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Fate fi ds destiny

"It is a beautiful story for me, well planned and layed out. I love it"

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Cute story

"Cute story short but good story"

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Katalah nk kata apapun.kih kih

"Wahh a you're making meatballs again "

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Cute quick story

"Lovely story quite predictable but didn't take away from the feels. Happy I found it ☺️ "

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Fate

"Very nice and interesting peace of writing..."

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Fate

"Beautiful short story. That ending was great, I mean Fate ran away from her future husband, only to end up happy with him. Really enjoyed the story."

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Fate finds destiny

"I want to say this story should be told because it resonates with a lot of women from countries that force marriages on them, and I think the world should know the struggles these women face. I applaud you on this story. I love that your character chooses her own destiny and not what she is forced into. My best friend is from a country where she is told they have to marry a certain person, and I am so proud of her for taking her own path. Thank you for sharing your talent with us! 🥰🥰🥰🥰"

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Fate

"For some reason when I began reading this it reminded me of my first story. The cuteness and how she was paired with someone she hasn't met begin. This story is a romance with a touch of cuteness. Anyone interested in romance with squeezing love this is your story. Overall good, love the development and description of the story. The progress and flow it good, not rush. Very good author keep it up!"

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Love

"A great story. I enjoyed reading it. It was a like a breathe of fresh air to all the arranged marriage books out there. And let me guess I think Joseph is the guy she was supposed to get married to right? Any way hope you continue writing."

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Enchanting

"There isnt very much of this book up yet, but its amazing. I love the fairy tale element where the parents keep on referring to him as 'the prince.' And I love the relationships between the family members which are realistic and engaging. I can really feel Fate's fear about marrying someone she has never met. Keep up the stellar work! Sofia"

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Simple

"Good story"

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Joseph and Fate

"The story is cute. This is definitely for readers who are into "feel-good" romances that are comparable to Halmark movies. Although where the story has left off is a little disheartening, based on the feelings Jospeh and Fate had, I have a feeling they will meet again. I think the author may be new to writing because of the repetition along with the minor grammatical and punctuation errors. However it's not too distracting and is easily fixed once the author revisits the story. Overall, the work is very sweet. I hope she continues to write and update. "

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Love

"I love the book I will let you know "

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Rosy

"Too rosy and flowery, for people looking for a short sweet pleaser "

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Ghn9n.

"Thjuhvfftttfxdcgh"

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Fate finds destiny

"No offense but this book was terrible . I only liked the idea of it but unfortunately it was written poorly and developed even worse . I would not recommend this book to anyone and I sincerely believe this book is in dire need of editing . "

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