’t encountered any love triangles which is kind of refreshing for this genre though this may change in the future. I admit I’m curious as to how the purple pearl will effect the three of them. The only way to learn the answer is to continue reading Fajitas intriguing story. "
Great Story!
"I really love the story plot, and I find it very unique compared to most wolf books. The characters are funny and likable, and the way the author writes makes it feel like you're there with the characters. Other than a few grammar mistakes, I thought the book was very enjoyable to read and well written. I'm excited to keep reading and plan to keep doing so all the way. Great job to the author! You should be very proud of the amazing story you created."
Amazing!
"I love the plot of the story! I love the characters as well, especially Amara and Amira. Kind of remind me of my little sister and I. Keep up the great work :)"
Refreshing Story Line
"I love the unique storyline! It's unexpected in a refreshing way and very creative. The characters laugh and argue like a real family, and it's easy to tell that they care about each other. Their humour, in particular, is hilarious. The setting is very unique and beautiful, as well. A little editing of the grammar and punctuation with something like Grammarly (free editing/proofreading website) will go a long way. I'm curious to know what will happen and how the story will unfold. Great job!"
Enjoyed
"I liked the premise it was certainly a different take on things. Yes it needs a good edit and the punctuation sorting but you know that. In the first chapter there was a lot of repetition and you need to show not tell. Other wise great job."
The lost pearl
"It's a very promising and well-written story. The plot is very intriguing. I was hooked from the beginning of the story. Great work."
Interesting Read
"The plot of this story is interesting and definitely draws the readers in. It leaves you wanting to know more, and find out what happens next. I have to agree with the other reviews about there being a few grammatical errors, but other than that this is a wonderful story. Well done!"
So far so good
"Okay, I absolutely love the plot of the story. I love the characters and description of settings. In fact, I love almost everything of the story. My only suggestion would be that you might want to distinctly indicate when the characters are having a monologue. Like, maybe use italics font to indicate it. It can make the readers a bit clearer. Also, there were some mix up of present and past tense so you might want to stick to one. Another thing is, I think you need to add punctuation marks at various places like commas, exclamation marks and such to make the story more interesting and give a clearer picture of the characters' tone of dialogues. Well, I hope this helps. I really loved your story and would be waiting for more! Good job!"
Nicely Done
"Ok let's start with the story. The summary is promising, and the story develops nicely, a little more of description and structure on the story would do some good. The intriguing mystery on what will happen caught your attention. Now for overall. I like the story has potential and the only thing i would advise would be separate the paragraphs from dialogue. Maybe make the paragraphs shorter four to five sentences. Grammar and punctuation need edit, which I don't mind but with the help of editing it will look better, Keep up the excellent work! XX"
The Lost Pearl
"This story shows a lot of promise so far. The characters and plot do seem unique. I don't read a lot of werewolf stories, but from what I have read, this is definitely different and unqiue. I applaud you on that. Having a unique story is a step in the right direction in attracting a lot of readers. From what I have read, there is quite a bit of grammatical, punctuation and other errors like that. Like when finishing dialogue, use a comma unless the punctuation for the final sentence is an exclamation point or question mark when followed by a dialogue tag. And using a quote inside dialogue uses the singular ' not the double dialogue one (forgot what it was called, I apologize) I suggest maybe using Grammarly or contacting someone to help you edit. Another tip, try showing more rather than telling. Developing a writing style can be difficult, but a tip is to analyze your favorite writers style and incorporate what you like about their style into yours to develop a unique style all your own. Also, nice hint of humor woven in there. You're doing a good job so far, and have crafted a good start to a story. Keep writing! You got this!"
