What is your opinion?
Meeting You
"Too fast and too jumpy 🦋💕 Welp, that was my first impression of this book 📖❤️ However, I don't mind scenes that are kinda fast and jumpy, as long as I understood the story 😄💜 I've read a novel that was fast and jumpy too at times and I found no problem in reading it because the writer presented the story well 🦋❤️🦋 The same goes for this writer 👍💞 The writer presented his/her story well enough for me to understand it even though it's a bit jumpy 🤩🤩 Please don't change anything for this story, tho if you wanna edit the grammar and stuff then it's fine 💜❤️💜 However, please don't change the writing style no matter what ❣️❣️ I really love your writing style so please don't make any changes to that even if someone asked you to 😞😞😞😞 You're awesome and unique 🧡💛🧡 Keep writing and you'll definitely achieve something HUGE in the future 🤗💞✨ -Kookie 🍪💕"
Meeting you
"Great story! I loved the structure and development of the characters. I would say maybe a little more details on the characters would be even better. Some grammar mistakes but in all in all a great story. Great job"
Mysterious Roomate
"I love the plot of the story sounds like something I'd read cause I love ghost. Overall great story! You do have some punctuation errors and I would like to see more description. Like about the mom, dad, house, etc. But it is your story and whatever works best for you :)"
Meeting You
"Firstly I loved the plot of the story and the prologue was great. The story seems rushed and there isn't really much descriptions. I kind of got lost somewhere in the story but fortunately found my way back. As for November, what happened to her? I would like to know more about November and her backstory as she is the female lead after all. I really liked the story though and I think you are on the right path. Job well done. Will definitely continue reading this."
Nice start
"It was a really fun start. I liked the way you introduced characters and plot points. However, personally for me, I like to get to know characters by diving into the plot, not just planning stating it. Mainly because I find that boring. But other than that, I like where it’s going. Cute romance story!"
plot
"loved the plot it developed well and easy to follow"
Potential
"I gave you four stars because I would have liked more description of the characters. You have some errors try using a grammatical app. I think this will have great potential. We all have our writing style. I will finish the book, curious to see where this leads, and I will change my review once I see more chapters; there is only a few to go off of. "
Meeting You
"There are only three chapter but still it sound sounds interesting,I will definitely read it.👏👏"
Meeting you!!
"Hey. So I’ll be very honest. Good start. I like the theme of the story. However, story is super rushed, adding details to the character’s and scene would really help. ❤️ Personally, I couldn’t connect emotionally to the book ‘cause of lack of details and description. Too much is going on too fast. ( but it’s just a personal opinion, you don’t have to make the changes if you don’t want to ❤️😊) Good luck ☘️☘️"
Meeting You.
"I'm sorry for the ratings that I have given, and although they may seem harsh, I hope you understand the reasoning behind them. Your plot is unique, and I was looking forward to diving deeper into the story, but I feel as it has been poorly executed. I expected your story to be detailed, involving both narration and dialogue, yet I experienced something different. Your prologue intrigued me, but as soon as I read the first chapter, I was displayed with a story that compared to a diary of someone else's feelings. You have a consistent writing style yet there were many mistakes clear with your grammar and punctuation. To improve your grammar and punctuation, it may be worth having someone proofread your chapters before publishing. Proofreaders can find the areas you lack and suggest things to help your writing look more professional and detailed. Once again, I can only apologise for the review that I have given you, but I believe that it is better, to be honest. Your story has plenty of potential, and I wish you the best of luck."
