What is your opinion?
Thumbs Up
"This author did a great job of telling her story. she gave you the facts upfront and in a way that made it intriguing to the reader. I love how she introduced each character and how well the story flows. great Job."
Delightfully Dark
"I really liked how you described each character, and how you slowly (but not too slowly) introduce the backstory and facts needed for the reader. I really liked it. Keep up the good work."
ENTHRALLING
"The way the author described the characters were fascinating. Keep it up!"
A Blood Red Flower
"Eris Rozentilla was uniquely cursed. Born into a family of assassins she was carefully trained since birth not to have a conscience or to care about anyone but herself and her family. Most importantly, she was trained how to kill and in the most ruthless and efficient fashion. Yet despite her upbringing and all of it’s difficulty, Eris dreams of a better life. Feeling ashamed of her lack of feeling shame, Eris wonders if some where in the world there is a better garden. One where her sense of morality would be allowed to grow and flourish. The grammar was a bit different from what I’m used too. (It took me a while to understand that the words in bold were intended to be quotes and the rest of paragraphs was Eris’s inner dialogue. But I did eventually catch on.) This novel had a nice mafia feel. Reminded me of The Godfather a little bit. It will be interesting to see if Eris can escape her family’s murdeous ideals and discover the person she truly is inside. "
Flower of Death
"Your story is so intriguing and captivating. Completely different from other stories I've read before, which is why I love it more. The writer did a great job with piecing the characters thoughts together, the story is easy to understand and flow with. I'm intrigued with the introduction of the new character right from the beginning, I can tell there's more to him than meets the eye. Great job👍"
Flower of Death
"I love the concept, but everything is quite complicated and long-winded. There is a lot of detailed descriptions, with no real explanations why. For example, the first few chapters, are the exact same event from a different point of view, but you never actually tell the reader that the POV has changed. There is a lot of potential here though, so keep up the work, Sofia"
Awesome!
"I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. I love Eris's determination of her goal to achieve a better life. She dreamed of her future and a better life to escape her current one. I like how you woven the plot into the action and the description. There are some minor grammar mistakes that I think a little proofreading would fix. And another reason I'm scoring this as a 4 is that there wasn't as much action description that I had hoped there would be. But it still kept me entertained! Great job!! :)"
Good start!
"Very interesting concept! Reminded me a little bit of buffy at first in terms of how her family defines her and how she works through those feelings, but this was still unique in its own right. Bolding the dialogue was an interesting choice and put me off a little at first, but once I got used to it I liked it. And it straddles the line of being dark without going too far, which is hard to do but is done so successfully, at least to my tastes. Overall very good start and I can’t wait to see where it goes! :) "
3/5 ⭐️
"Although I enjoyed the idea of the plot and Eris's character, your poor grammar and writing style made it hard for me to really dive into the book. I suggest combing through the book and really doing some editing on that part. Some parts were written really well, but most of the time, it fell flat."
